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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1151

I'm awed by the depth of your writing, it's amazing 😳

xoxo

Aanya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1152

*Crawls into a dark corner and rocks to and fro*

And I thought I was a freak.

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1153

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz
*Crawls into a dark corner and rocks to and fro*
And I thought I was a freak.

I that you, after reading the update? or is that you, normally?? 🤣

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hegdemedha

@hegdemedha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1154

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Sublime ' II
I never told her how I felt death coming to my dog. Realistically it was through my hands but she didn't have to know that now, did she?

This is where all the legal maxims I learnt flew right out of the window. This is where I was ready to ask -- Does ACP Maan and his team need help to locate inconsistencies in Geet's story?

PS: Actually, there is at least one untruth that Geet uttered earlier. I am yet to read through all the chapters again.

PPS: "One eye closed, one elbow scraped, and one foot mangled" Sookie, hope you are feeling better.

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imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1155

Whoohoho. Could I havimagined Geet to be so dangerously intelligent? Not in a million years 😍
In the past few days, whenever I have read this ff, I get a feel that this is not the Geet that we know. This is not the Geet we have seen.

This character could have had any name whatsoever.

Ofcourse the Geet that we all know is mental 😛 but in a... different sort of a way than this ff.

And I try imagining Geet thinking all that you wrote above. It was easy...you write so well

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579908

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1156

😲 she killed the dog 😆

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1157

although i have no clue about the story for i havent read it to the whole yet... geet's charac is very interesting hmm scratch that i would say eerily interesting... till human voices wake her... she revels in hers (as for the sublime) the question is will she ever wake even with her voice...

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anu_k12

@anu_k12

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1158

Hey...

The last 2 pages out of Geet's diary were... eerie and unnerving .. disturbing !!!

Brilliantly written...

PM me when you update next !!

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1159

hey Sooks

This was chilling. Seriously.

I wonder if Geet always had this in her or its just after her dog's death. The last line was too much. For a moment I thought she killed her dog. Or perhaps the more acceptable explanation is that she wanted to block out the emotional attachment. Whatever.

The way Geet used Mal and egged on the stalker is really really amazing. I dont blame him if he actually cut off her hair to drive a message.

Mal got trapped in all the mess. Poor woman.

The way Geet was attracted to Mal was surreal. I have never read anything like this before. I guess the demons in her head took over her completely. The fact that shocks me the most is she is leading a life amongst people, killing them(or getting them killed, to be precise) and escaping everyone's notice. Quite opposite to the killer, who, even though didnt come up in the investigation showed clear signs of delusion.

I was wondering about the pills- how they didnt have a counter effect.

Beautiful. Loved it. :)

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1160

Originally posted by: hegdemedha

This is where all the legal maxims I learnt flew right out of the window. This is where I was ready to ask -- Does ACP Maan and his team need help to locate inconsistencies in Geet's story?

PS: Actually, there is at least one untruth that Geet uttered earlier. I am yet to read through all the chapters again.

PPS: "One eye closed, one elbow scraped, and one foot mangled" Sookie, hope you are feeling better.

Medha, it all depends on who is reading Geet's Diary?
Sooks, truth be told, I am actually looking forward to this round of closure! :)