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wow!! Lovely updat meera!! 👏
though m new to ur ff but, Frm the very beginning til end, I loved reading it!! 👏
hm..so meesha got it ryt!! Bt no1 else did!!
Lovd tht past where abhay was praising misha's observtn n intelignce!!!
U potrayd abhay n pia's feeling very well,especialy abhay's,where seeing pia wth kabir he gets angry nd starts swimng!!
Thn d part where abhay taught pia to swim was just too gud! Its descrbd beautifuly!! The way u usd swmng as means to bringng thm close to eachothr was fav!! I truly lovd dis part!! B/w..d way u descrbd swmng thng,i ws just wondrng,wether u r a swmmer? 😊
the last part ws also very nyc!! So abhay thngs he did wrng going near her?? So then wil he again start ignoring her?? And pia? Wil she b able to avoid hm? I dnt thnk so!!
The entire updat ws fav! I lovd dis ff of ur's!! 😳
thanx fr d pm...
Cntinue asap plz..and tak..cre..
-indu
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago