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Posted: 14 years ago


Thank you to all those 216 likes and comments...

Per where is my other like???????
Sob sob sob...
I am free at the moment no collage no study... :D
So will update lots per I want to see those likes and comments otherwise when I type... I fell so demotivated then I am like are there any reason for me to type...
Me sob sob
And you all taking time to click like to :(
Me more sob, I feel like updating then I see no likes... Then I feel down again...
Please do press the like and comment..
And oh comment... Itni kangusi :(
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I am crying... There are barely anything for me to read.
Thank you to all those people who always leaves me comment. I am truly touched...
But to those... :(
If you can't comment atleast press the like button to motivate me...
Hmm...
I feel like a dog Barking in a empty field.. :(

Now jaldi jaldi press the like :D

I am on my way to UPDATE.
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Love you all
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updates.. wow maan finally knws the truth...
omg sameera, romeo n his bro story is a li confusing...
y did she marry his dad if romeo's bro luved her??? y is he in coma??
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE



Thank you to all those 216 likes and comments...

Per where is my other like???????
Sob sob sob...
I am free at the moment no collage no study... :D
So will update lots per I want to see those likes and comments otherwise when I type... I fell so demotivated then I am like are there any reason for me to type...
Me sob sob
And you all taking time to click like to :(
Me more sob, I feel like updating then I see no likes... Then I feel down again...
Please do press the like and comment..
And oh comment... Itni kangusi :(
:(😭
:(😭🤢
🤢:(😭
:(😭
I am crying... There are barely anything for me to read.
Thank you to all those people who always leaves me comment. I am truly touched...
But to those... :(
If you can't comment atleast press the like button to motivate me...
Hmm...
I feel like a dog Barking in a empty field.. :(

Now jaldi jaldi press the like :D

I am on my way to UPDATE.
Remember I am free I am available to update allot
:D
So more I see more I will update
Love you all
Xxx


Keep writing... no losing of motivation... we are here to press like and comment... so just update for us yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
i always comment and like
please do cont soon
i have a request a ask u so many time
but u always ignore this
pleas please update ANIMOSITY and REMORSE
please ab wo dono FF pehly finish kro
or sath sath mn ye b update kro
and what about CHIMERA
u just forget all
i am also crying 😭
ANIMOSITY is my fav FF
please do cont soon
and one time u promise me that
when REMORSE end u will update ANIMOSITY
regulerly but its going to b 2 whole month
u did not update
now u update ur ALL FF pllleeeaaassseee
u r a best writer
do cont soon
please end REMORSE first
ok
love u alote
bye😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeah u are updating
I wan to see more of maan n geet romance
Update soon safi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE



Thank you to all those 216 likes and comments...

Per where is my other like???????
Sob sob sob...
I am free at the moment no collage no study... :D
So will update lots per I want to see those likes and comments otherwise when I type... I fell so demotivated then I am like are there any reason for me to type...
Me sob sob
And you all taking time to click like to :(
Me more sob, I feel like updating then I see no likes... Then I feel down again...
Please do press the like and comment..
And oh comment... Itni kangusi :(
:(😭
:(😭🤢
🤢:(😭
:(😭
I am crying... There are barely anything for me to read.
Thank you to all those people who always leaves me comment. I am truly touched...
But to those... :(
If you can't comment atleast press the like button to motivate me...
Hmm...
I feel like a dog Barking in a empty field.. :(

Now jaldi jaldi press the like :D

I am on my way to UPDATE.
Remember I am free I am available to update allot
:D
So more I see more I will update
Love you all
Xxx



ha ha LOl

very happy that u are crying ha ha

... hamey tho bahuth rulathee
hi..ab u cry ..
acha ..
abhee patha chala like button no press karney se u will roying ..good idea ..the more u make geet of immoral world suffer .. the less like ..and the more trouble u give maan of enigma ..same thing again...
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Posted: 14 years ago
sana greedy for more updates ...
comment we will give you dont wory...
and to all the readers yaar plzz comments karo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ENIGMA
PART 81






