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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

thanks😳hey isliye mai naam nahi batana chahti thi😆u peeps r bad!😆



naah!!! before u told i read both of story of this writer..and i am really happy that u continue the story..but jara jaldi karo..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update hehe i am alsi to give big comment cholly
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update meera..but a big 1... beautifully written...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comment updated on pg 119
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

Comment updated on pg 119

finally😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

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awesum update...u described it very well
n abhay teaching pia 2 swim😍...wonder wen both will confess
evn misha understands evrything😛😆
n u potrayed their feelings very well😳
n loved the "cooking dal-chaawal" part😆😆
loved d pool part n d dialouges😳😛
cont. soon n thnx 4 d pm😃

thanks...yeah mish k paas bahut dimaag hai don't underestimate her😆u'll get update today!i wrote it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi_anya

awseome dr..vy well written👏👏👏 try to update soon 😃

thanks

@indu
thanks...glad u liked it,u have to wait to know what abhay does!

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

res-----EDITED-----Faroo update Meera specially swimming class haye koi mujhe bhi aise swimming lesson de de

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thanks snig!can't be true yaar...coz abhay ki classed toh koi aur enjoy kar raha hai😉

Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

meera just awsome update yar...
loved it every thing...thanks
abhay came here obivously 4 piya na...yup😆
liked misha and ruhi talk on abhiya...
piya really loved abhay even he tooo
yyy didnt he confess his love 4 piya...coz he's gadha😆lol
ufff tooo hawttt pool scene yar...
dal chawal hhehehehhehe
lovleu updtae...
cont soon


Originally posted by: Simi.Sweet

wowww chich really aweshomee!!!!! abhiya whr😍thanks chichtal..wow piya got a handome instructor!😆hayeee... misha was toh actually misha!!😆 the dialogues r actually like wat the character would say 👏👏when i was readng i cn imagine the charcters n the scene just awesome fantastic...aur abhay on rude boy mode (ofcourse😆)par cnt live a sec without piya hayee 😳yah...the pool wala cool romance toh 😍😍omg!...loving it continue chich!!😃😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

21-Dancing under the moon

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He closes his eyes as the flash back of her in his arms roams In his mind, laughing in joy, he swallows! whenever I see you or touch you I feel I am alive and tonight when you closed your eyes for a moment all I wanted is to pull you closer and kiss you and tell you how much I love you, but thank God I came back to my senses and backed off the closer I come to you the harder it is from me to deny my feelings and it hurts Piya!

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The next morning Piya was the first one from the gang to wake up, and dive in the pool, she was overly excited about her ability to swim, so she had an early light breakfast and then she jumped in, and practiced some more! None of her group were there yet, only some tourists.

So when Kabir and the rest came later they got surprised! She tells them she has practiced and they get impressed!
The whole morning Abhay was no where to be found, and Piya thought, he might have gone somewhere, she missed him, but nevertheless she was relived, little she knew that he was watching her from his room's window with a smile on his face, he was happy to see her so thrilled and joyful!


Meanwhile abhay's eyes were covered under the dark shades, were watching Piya like a hawk, , then he gets a call.
"hi lover boy" says Tina in her husky voice.
"hi Tina"
"so you are in Goa now"
"yes , arrived yesterday"
"let me guess! now you are beside the pool, or maybe beach side, feasting your eyes with Piya's sexy body, so tell me how does she look in a skimpy bikini?", she laughs
He chuckles: "I don't know I haven't noticed, beside she is not wearing a bikini" he softly laughs
"gosh! poor you! I bet she looks very skinny!" she laughs again
"Tina enough! and tell me now, are you are sure about what you have said?"
"Aww! You are shying now, ok kido I will stop now, and hey I am pretty sure about what I told you"

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It was evening time,the exhausted group was returning from a concert ,held near the beach,and misha was hell bent taking its side.

"Chee! What kind of music was that?" says Piya with a disgust look on her face Misha gets stunned while everyone else laughs!

"No way! they are the best, Piya you still live in the stone age you don't know anything about cool music"
Piya giggles "music!, you call that music! It's like someone is throwing away steel plates and pots or banging them together,i am having headache" everyone laugh again.

