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Immoral WORLD
Part 21

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Chamily observed her every gesture. Specially the way she is behaving... Eating pickle... Being sick... Feeling drowsy.

"are you pregnant?" chamily asked. Geets eyes looked at her instantly.

Geet was certain. She must be! This is the 2nd person who have asked.

"I really don't know! But I think I am, maan have also asked me the same question."

Chamily worried. Very concern.

"are you alright? Do you know how many week?" geet nodes a no. Chamily stood up instantly. And worried. Panicked. Geet observed her worrying face.

"uff aren't this suppose to be happy news!" she made a face and stood up, leaving the kitchen. Why everyone is worried? Well not everyone... Its just her. Always trying to ruin my brain with weird thought. Maan is right I should not share anything with her. She only knows how to ruin the moment.


Later on geet makes her way to the hospital. She was exited while maan barely caring. He was more concern about the mission because if he leaves now, will he be able to come back and where exactly is dev! The thought sees to bother him more and more with the time.


In The hospital, outside of family planing clinic usually a very good sense for a women. Her hand slowly touches her stomach. Taking few sigh breath. She must be round about three weeks pregnant. Geet smiled. Looking at her stomach, then now and then looking at maan. What a stranger she though, yet she is in love with him. He is her husband, yet he done nothing to show or demand he is her husband.


Maan walked up and down, waiting for there turn. A Dr comes out. Smiling at them both. Maan was also very concern about her age. She is only 17! Nearly 18! Isn't this to young? And anyway he was not ready to become a father this soon! But there nothing much could be done now. If she is pregnant now, then be it. He should have been careful earlier.


Maan looked way. The Dr helped geet to lye down while her warm hand touch the stomach. Maan slowly walked way from the place and looked outside. Water droplet trying to crawl down the window glass, it did stay and succeed until a new sets of water hits it, creating a crashing noise. Everything sounded blur. He observed the window For a moment very thoughtless. He really was thinking what he have done to him self. Maan had no intention to walk in to the room to here if she is pregnant. Or how exited she may be or here the word yes you be coming a father Mr khurana. He simply have no interest. Somewhere he really did not feel the connection maybe because everything happening so fast he thought.


Maan again and again thought about his unusual life. Where he have led to. He had power to control and abuse, he chose the road of abuse! Maan closed his eyes in vain. Just couldn't stand the thought. He refuged to think about anything. The most thing now worried him is dev, where exactly is he? It's been nearly 7 weeks. No phone, no letter, where exactly is his physical presence?... It was same thing ringing through his head.


Geet slowly sits up. Smiling at the Dr. All she want to here was yes, yes she is pregnant. Her heart somewhere was sure that this will be positive. She will be pregnant. Geet smiled with the Dr smiles. Which somewhere gave her hints. Her heart sang.


Dr "everything is positive. Congratulation, you are becoming a mother." geets heart skipped several heart beats. She sighed, she was over the moon. She touched her stomach. Smiling. She sat there creasing her tummy. Feeling the small life inside her. Oh how could she not enjoy this moment.


Dr "I will let your husband know the rest." she smiled and left geet to admire her self.


Dr coughs to gain maans attention. He instantly turns round only to find her smiling.

Maan "yes?"

Dr "congratulation, she is pregnant. You are becoming a father." maan stopped breathing. He was not sure how exactly to react. His mind was worrying about many thing at that somewhere he have no solution for. Now this. He wouldn't say this is a problem but still its causing a obstacle. He left all his thought aside...


Maan "can I take home?" he asked. He wasn't sure exactly what els to ask. Nor he wants to. Geet can look after her self. She will be perfectly fine and also she can look after there baby.


Dr "sure!"she gave him a look. His wife is pregnant wasn't he suppose to be happy? " the report of how many week and what medication she should take for the baby and for her self will be here soon but if you want you can come back later and collect."

Maan "I will come next week. We are in hurry now!" dr nodes, gives him a uncomfortable smile because its good to start with some medication early. It's very good for the mother and the child.


Maan slowly makes his way to geet who was still creasing her stomach. She looks at maan smiling.

Geet "I am so happy." she claims. There was no doubt she wasn't happy. Her smile big smile gave it way. Maan wondered does she understand the meaning of becoming a mother!


Maan "we really need to go home now!" geet nodes and tries to come of the high bed, maan comes slowly hastening to help her but eventually he does. Helping her to come off. Geet felt touch. She smiled holding his hand firmly. Then slowly takes his hand resting on her stomach




"hamara bacca!" his lips did not curve to show his happiness instead his eye brow twitches. He gave her a thoughtful look then slowly takes her way. Leaving the curious Dr at the back. Thinking what type of husband is he.


Geet "everyone will be so happy." she was really exited. Jumping in joy. "I know this will be a girl. What do you want? I know most men likes daughter... Bolo na!" she looks at him with a cheery face. Maan ignores...

Maan "enough!" his rough tone came out. "we are leaving for deli soon!" geet looked at him in confusion. "and..." he closed his eyes in frustration. Now he have to change his whole plan. Well it's his child after all. He went in deep thought again. Geets eyes looks at him with surprise and fear. It's there child, he can't behave with her like this. Specially in pregnancy.

Geet "can I ask you something?" she spoke quietly and softly but still the fear of asking a question was always there.

Maan "what is it?" he was rather rude. Extremely rude.

Geet "please don't shout. I hard baby can here. Shout at me much as you like after she is born and when she is not there but please ap aisy angry math hona." she pleads. "for our bacca" maan just observed her. Just couldn't gather him self what and how really to behave.


Geet "have I done anything wrong?" she innocently asks. She really didn't want him to be angry. All she wants is him to be happy. She hesitates to touch his hand, knowing his anger, but after all he is her husband and hearing about this child it didn't make him happy at all.

Geet "are you not happy with this child? It's our baby" she asks innocently. She wants to be sure that he is happy with her and there baby. "look you can feel him." she tkes his hand resting on her stomach. Trying to make him believe how beautiful this moment is.

"can you feel it?"

Maan nodes a no. Geet smiles..

Geet "how can you? It's only probably 3 weeks old!" she laughs. She was happy. And too innocent. Not understand anything about the immoral world round her. Maan just observed her. Trying to read this abnormal girl. Doesn't she have the feeling anger? He have done so much with her... All this... And here she is laughing with him. He found it rather amusing. He soon comes back to the reality.

Maan "enough of laughing! Let's go!" geet gets scared & stops instantly. "it will rain soon! You should go home!" geet nodes... She wanted to ask if he will come or not but of course he won't. It's maan!

Geet kept looking back at him as she walked in to her house...



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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful part.
Its confirmed that Geet is pregnant.
Chameli knows the entire situation and was trying to make sense
but Geet was too innocent to understand anything.
No wonder she found her weird.
Maan is deeper into the unwanted relation now.
I am feeling so bad for him.
He still hasnt got a clue about anything
and here he is stuck with pregnant Geet.
Geet who knew nothing was super happy.
Guess the docs reports may give out some clue to Maan.
He unnecessarily postponed collecting the reports for a week.
More waiting for Maan and us.
very eager to know what is going to happen.
Continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...but he's not happy 🤔😕
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
so it's confirmed geet pregg
i'm sure when maan get the report
i'll know the clue geet more than three
week
maan in a mess no idea where his own
brother is
brilliant part
love it
cont soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...it's great !!
Geet's pregnant but ermm, Maan's not happy at all...:((
Plz cont soon!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh plz cut d suspense yaar. . . . Jst tell whose d father. . . .plz plz plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Geet's pregnant. Thanks for the update.

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