"I would call that cheating". Geet turns her head round. Wet water dripping, drop by drop. She roles her eyes. Smiling.
"leaving the door wide open while you changing," he takes an apple from the side. Butting in to it. "anything could happen!" he flirts. A small smile again showed its presence. Thinking about her little plan, wasn't that what she intend to do.
"you have never done anything!"
"do I feel trust?" he questioned.
"something like that," she turns on her blow dryer. Couldn't here anything. She observed maan through the mirror, trying to figure out maans moving lips. She was so temptation to kiss them & the way he was biting the apple. Was he tempting, she was imagining her self in his embrace. How would he touch her, his smooth finger trailing a line down her body. It's just because of the stress, but there wasn't a single night that she haven't dream about him. She stops the dryer.
"so what do you think?" maan ask. Geet spines round. Wearing her normal nightdress. She walks towards him. She have no idea what maan exactly was talking about.
Maan looked at her weird gesture. Her sexy gesture. Does she really think he will be able to control!
"hmm! Let me..." he stands. Thinking about to leave the room when geet spreads her hand, her palm covered his chest and quickly pushes back to the seat. Maan thumps down. Bouncing off tiny amount then sits back, she comes over, sitting on his lap while her both leg rests either side. Her sweet breath was only the start. He bends down, fanning his neck, cooling him. Maan felt the tingle. He felt the passion in her move. Unconditional love. Her each touch brought back life in him. Skin to skin, she non-stop brushed her cheek against his like a cat. She was seducing him.
"don't you think this getting to far? You have to prepare moms favorite dish," geet roles her eyes. He have to ruin the moment.
"of you haven't hard, I told shila to prepare the dish! Buddu!" maan looks at his side. Thinking when she have mentioned that! Hmm... His mind was to slow as geet came near his ear, slowly starts licking the soft end. Bitting, trailing her tongue down his jaw... Brushing her nose along the side.
His rough skin brought a certain urge in geet. She lost her self. It's very odd, a new feeling that she couldn't control. This is love, she was certain this is love. How he always there to comfort her, how he understands her. In the midst storm, he will be there protecting her. Her lips gives a one more small peck. Then slowly hugs him tight... Resting her ear on his heart. Maan felt her relaxing in his embrace, while he tightly locks it round.
"what's wrong?" he questions her. Hoping she will answer. She never explains anything clearly, finding everything out from scratch was coming a usual thing for him. He is becoming a expert.
"love me, always!" she whispers, closing her eyes. A cool breeze passed through there vain from a near by windows. Goose bump formed around geets body. Maan gently rubbed her thigh in order to keep the warm.
"pata hi, I always used to think, love is a pointless emotion. It have non meaning. No answer. It's waste of time..." she shifts her head to other side. Looking at the open windows. Maan gently strokes her hair. It's soft. And the aroma, it's sweet. He could sit here always and love her, keep her in his embrace.
"I was stupid, that's because I never knew what love felt like. How beautiful the meaning of love is." she hides her face on his chest. Coming closer. Looking at his heart... Feeling his. "I get scared when you are upset, scared when you are in pain... Then I realized it's because of me. It's me who have control of this heart. It's my. "
Maan looks down at her. Her eyes was hiding. Couldn't look at his. Why? He gently touches her chin and then pulls it up...
"you know it's always yours." he murmurs. Looking at her shivering lips which was anticipating for it to touch his.
"Aur?" maan looks at her. Want to here her more. Want to listen to her confession her thought. Want to here her forever. A girl he loved, madly deeply. The emotion was something he couldn't show. His eyes was the proof. The understanding, somewhere nun knew the level... Without knowing they started a Mutual relationship.
"I for get everything when I am with you" she spike in a proud manner, like she wants to. Forget everything that happening around them.
"like now" she smiles...
"like now?" he questions...
"food?" a sudden rumble from both if there tummy cried. Maans m shape lips widens. Smiling.
"like we have forgotten to eat." geet laughs.
"I am willing to do that as well..." maans grip became firmer. Geet didn't complain, she can stay in his embrace forever.

She slowly stands up, while maan flowed her to the kitchen. His hand didn't free her. A firm strong grip kept it's place.

Rajji sat at the dinner table along with the twins. She wasn't sure how to confront her. The truth, it's not bitter. They still have the same mother then why she have to look in that way? She is still her sister. Geet came by and stroked rajjis hair. She snaps instantly, running way. Geet felt the pain again. Maan comes close, cupping her face.
"you don't worry, she will be fine soon. Just give her some time up think through." he reassures. Kissing her forehead.
"have I done any mistake?" her eyes twinkled with tears. Maan nodes a no...
"no, no you can never do any mistake."
"then why won't she trust me?"
"sometime people can misunderstand, it's just time, somewhere her brain trying to fight the thought! And I am sure you will win soon!"
"what if I don't?"
"you will!"
"but!"
"geet!" he snaps.. "ignore everything. Do you remember upstairs when I am with you, you forget everything!" he smiles along with each word... Geet slowly nodes. "just think it's me and you. No one els. Just us."

It took few minute for maan to convince her but eventually a smile blossom on her face. The twins runs in flowed by shila and vicky, it's been long time that they had a proper happy meal. Something geet always tries but it never works. Twin gave geet a big hug and all took a sit.
Geet next to maan, twin at there place while vicky and shila opposite. Shivering.
"what shall I call you! S-sir or..." vicky kicked her under the table. Not to talk.
Maan looks up in a rather rude manner. Geet gives him a glare to soft a bit.
"why are you asking me? Right vicky!" he looks from shila to vicky. To be honest maan was correct at his place. They never ask him about anything, then why now.
Both looked down, while maan and geet quickly finished and walked in to the kitchen for Ranos dinner.
"she didn't make mmamas favorite!" geet makes a baby face. It's very important to make her favorite dish.
"acca! I thought you already told shila!" maan took the advantage and starts teasing geet.
"I have!"
"then why she haven't!"
"per..."
"that's why I was thinking we should flirt less and work more." geet felt rather offended at that. Her angry eyes looks at him. Annoyed...
"I was trying to fit that in, in our busy schedule!" she shouts. In rather amusing manner.
"WHAT?"



next- ? wil they ever reach the hospital?
Thanks for all the love and support...
note pg 88...
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOL I alwaiiz feel special wen am first on ur updates
Awesome update::
Loved it x
Haaaye geet is trying to seduce him but she is craving for him more!!!
Luv how she was opening up to maan about how she feels about love ...
Grrr hate this rajji...showing attitude at This age
Oooh maan has angered geet now...
Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update

this Shila and Vicky also shady characters ...

like Maan and Geet romance ... poor souls atleast they some time for romance ...

btw when are u giving us a looong epilogue of Kosh ... and an update of Animosity and Remorse and that Gulaal wala FF and and and ... 🤪

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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