"oye next time I will ban you all from watching their live concert" Says Misha putting her hands across her chest,"waise bhi tum buri nazar walon k wajah se mujhe unka autograp nahi mila!" then she sulks and pia giggles pulling her cheeks while mish whispers in her ears 'i saw it' to which pia gives a confused look and mish smiles.

At the concert :Misha looks at Piya and then at Abhay, and she gets stunned by the way they were looking at each other, they were so lost in each other's gaze, it was like they were alone with no one around them!

On reaching their rooms the girls found a envelope on their door, Misha opens the envelope, to her surprise it had a photo of the band with their signed autograph she reads it "to Misha our cutest fan ever, keep smiling, with love "with a stunned look she looks at them then screams "unbelievable! he got all of us their autograph" Ruhi jumps in joy "woho! he got one for me too!", she reads hers loudly "to Ruhi always believe in your self, with love LD" Piya looks at her with a huge smile "to Piya, hope you enjoyed your first concert and enjoyed our show! With Love "

Misha snatches Piya's pic and looks at it puzzled and says" how did they know that! and why did Abhay bothered to ask them for this"

"You have to admit, that this was a very sweet gesture, I told you he is a nice guy didn't I?", says Als and Piya looks at the sea as waves crash on the shore, with a sad smile on her face!

late in the evening as Alisia entered pia n mish'a room all she could say was "What the...hell(😆)"

"don't tell me ur going doing wearing these...Chimpoo clothes!!"

"hey don't call it that ok!!kya burai hai inme?"said misha scornfuly.

"burai!!ek ho ho bataien!!"said pia coming from behind, "it kinda formal mish,wear something fancy"

"But I haven't brought any fancy clothes"
"God Misha! You just irritate me to bits! Haven't I told you to pack a dress"
mish giggles "I don't recall" and winks, looking at Piya
"don't worry Misha, I have something for you" says Piya softly looking at her mischievously, as she walks out the bathroo, Piya takes out two dresses from her suitcase.

pia askes her showing the dresses."This or this?"

"None"replies mish showing her tongue.

"that one!"says Als pointing at one and poor mish was dragged to dressing room and locked but both the girls.

"pia!!!!!!!!Alisia!!!open the door!"she screamed banging the door.

"Wear that first!"and both the girls giggled.After a long time mish was fidgeting with the dress hoping that they'll open the door mish finally wore that dress and looked stunned with pia's beauty.

"dekh na mish,Als ne zabardasti ye pehnwaya!its too showy na!"complained pia pouting.

"mish...tell her she's looking soo gorgeous!"

Mish looked at pia from head to toes, she was wearing Gold champagne sequined short dress, which was showing her beautiful white skin ,with light make up but her natural beauty was making her adorable!with her curly hair now straightened a bit but not fully curly nor straight and broad golden bangles in one hand.


"Wow!!!" her mouth wide open "u r looking simply breathtaking gal!"

"u r too mish...good choice pia"said Als, looking at her red one strapped dress.

Misha turns and looks at her self in the mirror she was looking stunning, her fringe was rolled and clipped to the both sides with tiny pearl clips spread here and there, the rest of her hair was curled but with more volume as Piya rubbed some mousse in it,
and the knee length white dress just looked perfect

"I look horrible!, I look like a stupid bride" she says

Als-"aww...no choice now mishi lets go!"

pia-u guyss go i'll come in a moment ,room's do messed up i m sure when we'll come we won't have strength to clean it so i'll just make it rite and come"

als-ok then i'll wait!

pia- no need yaar, u gus carry on,i'll be rite there...

After putting the messy things in the rite places pia checks her self in the mirror before she goes out of the room.Same time Abhay's room door opens and he gets out, he turns towards Piya, he scans her with a quick glance, she notices that and she blushes, she looks at him shyly checking him out too, he was wearing a white formal shirt with black trousers and formal shoes

She smiles "hi"
"Hi, going to the dance?" he says
"Yes and you?" she says feeling nervous
He nodes, she looks at him puzzled strange how he came out from his room in the same time as her!

As they walk towards the lifts silently, Kabir comes rushing in, he looks at them, then both boys give each other cold glances and then Kabir grabs Piya's hand "hey Piya I came to pick you up, let's go and look at you! You look so beautiful"

She says nervously "thank you" as the three of them get inside the lift Abhay touches his pocket and gets out of the lift he says coldly: "you go ahead I forgot my mobile" and then he walks away.

