~RISHTEY~(Maaneet FF)Part 7 pg 104 UPDATED

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Hello lovely readers, I am here with another of my FFs to pakaao you all...😆 Hopefully you will all give it a read 😛

(c) Ratna

-PROLOGUE-

They say God made us and the relations we make here are destined to be. What we get here on this earth is our providence. But what did I do to deserve this life? Is this my destiny? Is this how my life was supposed to be? Alone and abandoned? My only love, deserted me'will I ever get answers to the questions that haunt my dreams? The one relation that was the dearest to me, the one which was the whole reason for my existence is destroyed, shattering me along the way. I was the one who made relations with strangers for I chose to see the good in them. He said I was the light of his life then why did he plunge me into this obscurity? He said I was the sweetness that made his life sweeter than honey, then why is my life bitter than acid now? He was my whole world; the one who was always there whenever I needed him but when I needed him the most, he left me to lick my wounds in solitude. I ache to see him once, long to ask him the reasons for what wrong did I commit that he isolated me from his life. Life, I was part of... life we dreamt of together...life we deserved.

I am Geet and this is my story...
She was the girl who annoyed me the most still she was the same one who brought vivacity to my soulless miserable life. I don't know when she became the sole purpose of my existence. We were poles apart but magnetically attracted. She broke all barriers of my hard shell and ruled my heart. She was my sunshine, my heaven, my Mishti. The one I couldn't live without and then she destroyed the illusion. The wonderful fantasy I had learnt to live was ruthlessly taken away from me. She destroyed everything we had together leaving me to pick up the broken pieces of my heart. Will I ever get to ask her the reasons she gave up upon us? Gave up upon me? And our love?
I am Maan and this is my story...
Destiny brought these two lovers face to face with each other once again. Was it their second chance? Or something else?
Story of Geet Khurana and Maan Singh Khurana
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Jia ❤️

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euphoric thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jiu baby 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Loved the beginning... there was a path tht led to tranquility and yet there was storm tht blew them away... the happiness was shuned and the lives deserted... how? why? hmm sounds interesting😛
Prima facia this is case of things gone wrong due to misunderstandings... so somewhere someone is involed to ruin it for them... he thinks she went away while she thinks he deserted her... want to know what happened and why... how the two lovers separated.
I know you'll do a marvellous job here just like u did with Dreams...
wuw ju Sweetheart... looking forward to read more😳
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Congratulations For The New FF Kamini...Proud Of You

Fantastic Intro...speaks of love...life...dreams...aspirations...a world of two lovers n their love...their life...n their heart break...but what is the reason of their heart break...how come such a pure love turned so bitter in their case...lets find out...😃
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fantastic prologue...👏

so things start with a misunderstanding?😒

lets see the story unfold...of course its a second chance...we love reading happy stories...😃

continue soon...🤗
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Congo Shongo on the new FF Jia! I love reading your writing and I'm looking forward to see who this unfolds.
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good start plxxx do update soonn
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Congratz on the new FF
Can't wait for the story to start
Intro sounds interesting x
Thx 4 the PM
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congratulations...the prologue seems so interesting...i cnt wait for the update...continue soon...
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congrats for the new ff...👏👏👏
interesting concept...😊😊😊
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looks very interesting. i wonder what happened between them.

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