A woman's fall

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Trisha_magnet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

They are nice, small and crisp...leaving the temptation for more...😊

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Oh my god just loved all OS
Thanx for such wonderful OS
If u will write more
Plzz do pm 👏

Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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jiglijuju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

heyy .. i really like your shot .. how i wish they could have actually showed capt Rajveer's return .. but anyway i loved it .. n y dont you try writing a fic .. 😆

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Manveer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

i have read the os " much awaited " it is an amazing short story in this os raina's pain feeling their emotions are described very beautifully
2nd part of this is so sweet & lovely even me too surprised naina badi ho gayi the last two word by raj "my love" main to mar jawa

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Manveer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

20 ways to get killed by capt rajveer is indeed very funny
awe! Poor raj even bc has a love life

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Manveer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

I Lost Again
absolutely amazing fantastic awesome
it is just the best i turly love it
after the red saree scene this scene is my 2nd all time favourite scene in this scene everythig (raina's clothing their expression specially raj's expression their sitting position background time bg music ) was just perfect
you have written so beautifully that i can feel it & can easily visualise
you have described raj's feeling his turmoil so perfectly & beautifully that after reading i'm speechless & amused thanks for this os

Edited by npksk8495 - 9 years ago

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Manveer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

A Woman's fall
wow! great awesome very beautifully written
in this scene shweta salve & rajeev are just amazing & their acting & their expressions are marvelous superb you have described this scene very well 👏
you know what i like rajeev but i love rajveer
you are an amazing writer plz try & write more on rn/lrl i will eagerly waiting for your next story & plz do pm me whenever you update

Edited by npksk8495 - 9 years ago