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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense n emotional update! Poor Geet! Well written! update sooon
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LOVING THE STORY
SO RELEVANT IN OUR STORY
LOVE THE WAY MAAN REASSURES AND MAKES HER HAPPY
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PART 8

A LITTLE CHANGE: GEET IS 6 MONTHS PREGNANT AND NOT 7 MONTHS!

"I don't want to hear…its going to hurt you sweetheart!!!!"

"NO" she shouted, " It WON'T!!!" and her voice went low again, " I WANT TO TELL YOU…..PLEASE!!!!"


HEe sighed...he knew she won't listen to him now!!!

Geet: That day……


Past

Meera had breakfast with Geet and they got ready to go the hospital. After the checkup was done Meera sent Geet with Yash to sit in the car but Geet objected and asked, "Lekin tu kaha ja rahi hai???".

Meera : Geet main bas tere doctor se kuch dawai ki baat karne ja rahi hu

She said coldly and left. As she entered the doctor's cabin the doctor asked, "Aap toh Mrs. Geet Sharma ke saath aayi thi na???" Meera nodded and then said, "Mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai." The doctor looked confused but before she could tell anything Meera continued, "Kya aapko feutus ke sex ke bare main test karna allowed hai???." Hearing this doctor started sweating and stammered "Kya matlab hai aapka???"

Meera "Wohi matlab hai jo aap samjh rahi hai doctor. Lekin doctor aapko pasina kyu choot raha hai jab ke aapke office main toh A/C bhi hai"

The doctor wiped her forehead and said, "Kuch nahi"


Meera got so angry that the doctor was not even ready to accept her mistake and shouted, "Aapko pata hai aapki iss harkat ke wajhe se ek maa aur uske do bacho par kya asar huva hai??? Nahi aap kaise jane gi aapko toh sirf paiso ki padi hai uske liye kitni bhi jaane jaye aapko kya??? Haina doctor".

The doctor got scared and said, "Mujhe nahi pata tha ke Geet ki sasuma usko ghar se nikal degi. Who toh maine………" but before she could complete Meera slapped her. Meera took a deep breath and said "Aaj se Geet ka case main handle karungi. Aap mujhe uski saari reports dejiye." The doctor nodded n gave all the files to Meera. Meera took the files n left from there angrily.


She then went to the parking lot where Yash and Geet were waiting for her! she informed Geet that from now on she was going to handle her case and then they left for home. Meera took every little care of geet in the best possible way!!!! Indeed god wasn't that cruel to her.

She then told everything that happened in the doctor's cabin and Yash came up with a plan to get the truth out of the doctor. He then made some calls & after finishing he told Meera that their work would be done soon. Meera even tried calling Dev but there was no response..they failed miserably!!!! Geet was ablivious to this fact though!

For the whole week Meera & Yash would take Geet for her morning walks. She also took her for yoga classes. She used to make her drink milk even though Geet made all kinds faces but she wouldn't listen and make sure that Geet had her food on time & took proper rest & also that she didn't think about Dev & get sad again.


One day,

Geet: Meera mujhe Palampur jana hai Maa – Papaji ke pass."

Meera was surprised by her sudden decision, "Lekin Geet…" but before she could continue Geet said, "Aur waise bhi main kitne din yaha tere ghar main bhoj ban kar rahungi" she had tears in her eyes. Meera wiped her tears and said, "Chup kar pagal. Kisne bola ke tu humare liye bhoj hai. Haan???"

Geet, "Jab aapno ne hi bhoj samjh kar bahar kar diya toh dusro se kya umeed karu main"


Meera, "Geet main aur Yash kya tere aapne nahi hai??? Aut tu kyu aapne asu baha rahi hai un logo ke liye jo teri kadar tak nahi karte. Acha tujhe jana hai na Palampur main leke jaungi tumhe lekin hum waha sirf ek hafta rahenge aur phir wapas ajenge. Mujhe tere Daarji aur veerji pe koi barohasa nahi hai."

Geet smiled, "Thhek hai. Acha chal hum packing karte hai."

