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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: seemamary
ok will wait soon.

ur wait is over

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: seemamary
Nice one but why geet talks to maan for 15 mins and keeps the phone , does geet likes him or just marrying him for family's sake.

that u will know as the story progresses

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sarkh26
awesome update dear
but pls reduce the font size

and will be waiting till morning

thanks for the suggestion i will reduce it form the next update...

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hi😃

THIS IS PART 11😊:

Phir 4 din train ki tarah bhag gaye...

hum 22 ki shyam ko delhi ke liye nikal gaye the...

hum me ek vanity le li thi...

dev bhai drive kar rahe the aur bhabi unke sang baithe thi...mein nilesh aur devanshi ka dhyaan bata raha tha aur phir thodi der baad woh so gaye...devanshi bohut khush thikyunki kal unki geet didi aane wali thi...

aabhi hum mein geet ko lekar ladai ho gayi thi...

D:papaji kal meri geet didi aa rahi hai na...

DEV:haan aapko geet didi bohut aachi lagthi hai na...

D:ha papaji par pichle saal woh mera se sirf 1 baar milne aaji...

iseliye mein unse baat nahi karungi...

DEV:aise nahi karthe...agar aap baat nahi karenge tho geet didi sad ho gayagi aur agar geet didi sad ho gayi tho apke maan chcahu aapko dantahge😉(maan ko dekthe hua,in a teasing tone)

D:😲chachu kyun dantange????

M:kyunki abi 25 days mein woh aapki chachi ban jayagi...

(haye me blushing😳😳😳)

DEV:chalo nainu aab maan babu din bhi gin rahe hai...mujhe yakeen hai ki minute bhi gin rakhe honge😉😉😉...

D:😡chachu woh meri geet didi hi hai..aur wahi hi rahigi

M:😡nahi beta devanshi woh tumahari chachi hongi...

D:papaji dekho na chachu se bolo ki woh meri geet didi hi rahingi😡😡...

M:bhai aapni beti se bol do ki woh uski chachi hongi😡😡...

thier fight continued naintara got fed up

N:bas karo tun dono😡...Maan veerji aap idar aayeye aur devanshi aap bhi...

she pulled both's ears...

N:verji aap bade hai thoda samja kijye aur aap devanshi...

geet aapki didi aur chachi dono rahengi dono khush

M&D:😆😆ok...

mujhe yeh soch kar hi hasi aa rahi hai...(mujhe bhi😆😆)

hum wahan pohuch gaye...

hume subha geet ko lena airort jaana😳 tha par poori raat mujhe neend nahi aayi thi yeh sooch kar ki mein geet se kya baat karunga😳😳...

shaadi pakki hone ke baad se hi mein geet se milne ki baat se bohut nervous hone lagjata hoon😊...

usse pata hi nahi chala ki kab sochte socht uski aakh lag gayi...

aur aagla subha uski zingagi mein ek badi sachai shamil hone wali thi...

thats it for today...

PLEASE PRESS LIKE AND COMMENT FOR UR AG...

THANKS FOR ALL THE COMMENTS AND LIKES TO PART 10

LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️

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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

amazing ff

just luvd it

read all the parts in one go

plzzz add me in ur pm list

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

hi peops...

me back with part 12...

PART 12:

Subha 5:30 baje dev maan ke kamra mein akar usse uthaya...

D:bhai mera uttho...

M:🥱🥱kya hai bhai.sone do na...

D:maan utth kar zara time dekh..

Maan got startled and got up briskly...

M:kyun bhai time kya hua hai????mein zyada soo gaya kya..geet ki flight land kar chuki hogi...bhai bhabi tho tayaar hai na...aacha aab hatto mujhe tayaar hone jaana hai.hattooo naaa(all in one go)..

D:arre wah bha agar mujhe pata hota tu aaisa utthaga tho mein tujhe college ke time par bhi aise hi uttha rahunga...

M:matlab😕

Dev made maan turn to the watch and showed the time as 5:31...

M:(sighed)

then only he realised that dev was joking...

M:😡😡bhai kya aapko chain nahi hai...meri jaan nikal di...

D:aacha baba sorry...aacha ek baat poochni thi(little serious)..

M:kya bhai?????

D:😈kya yahan par sethescope milage?????

M:kyun bhai...aur aap ithe serious kyun ho...

D:woh kya hai na mujhe kisi ki dhadkan sunni hai...

M:kiski????

D:hai koi...

M:aacha bhai...no comedy seriously batou kiskeliye chaiya??

D:tere liye😆😆...

M:mera liye😕

D:aaj geet aa rahi hai na tho mein soch raha tha ki mera bhai kitha khush hoga...mein uski khushi sunana chatha hoon...

M:oh bhai...meri yeh khushi sirf aapke wajhe se hai thanku😭..

(haye me emotional😭😭😭)

the room became emotional...

D:aacha aab yeh emotional hona bandh kar aur tayaar ho ja...

M:kyun😕???

D:tu aajkal kuch zyada kyun nahi puchta...aacha chod hume jogging jaana hai...pir kya pata ki mera bhai kal se free ho ya na ho...

M:bhai apke liye me everytime and any time free...but meri first priority hogi sirf geet...

D:😲😡kya tu geet ko aapne bhai se pehela chunega..

then suddenly started laughing...

D:mein bhi yehi chatha hoon...

M:aacha bhai mein fresh ho kar aatha hoon...aap mera neecha wait kare...

D:tikn hai maan...par zaldi aana...kya pata ki tum fresh hote samay bhi geet ke bare mein soocho aur hum late ho jaaye...

they were tensionless as they didnt know the coming danger...and the thing said by dev that he wants maan to always bhi by the side of geet will bhi tested in their journey of

"RISHTON MEIN ULJHAN"

END OF PART 12...

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