As they reach there "wow Piya! you look fabulous" says Als
"before I forget here Piya" says Kabir as he hands her a check "this is from my dad a small donation for the orphanage", ron hands her a check too, "this is from me and als"
Piya nodes and as she puts the checks inside her bag " you guys are too sweet, you don't know how much this will help poor kids out please say thanks to your parents too" she smiles through tears..."aww,pia don't cry now!"Als giggles.And ron offers a dance to pia,kabir and Als too leaves to the dance floor and misha and ruhi were too enjoying themselves on the dance floor.

"guys lets eat now"says ron calling mish for dinner.As soon as they start eating, Abhay walks by their table he looks at them and greets them all politely, Danish asks him to join, but he just say thanks, then walks to the bar

Piya was about to take a bite when Misha says mockingly: "wow he is fast!" everyone look puzzled at her, he points with her head towards the bar
A beautiful blonde girl was all over Abhay, he had his arms around her and then he leads her to the dance floor

Piya looks at them and she feels a lump in her throat as she wants to clear it she starts to choke, and she feels she can't breath or talk her eyes widen in fear, Misha notices that
"Piya what's wrong? OMG! she is choking!" Misha pats on her back, but still she start to turn a bit bluish, tears pouring out of her eyes" somebody do something please" screams Panchi, while Kabir and all look at her helplessly panicked.

Then suddenly Abhay runs towards them, he grabs Piya pulling her in one jolt, then he stands behind her, puts his arms around her, his hands locked together and placed just down her rips and he pushes upward once, twice and by the third time a piece of chicken flies right from her mouth, as she gasps coughing and then she inhales deeply, he holds her gently and helps her sit on the chair she was shaking "are you all right?" he says kneeling beside her so he be in her eyes level, his hands cupping her face while everyone look at them worried!

Piya looks at him and nodes breathing deeply, he takes a glass of water from the table "drink this", she tries to hold the glass but her hand was shaking he holds her hand gently and then help her drink
Misha and Panchi put their arms around Piya "thank God you are fine you! you scared the hell out of us!"
Abhay stands up and sighs, he looks at Danish and Kabir who looked worried but also angry!

"Thanks allot dude, you just saved her life, where did you learn that?!"
"It's nothing, I just took some first aid classes, you should too, you never know when they come handy" he says softly, then he looks at Piya "are you ok now?" she looks up at him and says nervously "thank you Abhay" he smiles "my pleasure, but next time try to take smaller bites, chew well, and never talk when you are eating" he says with humor in his voice like he is lecturing her, she smiles and node then he turns around, and walks away while everyone was looking at him!

Misha looks at him stunned then she says "Oye your makeup is ruined" then she wipes Piya's teary face, Piya chuckles" I just faced death and you are worried about my makeup, I will go and freshen up" and she walks towards the ladies wash room.

Meanwhile kabir takes misha to the dance floor and ron and Als followed.

"anything wrong"asks mish while kabir sways her.

"nope"

"won't tell me?"she sulks

"there is something about abhay which is bothering me,the way they look at each other..'

mish cuts him 'can't lame her,he always saves her life as he did just now'

'was he this rude from beginning?'

'hmm..'she sighs recalling 'no...he was sweet at first and u know when we went to the fair he was so naughty and irritated pia so much' she smiles.

'then?'asked kabir.

'a girl tina came,and since then he's behaving rude...especially to pia...btw where is she' misha looks around.

where, are you Piya!, she spots her standing near the bar she was watching with a sad look in her eyes Abhay dancing seductively with his European blond partner! then she looks at Kabir, she feels relived that he couldn't see her, Kabir you are right there is something between these two, they can pretend that they loath each other but what's between them can never be described as hatred, not even close to it, what they have is something unexplainable, is it love or is it something beyond it!, I don't know yet, but I could see it in the way they look at each other.I don't understand u both!misha sighs,why do u keep denying your care when its clearly visible.After tina's appearance i feel like abhay's just a player,maybe that's why he is maintaining his distance towards pia coz he knows she isn't one girl who's bed with him!

On the other hand pia was smiling sadly ,looking at abhay sitting at a table now.'abhay will i ever understand u?i don't understand why u changed,u were so good on my first day at london.Maybe then u realized i am not rich like u and thus not of ur type.