Meera, "Geet maine tujhe waha jane ke liye permission diya hai uska matlab yeh nahi hai ke maine tujhe kaam karne ke liye bhi permission dedi. Samjhi ab tu yaha chup chap baith aur main teri packing karti hu."

Geet made a baby face, "Meera main thak gayi hu araam karte karte. Plz mujhe todha kaam karne dena."

Meera, "Nahi matlab nahi aur agar tujhe kaam karne diya toh tere pair main jo sujan kaam huvi hai na who phir se ho jayegi. Isiliye tu ab kuch kaam nahi kar rahi."and she started packing. In the evening Meera told Yash about their trip to Palampur and Yash also decided to go with them.


Next morning they left for Palampur after Meera made sure that Geet had her breakfast & medicines. It was a 3 hour ride from Chandigarh & Geet slept off during the ride.

As they reached Palampur Geet woke up feeling very emotional remembering her childhood days which she spent inat this place. Wehn they entered the haweli, Geet put her duppata on her head & touched Daarji's feet with much difficulty. Daarji blessed her & then Brij asked, "Geet tu yaha achanak kaise??? Sab theek toh hai na???"

Geet nodded her head & meekly said, "Haan veerji sab theek hai. Main bas Maa – Papaji se milne aayi hu."

Brij, "Lekin humare damad ji kaha hai???"

Geet, "Ji Veerji woh unko Mumbai jana pada kuch kaam se toh who nahi asake."

Meera was feeling very angry as her friend had to lie to everyone for her & her babies safety! So she decided that she would never bring Geet back to Palampur.


Geet then went to the kitchen &hugged her Maa! She had tears in her eyes seeing her mother after 5 years. Rano was very happy seeing her daughter with a cute bump!!! After talking for sometime geet retired to her room! She didn't dare tell anyone about Dev! In the evening Yash got a call for an urgent meeting so they had to leave immediately but Geet didn't go so Meera told her that they would came back in 3 days to take her.

Geet then had some fun with Rajji &Tito n then slept chatting with her Maa. Every one rejoicing at the arrival of the new members in the family…taking care of geet in every possible way!!!!

The next morning, Geet woke up &did some household work as her Tayji didn't like girls sitting idly…though she did light works only.


In the evening as she was sweeping the floor, Dev entered the house!!!! Ahh that aura…it was intimidating!!!! Geet was shocked to see him there unable to believe her own eyes……may be had come to take her back!!! she couldn't stop thinking…she went numb for a moment….her heart skipped a beat..maybe he has come for their daughters..afterall..no father can ever stay away from his own daughter hai na?? But did she expect a bit too much?

Dev met all the family members..he was cold…he hardly looked at her or even talked…he went on his own way!!!! Everytime he opened his mouth to say something..her heart would leap…she was just waiting for that moment when he'd say "geet ghar chalein?"

But nothing such happened!!!!! He came in front of Geet & said, "Geet mujhe tumhare sign chahiye inn papers par" with a business like face. She froze for a moment…..what are those papers???


Geet took the papers from his hands shakily & read the content!!!! She was shocked to see that it was Divorce papers. Geet looked at him…tears clouded her eyes……s, "Dev …. Yeh….. kya…hai???"

Dev, "Geet yeh divorce papers hai. Mujhe tumse talak chaiye. Ab main aur nahi reh sakta tumhare saath"

Geet, "Lekin Dev humare bacho ka kya???"

The land was slipping under her feet…no..this was not happeneing…the least she expected was this!!!!!

Dev, "Kaunse bache Geet….oh yeh lekin mujhe toh yeh bache nahi chaiye aur nahi tum kyuki tum toh mujhe ek waaris tak nahi de saki aur dono bar ek bhoj de rahi ho mujhe"

Geet was shattered hearing Dev calling her babies as BHOJ.

Kya ab yahi ehmiyat reh gayi thi uski zindagi ki..

Pyaar se nata toota to bojh ka ilzaam mila….

Brij pulled Dev by his collar & shouted, "Yeh kya tamasha ho raha hai Damad ji???"

Dev, "Yeh koi tamasha nahi ho raha yeh sach hai………."

"I can't and I don't want to live my life with such a badjalan aurat….jo hum eek waaris bhi nahi de sakti…"

ab kiye ho daataa aisaa naa ki jo
agale janam mohe bitiyaa naa ki jo
jo ab kiye ho daataa aisaa naa ki jo

Everyon was shocked to hear Dev saying something like that…..Darji and Geet's father Mohinder tried to get a grip on the situation but Dev was not in a mood to hear anything out!!!!

Dev: arrey aap apni beti ke bare mein jaante hi kya hain….pata nahi kiske bache ko humare pariavar ka naam dene ki koshish kar rahi hai ye…

There was a pin drop silence at that….none spoke..not a soul moved!!!!

But Geet didn't hear a word of what he said. Only the word BHOJ was stuck in her mind. She shakily took the pen from Dev's hand &signed the papers & walked away in a trance.

humare sajanavaa humaraa dil aisaa todan
woh ghar basaayan humakaa rasataamaa chhodan

As she was about to go out Brij held her hand n pulled her into the house n told, "Daarji ab hum isse ghar ke bahar jane nahi de sakte warna biradari main humari naakh kat jaegi aur hume iss ko aur isske bacho ko abhi khatam kar dena chaiye."

She was shocked to hear this from her own family…..they were going to kill her babies????? No…it was so hard believeing them!!!!! NOT HER FAMILY…..they dragged her inside with no mercy!!!!!

Geet cried….pleaded…begged….did every thing to persuade her Daarji, Papaji, Maa, Tayaji, Tayji &also Brij Veerji to not to kill her babies but they didn't listen anything. Brij then went & brought a sword

WRITER'S NOTE: we didn't have the courage to write in details what geet was going through...PLEASE GO THROUGH THIS VM TO KNOW WHAT HAD HAPPENED THAT DAY!!!! PLEASE DO NOT MISS IT!

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ujZqHv61VbM[/YOUTUBE]


Geet (crying): maa..please…aisa mat kijiye..maa….aap aisa kaise kar sakti hain..

She could hardly walk…she held her darji's feet, "darji…mere bachon ko mat maariye..inme humari kya galati….nahi…"

jaise ki lallaa koi khilaunaa jo paave
do chaar din to khelan phir bhul jaave
ro bhi naa paave aisi gudiyaa naa ki jo

Darji pushed her away going deaf ears!!!! She ran to her papaji…."papaji..kyun kar rahe haiin ye sab mere saath? Rokiye na unhe…papaji..mere liye..bhagwaan ke liye rokiye na unhe papaji…"

agale janam mohe bitiyaa naa ki jo
jo ab kiye ho daataa aisaa naa ki jo
agale janam mohe bitiyaa naa ki jo

she cried and cried and cried..begged to no ends…but then..when her own parents were not even listening to her…why does she even expect others to help her out!!!!! She stuglled and wriggled to get out of the hold of her mother and tayiji….by the time brij reached them..she managed to get out and run away!!!! For her..the doors of her own house was closed on hers!!!!

aisi widaai bolo dekhi kahi hai
maiyaa naa baabul bhaiyaa kono nahi hai


She ran into the forest as she knew that if she went by the main road Brij would catch her. She ran &ran till she could no more!!! she sat below a tree…her pregnancy was taking a toll on her…she couldn't run!! Was there no1 to help her out today??? May be no…she gave a cold smirk…there was no one for her today….she was left all alone to face the world…. Suddenly she heard some movements around her!!!! her heart stopped!!! She was too weak to even get up!

aasu ke gehane hai aur dukh ki hai doli
band kiwariyaa more ghar ki ye boli


It was Brij & his goons but Geet didn't have the power to move. They held her as she struggled…she no more cried or pleaded…she just stuggled to get out of their grip!!!! With one swift swing….Brij slashed her arm…she just smiled…that pain was so timid in front of all that she had gone through…..

is aur sapano bhi aayaa naa ki jo

agale janam mohe bitiyaa naa ki jo

jo ab kiye ho daataa aisaa naa ki jo
agale janam mohe bitiyaa naa ki jo

he slapped her tight…and she fell…still managing to protect her babies..her back was hurt badly…..he raised his sword to slash her neck…she closed her eyes….a sudden peace surrounded her…WAS THAT THE END???? She could no more struggle…MAYBE YES…THIS WAS THE END!!! Just when he was about to slash her head off…someone just swiftly came between her neck and the sword!!!!! He held the sword tight and lifted it off her neck!!!


