SS ~ FOREVER LOVE~Part 4 pg 21

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hey guys..itz me and u knw wat i have been caught and given sazaa by my crazies...and i have to write maaneet moments in OS format...

tho i had restriction of the max no of words to be written...coming to Maaneet moments dnt help me in writing within those limits...and i have decided to give it in a short story format probably of 3 to 4 parts...hope u'll love it...

this is dedicated to all my crazies

FOREVER LOVE

PART 1

This was the first time after a month of marriage life he stayed away from her'

Fate interrupted in their romantic life in form of client meeting and that too in New York. Now making him wonder why became the best business tycoon in India'

His loneliness without her made his heart sing its sorrow his love coming out in form of a romantic yet painful song the rhythm of his beating into lyrics'


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XeRwe6eFb1s[/YOUTUBE]


Newyork Nagaram urangum neram thanimai adarnthathu
Paniyum Padarnthathu'
Kappal Erangiye kattrum karaiyil nadanthathu!
Nangu kannadi suvarkalukulle nanum mezlukuvarthiyum'
Thanimai thanimaiyo' Kodumai kodumaiyo
'

Its night in New York City

Night is full of mist now'

And wind comes via ship and its

Walking on the streets now..

But in my room now'its only me and some candles

Oh it's very lonely'and lonely is pain'

Pechellam thalatu pola ennai uranga vaike ne illai

thinamum oru mutham thanthu kalai kapi koduka ne illai
vizliyil vizlum thusi thannai navaal eduka ne engu illai
manathil azlum kuzlapam thannai theerka ne enge illai
Nan enge neyum anga
Entha thanimayil nimishangal varushamanatheno!

You are not here to sing me a lori

And make me sleep'

You are not here' to give'me a coffee with a kiss..

You are not here to remove the dust from my eyes with your tongue..

You are not here to make all my heart feel good...off the pressures and stress

I am here and you are there

And in this loneliness'EveryMinute is like a century for me

Vaan enge Nilam Ange
Entha uvamaiku eruvarum vilakamanatheno !!!

Naatkuripil nuuru thadavai unthan peyerai eluthum en pena
Eluthiyathum erumbu moika peyarum aanathenna thenna??
Jil endru boomi erunthum entha tharunathil kulir kalam Kodai anatheno ?

Va anbe neyum vanthal senthanal kuda panikati pola marume !

Our separation is like

The sky'and the land at

Extreme ends'

My pen will write ur name a

Hundred times in my daily planner'

Hundreds of ants will start eating my planner

Thinking ur name is drops of honey

It's very cold winter here'

But still in this loneliness I feel like hot summer here'

Come my love 'if you are here even in hot desert'it will start snowing for now'

With his heart crying in loneliness and longing to be in his misthi's arms he counted down hrs of 48 to run fast so that he will finally be where he belongs '

In India

Tho she was in classes all her thots where on her love, her life, her Maan'

She cannot take the separation so quickly she has cried for him not to go and leave alone be it a meeting she wanted to be with him always' He tried explaining but she shut him up by saying they faced many hardships before marrying and she dnt wish to stay away from him for 5 days also'

She took sick leave half way thro the class and headed to her house unable to take his separation and oly memories of their togetherness made place in her mind instead of studies'

She rushed inside her room and locked it falling on her bed and crying'

After an hour are so she controlled herself telling that

she's being stupid as always she used to console herself and he'll be with her in a matter of 48hrs'

She freshened herself an sat watching their marriage vdo'All she cud think was how they met, how he proposed her, how he patiently waited for her ' her parents approval for marrying her everything'

How naughty he became after marriage and their HM'

Her cheeks turning pink as she blushed thinking of their close moments where his ands won't stay at a place. His mischievous ad desirous eyes'

Sleep was oly doing half of its work'Maan slowly started dreaming f his angel who changed his life so much from a hardcore business tycoon to a very much lover boy'Geet also started thinking of her price charming how he entered her life to change her destiny forever.

How she became so dependent on him than her parents whom she loved the more

Now even that place of heart belonged to Maan the man who showered her with lots of love care who treated her like a kid pampered her like princess'which her parents wondered how cud a man show this much love'.

Maaneet dreamt of the first day they met'

It was her college function and she was helping in decorating and Maan who happened to be the chief guest came too soon as he has to leave early for an urgent client meeting'

He crossed the party hall that is when he saw her

their first meeting was a different one a filmy one must say where she was about to fall of the ladder and hero running to save her'

He stood there rooted seeing the angel in his arms'whose eyes where tight shut due to fear'

She slowly opened her eyes..OMG her eyes'that is it he fell for her OMG OMG OMG he dnt think he wud fall in love that too at first sight and he is totally blank abt the girl in front of him 'he thot he won't fall in love again after wat happened to him with Sameera'.

Now after seeing this angel he instantly fell for her tat was too shocking for himself'he realized wat love is ..the thing which he felt for Sam was a mere infatuation. Here he saw the angel in his arms with pure heart'he cud say tat she was not like other girls who was at his back for money and fame'.she is purely innocent'.

He was staring at her not even realizing tat she is asking him to let her down'

Slowly he comes out from his trances and lets her down'.

She uttered thanks out of fear and ran from there'.

will be continued...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope crazies u accept this sazaa...tho it is oly half finised... i'll update more parts tmrw
Edited by aarthirajendran - 14 years ago
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res ... arti ... will read ur sazaa on sunday ...

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Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

hope crazies u accept this sazaa...tho it is oly half finised... i'll update more parts tmrw

arti ... u wrote this on whom u were asked 2 write isn;t it😆 ... & did u include ... volume control kar ,... mama jaag jayega 😆or not ...
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Originally posted by: dewdropred

arti ... u wrote this on whom u were asked 2 write isn;t it😆 ... & did u include ... volume control kar ,... mama jaag jayega 😆or not ...

di u later i asked to change it fully on Maaneet so oly maaneet and you said okies for tat
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey aarthi dear...
awesooome...OS...
loved it...
plzzz cont. soon...
thanx for the pm...
take care...🤗...
Edited by mayadika11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice OS... loved it
Continue soon
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb!
plz do pm me next time!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely OS
Luvd how the song explained how they wer feeling
Ooof ther first meeting maan fell in love just lyk Romeo and Juliet
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey aarthirajendran nice os newyork nagaram is one of my fav songs
r u a tamilian

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