Musical FF : Rhythm of Love: 4Oct Pg 74/ Part 16

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sangi1588

Awww..thats so sweet of you Jazz...😳 and Thanks once again...did u see the intro..i gave credit to you...😳

Yes...and I am all 😳😳🤗

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huma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

its dreamy yaar beautifulll 👍🏼

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Tanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

interesting...

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: humazuban
its dreamy yaar beautifulll 👍🏼

Thanks 😃

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu
interesting...
add me to your pm list... 😃

Thanks yaar..surely will update you...😃

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Update coming up shortly...

Teaser :

Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main..

Aayi Main Aayi.. Neele Gagan Se

Laayi Main Laayi.. Taaron Ke Chun Ke

Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai

Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai

Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai

Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai

Aakar Dekhle Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

Edited by sangi1588 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sangi1588
Update coming up shortly...

Teaser :

Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main..
Aayi Main Aayi.. Neele Gagan Se
Laayi Main Laayi.. Taaron Ke Chun Ke
Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

yay yay! Can i see an introduction song for someone *cough* *cough*😃

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

I have replied to all you precious comments, have a look at it...😃

Recap :

That's it, he was sure, he wanted to find her. And that too soon before she could make him go bonkers over her'
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Part 2

A beautiful Sun came up.Fresh morning breeze, woke him up...he had slept in the swing, dreaming about his girl. He stretched and got up, and went to get ready for work. Had his bath, and wore the best outfit, as to be prepared in case he meets her.

He came down, had bfast with his dadi and left without saying a word. The whole time, he was thinking about her, how to find her, what's her name, what does she do.

He reached office.

Adi, his right hand at work and close buddy too.Greeted him and gave him files to check. Maan was present physically but mentally he was somewhere else. Usually a very happy go lucky guy, who by his mere presence makes the whole office energetic and full of life, today was all lost.

"Maan, what's the matter. Is everything alright? "Asked a worried Adi.

"Yes" answered Maan.

But Adi knew that's something was fishy. He brought in some coffee, sat with him. Waiting for Maan to speak something.

Maan's dilemma whether to tell him or not, whether he will make fun of him. He dint know what to do, but he surely needed some help to find her. Maan couldn't resist anymore, he in his most filmy way told each and everything what was troubling him. He suddenly got off his chair..Went near Adi , sat on the desk..with an embarrassed smile, he started..

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ONJRpEO_GEk&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Kahte Kahte hi chup ho jaata hoon main.

Kya yahi pyar hai, kya yahi pyar hai

Haan yahi pyar hai, haan yahi pyar hai

Adi all Smiling and Maan all Blushing.

Opening the cabin doors , he went outside backwards, bumped into someone and dropping all the folders down. He turned around to see what happened. Maan shook his head, closing his eyes, Opening it with disbelief. She was there, looking all furious at what he had done, talking to him animatedly. Both of them instantly went down to pick the folder, maan's eyes set on her, Started helping her out in lifting the folders.

Tumpe marte hain kyon, hum nahin jaante.

Aisa karte hain kyon, hum nahin jaante.

She got up and started walking away from him. He just stood there looking at her go away. Adi came in, to break the trance, by moving his hands before his eyes. Maan looked here and there and finally broke into a broad smile. Moving past the desks, he continued.

Band galiyon se chup chup ke, hum guzarne lage.

Saari duniya se rah rah kar, hum to darne lage.

Hai ye kya karne lage.

Kya yahi pyar hai, kya yahi pyar hai.

He put an arm around Adi's shoulder

Haan yehi pyaar hai,, haan yehi pyar hai..

Adi promised Maan that they will find her out at any cost, since Maan is very serious about her. And down deep in his heart, Adi knew Maan was not the person to fall for every other girl, girls came behind him but he never took advantage of that. And now that Maan was serious that surely means Adi needed to find out that girl.

The day passed by with fun and frolic as always.

Rains pouring made the weekend dull. To make the weekend fun and bright, Maan and his friends made plans to search the city for his dream girl.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_x2XNHZUczk[/YOUTUBE]

imagine maan doing the same things as the hero does..lol

Yeh khoya khoya rahta hai

Yeh din main soya soya rahta hai

Yeh ratoon ko uthke rota hai yehi gaata hai woh le gai dil

Taram pam taram pam taram pam chalo us ko dhundhenge

hum

Pari hai woh hai hur koi

Jo dhaaya hai itna sitam

Nahin woh to kuch aur hi hai, kahen kya yaroon tum sehum

Itni haseenon main chupii ek aisi haseena hai

Ki moti sip main ho jaise anguthi main ho nagina koi woh

Dekha hai tum ne kaho kya usko

Jaise nagina koi woh

Dekha hai tum ne kaho kya usko

Taram pam taram pam taram pam chalo us ko dhundhenge

hum

Pari hai woh hai hur koi

Jo dhaaya hai itna sitam

Weeks passed by, No clue. He was becoming restless day by day. Adi and Tej helped him to find her out but in vain. Without knowing her name, or the place where she stays, it was really difficult in this city.

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So, to know whether ever Maan will meet that Girl..stay tuned to Rhythm of Love...

Please do leave your comments, i will reply to each and one of you...In case you need a PM - please add me as a buddy or please let me know, i will add you ...Thanks.

Previous Update: Part 1

Next update: Part 3

Edited by sangi1588 - 14 years ago

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Yeah yeah!! Me first!!

He wore his best outfit just in case he meets her😆

Loved the scene where he bangs into her, rather his imagination-wali "her" and even got her all furious at him.

Running around the city looking for his dream-girl. Imagine Maan doing all that!! Total deewaana!!😍

Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

u know y i luv this ff so much doc? 1.Music.. Its a major part of everyones life..one of my hobbies is to collect lyrics of songs..when u look closely at lyrics..it surprises u how a story is simply conveyed in a stanza..how deeply a single sentence can show feelings..it always surprises me..and this FF is based on a simple concept yet utilizes Music..and i love it.. 2. Maan..we all are fida over angry young Maan..i agree but we've read about different characterisations of Maan, his dark side and all..but reading about this maan is refreshing..like a fresh bout of air..he's cool,carefree types and it is refreshing cuz reading about angry short-tempered high bp Maan is tiring now-a-days for me..and the third n most imp factor is the friendship angle..Friends..the ones who will listen to your weirdest fantasy..those who believe in everything u say..u believe..it's cute how they all r in searc of a dream girl of Maan,whom they dunno even if exists..wow! This is awesome. Please post the next part soon..

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago