~RISHTEY~(Maaneet FF)Part 7 pg 104 UPDATED

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ixiaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

a very good start to hopefully a great story.

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@SecretKhabri420

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

@Jia: WOW, sound like long time relationship between Maaneet here, waiting for the next update...

Thanks a lots for the update and for the PM 🤗

Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Res :)

here i come with the comment...

So Miss. Jia...u were hating on me for being such a sadist and look at yourself 😡...i hate you...😭...what a sad and painful start for the story...poor Geet woke up and started her day with tears 😭..my heart broke for the poor girl...i knew this was going to be a sad one but this sad...i was hoping there would be some happy lovey-diovey flashbacks😳...but i probably have to wait for them...

Speaking of flashbacks...you showed maan and geet when they were so young..it was so cute😃..i loved the bubbly and social Geet ( and of course cubby or fat as Maan likes to call her) which is the complete opposite of grumpy Maan...

haha 😆..loved the part where she thought: She wondered how he kept the same facial expressions. Didn't his face hurt by frowning so much?😆 had me in laughing...

and Jiu...i love you...😳..u know why...cause you brought the sweetest Yash into the story...i love him as a brother...and as Geet said..he is so sweet...i just love him...it shows early on how much he cares for his baby sister...i know i am going to love throughout the whole story so thanks for bring him in...

and where is the little Handa now? hope she is okay...she will be...

oh i almost forgot about a person who i know is going to be important in the story...and that's Miss.Sameera Rathod (aka B***H Rathod)...excuse my bad language but i know i am going to hate on her...unless you make her a saint or something which i know you won't knowing the hatred you have for her..and her role in dreams...

and don't even get me started on who is she is engaged to ? because she is engaged to Maan somehow...i am going to kick your behind😡...but no pressure...just saying...😉

okay...that's enough threatening for now...update soon hun...

awesome update 😃

U started with a bang 😛

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

wow.. great update.. for a change Maan didn't take to Geet it seems for quite a while.. fascinated with the story and very eager to read more.

thanks for this part and do update soon.

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Wow great start
Why doesnt maan lyk geet...didn't lyk It wen he called her moti even wen she was being so nice to him..
Oooh now wat is maan gunna answer to them
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm