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Posted: 14 years ago
hey swati😃awesome update dear👏👏👏...i guessed that abhay will break her heart...wow i loved this abhay yaar...he beautifully handed the situition...but still i felt bed that he did this...i m in love with this pia haa...plz update soonhav anice dayluv usunita
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazinggg
poor piaaa.
plz plz cnt soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏👏👏👏awsome abhiya and pia jealousy even i got burned...ha ha ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter XIX
Soon they reached back to the dehradun and went back to their homes and hostel as it was night. Tomorrow it was holiday as it was Sunday. On Monday, the college had to resume back and things would come back in their proper places back. But was it true for all?
As soon as piya reached the hostel, she bade misha and aleena goodbye and went straight to her room. She quickly changed into her night dress and put all her belongings back where they should be kept. She lay down on her bed after switching off all the lights. She tried to sleep but slumber was far from her. She tossed on her bed changing positions but still it didn't make any difference. Her heart was aching and it dint allow her to sleep. She pulled her blanket over her face and started crying to take her frustration out. She could not bear that abhay loved someone else but why. She got up from her bed and ran in her bathroom locking it from inside.
Piya (to herself): why…. What is all this…. Why am I jealous of her? I should be happy for abhay but why can't I? Have I really fallen in love with him…. But how can I? But why can't I? oh god…. What do I do? If I love him then why don't he loves me? Oh god…. Is love so difficult…?
Piya splashed some water over her face and wiped it with the towel but tears were not leaving her eyes. They were still there.
Piya (to herself): all is over now…. OVER…. I have fallen in love with the one who is not mine…. Why piya…. Why? You could love someone else but no…. things which are not yours only tempt you…. But now…. I have to end all this and start fresh…FRESH.
She wiped away the tears and came out unknowingly that someone was also hurting to see her this way. Abhay was in her room when she was inside the bathroom listening her pain which she was blurting out in front of the mirror. He soon left the room when she was about to come out. As soon as piya came out, she could feel that abhay was here sometime before.
Piya (to herself): why do I feel that abhay was here? Oh god…. I have gone mad…. Piya…. Get a life…. You are turning insane…. The door is locked from inside…. Nobody was here…. Now go and sleep…
She slowly went and lay back on her bed to find some sleep.
Next morning
Piya was still sleeping but her slumber was disturbed by someone who was continuously knocking the door. She quickly got up and opened the door and found misha fuming with anger. She asked her to come in.
Misha: piya madam…. Where were you from last 2 hours…. I have tried your phone almost for 100 times but no answer…. You were sleeping right….
Piya: itni subah-subah kyon phone kar rahi thi….
Misha: subah….. Ghadi dekhi hai….. 11 baj rahe hain…. Kumbhkarn….
Piya: kya….. Aaj toh pehla lecture miss ho gayaa…. Mujhe pehle nahi utha paa rahi thi….
Misha: oye…. Aaj Sunday hai…. Dumbo…. Hey…. Why are your eyes swollen…?
Piya: tab theek hai…. Actually I was missing my mom….isliye….Waise itna important kya tha Jo tumne 100 calls kiye….
Misha: aleena ne ghar bulaya hai….jaldi taiyaar ho…. Hum aleena ke ghar jaa rahe hain…. Kah rahi thi ki kuch important hai….
Piya: just 10 minutes…..
Piya got ready in 10 minutes. She wore a navy blue spaghetti top over beige shorts leaving her hairs falling over her shoulders and back. She put some make up to cover her swollen eyes but it was of no use. Soon they left for raichand mansion.
Aleena had called piya with misha so that Haseena and Chand could meet piya without any problem but abhay didn't want to face piya. Aleena had received the photographs which they clicked on the trip and it was a nice excuse to ask piya to meet her in her house.
Dehradun, raichand mansion, 11:30am
Haseena and Chand were eager to meet piya as they wanted to see her in flesh because both abhay and aleena described her so well that it was necessary for them to meet her. Both were ancient vampires and had control over themselves but still abhay told that piya's blood was very potent and luring so they should take care. Aleena was in her black tank top with red shorts and abhay was in his khaki pants and white t-shirt. Abhay was in his room to avoid piya as he couldn't see her burning in anger, pain and jealousy. Aleena could understand but still she felt that his brother wasn't right in keeping piya in dark about his love. The elder vampires were sitting in the hall near the fireplace waiting for piya while aleena was in the never used kitchen to prepare something for piya and misha when they would come.
Soon aleena could feel piya near so she came out of the kitchen and alerted everybody. Piya entered in the mansion and found aleena waiting for them. She came and hugged her.
Piya: aleena…. Good morning….. Why did you call us….?
Aleena: I have got the photographs…. I thought you would like to see….
Misha: wow…. Aleena…. You are superb…. I want to see them fast….
Piya: yeah show them….
Haseena and Chand came near the girls.
Aleena: piya…. Meet my dad and my mom…. Mom and dad…. Piya…. My friend….
Piya: hello uncle…. Hello aunty…..
Chand: hello dear….
Haseena: hello beta….. So you are new here…. Feel yourself home here…. We have listened a lot about you from aleena and abhay…. you are really sweet….
Piya: thanks aunty…. You are also nice….
Chand: aleena…. Take your friend to your room….
Haseena: I'll send something to eat for both of you….
Aleena: sure dad….
As soon as aleena took piya and misha with her, Chand took Haseena to their room.
Chand: Haseena…. Did you notice…?
Haseena: what Chand….?
Chand: piya's aura…
Haseena: piya's aura….. ?
Chand: Haseena…. Spill the beans…. You are an ancient…. Don't be so nave…. Her aura resembles to someone….
Haseena understood: daughter of sun and moon…..
Chand: finally…. Finally you cracked it….. She is the most powerful aura of this world…. Heir of the power of sun and moon…. Ruler of the supernatural world…. I thought it was a myth…. but now its reality…. Jisko main salon se dhoondh raha tha who mere paas khud chalke aa gayi….
Haseena: so…. Now Chand…. Should we tell this to abhay and aleena…. To superiors….
Chand: no…. not now…. Let us be sure and then slowly we will tell all this to abhay and aleena but now our main aim is to protect piya…. For abhay and for our race…. But we have to tell this to our superiors….
Haseena: I am always with you….
Aleena showed all the photographs to piya and misha. Misha was happy to see the pics but it was painful for piya as every photo had abhay and piya in the same frame. It was so true that both were sailing in the same ship, both were in pain but were not able to tell anyone. Trying to show that they were strong but inside they were hollow filled with only PAIN. Piya took some photos in which she was either alone or with someone else other than abhay but her heart didn't agreed so she took a photo I which abhay as lifting piya in the dance competition. She quickly put the photos in her handbag and asked aleena for the wash room. She told her the way and piya went out of the room to find it. As soon as piya left, aleena told misha that abhay and piya had a fight so they had to something to make them friends again.
Aleena: misha…. Bro aur piya had a fight and now both are hurting each other…. We have to do something….
Misha: yeah…. piya bhi kuch different sa behave kar rahi hai…. Let me think….
Aleena: what about some party…?
Misha: par kisliye party….
Aleena: we will ask panchi to talk to the principal and organize party for students to celebrate our achievements in the youth festival…. What say…?
Misha: waah aleena…. Mere saath rahkar toh tum bhi intelligent ho gayi…..
Aleena: hey I was born this way….
Misha: haan-haan theek hai lady gaga….
Piya was trying to find the wash room but wasn't able to and suddenly a hand pulled her inside a room. It was abhay who pulled her and they were so close now. He kept his hand over her mouth so that she doesn't scream but slowly he removed. Abhay could see that piya's eyes were swollen and now also her eyes were just about to spill tears. It made his heart wrench.
Abhay: tum raat bhar ro rahi thi?
Piya: tumse matlab….
Abhay: yes or no?
Piya: no….
Abhay: liar…. World's worst liar…..
Piya: leave me…. I need to go….
Abhay: if I refuse to leave you….
Piya: what do you mean?
Abhay: I won't leave you till you accept that you were crying….
Piya: no I wasn't crying…. Why would I cry….?
Abhay: I want truth or else I will really never leave you…
Piya: don't you think that you are cheating your girlfriend…. You should not be with another girl…. That too this much close….
Abhay: she doesn't have any problem with this….
Piya: but I have….
Abhay: what?
Piya: yeah… I feel like I am betraying my boyfriend…. So would you please leave me now….?
Abhay left piya with a sudden jerk. He was shocked to listen that piya had someone else other than him in her life. He thought that piya was just trying to make him jealous.
Abhay: boyfriend? What rubbish? you are just trying to make me jealous…..
Piya: why would I? I really have a boyfriend who loves me a lot…..
Abhay: who? Kabir….
Piya: no…. Kabir is a friend….
Abhay: then who….
Piya: jay…..
Abhay: jay…?
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Precap- proof needed….!!!!!!
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So…. Finally…. Chand and Haseena know piya's truth of being the most powerful…. What will be their next move…?
Now jay is piya's boyfriend…. REALLY…. How will abhay reel this shock…..? What would he do now….? Is it abhay-piya-jay love triangle…..?
Stay tuned for more mysteries to open up…. And please send your feedbacks soon…. Guys I wont be able to send updates till 25th aug…. as I am on holidays and will spend my time with my gang…. So bear with me…!!!!
Regards….
Swati…!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey swati😃

