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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
nice ff...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
for part 10 &11!!!!
nice part...loved it!!!!
maan is being restless to see geet!!!!
no geet ????😕😔
LOL what a fight !!!!!!!...
plz cont soon!!!
love u!!
esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awesome dear
loved the update
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

part 12 ,...


awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

aisa kya hone wala hai ...

thanks ..
and u will know it soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: angel_smily

nice update

thanks for the pm

ur welcome...
Edited by kingofme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice ff...


do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...

thank u ...
hope u got the pm for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: backy

for part 10 &11!!!!
nice part...loved it!!!!
maan is being restless to see geet!!!!
no geet ????😕😔
LOL what a fight !!!!!!!...
plz cont soon!!!
love u!!
esha

thank u esha for ur lovely comment...
i am gonna update it nw...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
hi peops... me back with part 13...
i know i know u all are angry with me but what to do i got struk with my internals so couldnt update...
but i promise to give u a long one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
PART 13:
dono jogging ke liye nikal jate hai...
1 ghante ke baad ghar aate hai ...tab naintara kitchen mein nasta ki tayari kar rahi hoti hai geet & family ke liye...
maan turant kitchen mein bhag kar naintara ke paas jaata hai...
N:kya hua devar ji????aap itna haff kyun rahe hain???
M:bhabi nasta mein kya bana rahi ho????
N:kuch light jaise poha...aap aise kyun ho rahe hai???
M:aacha hua bhabi...nahi maine socha aap kuch aur bana rahi hai...
ya aapko yaad nahi hoga...isiliye mein bhag kar aaya aapko yaad diliyane ke liye...(said all in one go.)(AG tired of typing phew..!!!!!!)
N:kya yaad dilayana DEVARJI(smirking)😉
M:(not noticing the smirnking..)bhabi maine sahi socha tha aap bhul jayogi ki GEET ko ghee se ulti aati hai...aap ne kisi cheez mein ghee tho nahi dala???
N:nahi pyare devar ji...aur mujhe aachi tarah yaad hai ki AAPKI geet ko ghee se ulti aati hai...aab jayiye fresh ho jayiye...
sirf fresh hona...sapne dekhne mat bathiye...
M:kya bhabi...aacha mein aata hoon...
MAAN became fed up of this teasing...from 2 months all were teasing him...but on one side he was very happy that the decesion of marrying geet proved to be good...
after freshing he went to wake up devanshi...
M:devanshi baby uttho...
D:🥱
M:uttho(little loudly)
D:kya hai(little rudely)
M:devanshi uttho(sternly)st:iske wajha se mujhe late nahi hona...
D:chacu mujhe sone do...PPLLEEAASSEE...
M:devanshi chalo hume geet ko lene jana hai...
D:aare haan...(getting up briskly)chachu kya aap pehele nahi uttha sathe...
M:(rolling eyes..)
D:khair chodo aap tho ho hi aisei...(maan's mouth open..)aacha mumma e bol do ki mera koi aacha sa dress nikal degi kyunki mujhe geet didi se best ban kar milna hai...
M:first bhabi ne tera dress nikal diya hai...aur second woh aapki geet didi nahi geet chachi hai...
D:(mouth open...)o hello...
without listening maan went out smirking...
it was almost 9:30 when they left home...
D:papaji hum GEET DIDI ko lene ja rahe hai(saying didi looking at maan...)
DEV:haan baby..aap bihut khush hai na...
they reached the airport...
the heard the announcement
FILGHT SG123 CHENNAI TO DELHI ARRIVED...
as soon as maan heard it he started calling geet..
G:hello...
M:geet kya flight land kar chuki😳???
G:do min mein pata chal jayega..
M:aacha..thora jaldi aana mein wait kar raha hoon😊😊...
Phone rakh diya!!! koi baat nahi aabhi tho milne hi wala hoon...
the family started coming out...first came...
mohinder then rano then was brij and wife then was yash and the last but not the least was GEET with karan and naina with her...after seing her only maan's restlessness decreased to a great extend...
geet met every one except maan...maan knew this is to come...
then geet introduced naina...devanshi and naina became istant friends...
geet,naina and devanshi were always together throughout their drive to home...
maan tried to talk to geet but as usual she ignored him saying one reason or other...
OK PEOPS>...
THIS IS ALL FOR TODAY...
IREALLY HOPE THIS WONT DISAPOINT U AS IT IS A LONG ONE...
PRESS PRESS LIKE AND COMMENT...
AND THOSE WHO COMMENTAD I HAVE REPLIED...
AND THOSE WHO WANT PM PLEASE ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST...
LOADS OF LOVE AG
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Nice one but I can't understand why geet is behaving like this with maan.

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