Brij was furious at this..no one dares stop him…his men attacked him..but he was pretty strong..he fought all of them single handedly..though getting wounds on him..but that was nothing compared to the anger and pain he felt seeing some goons mercilessly working their awords on a poor girl!!!! After a few minutes of fight…Brij was beaten up badly…and all made a quick escape before it was dawn!

Geet waited for death to engulf her……but her peace was suddenly interrupted by sheer silence….she was still breathing…was she dead????? A sudden touch brought her back to life…….

He helped Geet to stand up!!!! She somehow managed to stand up..still not able to believe that she was alive…who was he??? Why did he help her???? death was more peaceful than living in this hell…..she was about to fall when he held her from the back and one of his hands swiftly slid round her waist to rest on her bump!!!! And there was a kick..no no..two kicks!!!! It was the 1st time her babies had kicked……. Geet forgot everything around her….her lips curved into a smile as she caressed her bump…the best moment in her life after so many days!!!! The man's hold was like a new promise that he would protect the three of them from all the harms. She just had that feeling…it was dark…so none of the two seemed to see each other clearly!

He then pulled out his hand & said, "Main aapki koi madat kar sakta hu kya???"

Geet who was lost in that moment was brought back to reality by the man's baritone, "Ji kya aap mujhe Chandigarh tak chod sakte hai???"

Man, "Theek hai chaliye"

And then a new journey of life began for Geet.


Geet, on the whole way was thinking about what turn her life had taken after marrying Dev & now after she was thrown out of her own house bcoz of him.

HE turned to the lady who was sitting beside him but he couldn't see her face as it was a bit dark & her hairs were on her face but he saw her eyes. They were of Hazel colored & there was something in them…what was it….he tried to understand..but only he could feel that he could drown in those eyes.


After 3 hours he left the lady at Chandigarh Bus stop & went on his way.

Geet took a taxi from the bus stop to Meera's house. As she rang the bell, Meera &Yash were confused!

Yash , "Meera dekho kaun hai??? Aaj koi anne wala tha kya Maan ke sivai??? And its so late at night!"

Meera, "Nahi Yash koi nahi anne wala tha. Main dekhti hut b tak tum Maan ko dinner serve karo"

Maan sat there listening…his hands were covered with bandages!! Ahh he had a hard time explaining Yash why he was like that but he didn't tell the truth either!!!!

Meera went & opened the door! She was shocked to see Geet in that condition…bleeding…weak..almost on the verge of fainting….. She hugged Geet & then called Yash, "Yash jaldi aao."


Yash got worried hearing Meera's voice…even Maan got worried hearing a painful cry from Meera..they reached the door! yash was shocked to see Geetlike that. He told Meera to take Geet inside & went out n saw a taxi & found out that Geet had come like this from the bus stop.

Meera first nursed Geet's wounds & then helped her to change while Yash told everything to Maan.

Meera then brought Geet to the dining table & asked, "Geet tu theek to hai... tune kuch khaya???"

when Geet shook a No, she served some food in plate n fed Geet. Maan had still not been able to see her face….Yash and Meera were so protectively covering her!!! all he knew was her name..GEET!!!

Geet after having some dinner saw that they were not alone andsaw that it was the same guy who had helped her…she had seen his face at the bus stop…and she was thankful to him..even more than that for saving her babies!!!!

"Thank u sir for helping me."

Maan then realized that it was the same lady he helped & then told Yash & Meera who were confused as to what was Geet saying. While Maan was telling all this Geet sat next to Meera & hugged her. Meera hugged her back caressing her back…..when suddenly she found geet not responding!!!!

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next: what will happen now!!!

Prev: PART 7

Next: PART 9

update courtesy: hinal_maaneet😳

VM courtesy: rsroopali😎
Edited by sweet_aishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
please add me awsem update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
the babies instantly recognised their father when they kicked first
great update dear
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awesum part..!
hw can b a family such cruel towards deir own daughter..
loved meera's character a lot..

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