awesome update dear👏👏👏...woww chandeena came to know that pia is powerful aura...its really painful n sad yaar...poor pia😭😭😭😭...hey abhay heard everythingnaa...that pia love him...so why is he soo shocked...loved to see the jeolousy update...abhay will not be able see someone touching pia so he will soon blurt out his feeling for pia...plz update soonhav a nice dayluv usunita
Edited by sunu123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nicely written part swati, bt it was emotional n painfull

bt for a change i was waiting for jay's entry in ur ff, coz i think he wl help abhay to blurt out his feelings just by showing himself as pia's bf!!
ur story is progressing very well
bt one thing i wanna knw when abhay had already heard what pia was saying abt him infront of d mirror then y he believed her when she said abt jay??
looking forward to d nxt part
thanx for d pm n continue soon
Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update ...update quickly ...please dont write that piya is doing some cooche cooh with jay please ...its hurt me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Swati...well written 👏
Loved reading to... So Jeh's entry will be the twist...i wanna see more on Piya's aura and how she's powerful...
enjoy your holiday 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow swati awesome part Y Abhay always hurt Pia so much.Ohh I guess love triangle will start now.Is jeh wolfie here.I hope soon chandeena tell Abhay abt Pia's aura or Abhay will throw her far away frm him😭😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update! So finally Jeh is brought into the story! I think Jeh will be a catalyst to the Abhiya love story, he'll definitely cause Abhay to confess his feelings to Piya as Abhay is already jealous with the thought that Piya has a boyfriend! 😆 Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

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