She puts her head in her hands which were resting on the table.' u r'nt coming?'asks mish sipping water.

'i had enough'


Piya notices that Abhay wasn't on the dance floor along with his dance partner as they were no where to be found! Misha notices that she was looking around and she says: "he has gone already with that blondy I saw them leaving, she was in his arms all kissy touchy, I am sure they are now in his or her bedroom indulging in the sinful deed"

Piya felt like a sharp pain in her chest "I don't know who you are talking about? and what are you saying"
"Are you sure Piya?" says Misha in a skeptical voice. Then she continues "I am sure you know I am talking about Abhay"

"Why are you telling me this?! As if care!" Piya says agitated "Whatever you say babes" says Misha looking at her doubtfully and then walks away to the dance floor
Piya feels hurt she sighs deeply, so he is gone with that s**t! She shakes her head as she imagines them, stop it Piya! She tells her self, she looks at the dance floor and feels so tired everyone were dancing in their partners arms.

pia left saying to mish "i'd come after a walk"

She took off her sandals,the sand was cold as she sunk in her feet walking slowly and when she realizes she's a lil far from the crowd near the bickering plam trees she sits sinking her legs in warm water.She feels herself shaking like the palm tress as she imagined what misha said 'abhay in bed with that blondy doing sinful deeds' she shudders at the thought and reminds herself to stop thinking about him.

pia yawns feeling sleepy, her eye lids feeling heavy, she rest her chin on her hands breathing deeply and then she spots him, Abhay was coming near her!!actually smiling!!

'dance with me',he asks sitting beside her on his knee and extends a hand toward her.Pia held it gently and he made her stand slowly and swayed her gently on the tunes of the soft music of the song addicted by Enrique which can be heard till here.

She gasps as abhay pulls her closer to his chest and holds her waist tight and securely,and from other hand he held her hand and placed it on his shoulder and again held her waist slowly.

Have I told you how good
It feels to be me
When I'm in you?
I can only stay clean
When you are around
Don't let me fall, oh no

If I close my eyes forever
Would it ease the pain?
Could I breathe again?

Maybe I'm addicted
I'm out of control
But you're the drug
That keeps me from dyin'

Both gets lost in each others eyes,feeling like the song is about them and their addiction to each other...

he looks deeply into her eyes and says "you look so beautiful tonight, you take my breath away", his touch dazzle her senses and his words make her breathless, He swings her in his arms dancing and smiling, then he raises his hand and touches her face gently with his fingers, then he brushes them on her quivering lips, and she whispers her voice trembling "Abhay what are you doing!". He whispers back: "no one is around Piya, it's just you and me", she looks around and there was no one but them, but she wasn't bothered one bit!

You're the only reason
Yeah, you're the only reason I'm tryin'
(May be I'm addicted)
Oh, I'm tryin', I'm tryin', I'm tryin'
(May be I'm addicted)
Don't want to lose it all
Maybe I'm a liar
But all I really know
Is you're the only reason I'm tryin'
Yeah, you know I'm addicted
Yeah, you know I'm addicted
Yeah, you know I'm addicted

he takes out her hair pins one by one, letting her hair fall on her bare shoulders "much better" he whispers, then he moves her hair baring her neck his hand stroking the soft flesh of her neck and shoulders gently, she becomes more and more breathless, and he bends and kisses her neck gently, she gasps as she feels his warm wet lips on her neck and she whispers his name helplessly! pia puts hear head on his chest while dancing ,and he slowly traces his fingers on her face making her feel ticklish.And slowly n slowly the music faded...

Pia's mobile rang waking her up.

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NotE- bacha log tumhe kitni baar batana padega ki mai kiska ff continu kar rahi hun!!😡

anyways,do press like and comments, though i am inspiring from other story yet,i made a lot of lines in my pov and for the need of track changed a many things too...a lil is the same.


Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update Meera 😊 sorry for late reply hmm so Kabir is here and Abhay was getting jealous seeing Kabir with Pia liked Misha's observation and Abhay was right out off all people it was Misha who observed it 😲 😆 but sad that no one believed her 😆 loved abhiya part Abhay teaching Pia how to swim 😊 and why can't he just go and tell her the truth and confess his love for her stop playing this stay away game for once and making suffer both idiot 😡

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