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awesome update
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awesum part !!!!!!!! continuee sooon
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THANKXXX... TO ALL OF YOU WHO LOVED AND LIKED THE PREVIOUS UPDATE... THERE IS A SMALL NOTE AFTER THE 9th CHAPTER...

PLEASE DO READ IT...
AND I AM REALLY SORRY FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART THAT I COULD REPLY EVERYONE INDIVIDUALLY...
REGARDS...
SWATI...!!!!!! 🥱
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Chapter VIII
Ancient village near mussorie, near riverside, camps, next morning, 7:00am
Everyone was up in early morning. Some were getting ready while some were still getting freshen up. Panchi was very amazed by seeing piya's efficiency. Piya completed all her task within minutes.
Till now piya had not met abhay. So, aleena decided to plan their first official meeting. She asked abhay to meet her near the riverside where nobody would be there right now. And she also asked piya to get to the same place to bring her scarf which she left there last night.
Riverbank, 8:00am
Abhay went to the same place where aleena had asked him to meet. When he reached there, suddenly the wind started to blow faster. He could see a scarf placed near the rocks. The scarf blew and came on abhay's face. Suddenly he could hear a beautiful voice coming from back. He turned and his heart jumped with joy as he could see piya standing in front of him. He could feel his zaara standing again in flesh infront of him as before piya entered in the scenario, abhay just used to dream about zaara, his zaara. This time he wasn't affected by how piya looks but his love for his zaara outdated his loathe for Maithili.
Piya was shocked to see the same boy who used to come in her dreams but she was more bewildered that he was holding her scarf which aleena asked to bring. The boy who was standing in front of her was having the same face but his clothes were changed and he had a great posture now.
Piya went near abhay and abhay stretched his hand in which he was holding piya's scarf. Piya went near him and lifted her hand but till now she did not utter any word. Abhay was shocked and scared to see piya's reaction. He couldn't figure what was going in piya's mind. For piya, it was like the boy had just stepped into reality for her distant dream. Her heart was screaming about some connection with him and there was no doubt about that. She was feeling as if she would surely run into his arms the next moment and would never ever leave him. Piya couldn't figure why was she feeling so but this boy had a great attraction power for sure. She could feel that this boy was the same one who saved her from the car that night.
Abhay was astonished with piya's response to him. Piya lifted her hand and touched abhay's face slowly. She was shocked as his skin was ice cold and he was not showing any movement. Abhay did not want that piya should run away from him so he didn't say anything to piya. Piya broke the silence.
Piya: oh god…same face…j...Just the same…totally same face…how can this happen… it so cold…who are you… I haven't seen you here before… who are you… tell me…
Abhay: don't be scared… I will not harm you… I am your friend's brother…your classmate…
Piya: which friend… I haven't seen you before… not on the trip…never in the college… who are you and you have the same face of that boy… who are you…
Before abhay could say something, misha came finding piya followed by aleena.
Aleena: hey… piya… don't be scared… he is my brother…
Aleena introduced abhay and piya officially.
Aleena: bro…meet piya…piya jaiswal…she is a scholarship student and she joined this year only… and piya, he is my elder brother abhay…abhay raichand…
Abhay: and that is why you never saw me before piya…
Piya: but how did you reach here…aleena told me that you were out of station for some work… and your face…
Abhay: yeah… when I got to know that you all are here so I finished my work and came to join you all… and what's with my face that is troubling you…
Piya: your face is so cold and like marble…
Aleena: piya…don't worry bro… hamesha aise hi rahte hain…
Misha was getting annoyed with their introduction session so she interrupted.
Misha: accha ab baki ki batein baad mein karenge kyonki panchi ne sabko riverside pe 8:15am par report karne ko kaha hai… aur koi agar late ho jayega to phir yahi choot jayega…
Misha took piya with her leaving aleena and abhay behind. Aleena gave abhay a huge smile and followed piya and misha. Abhay was still trying to figure out what piya must be thinking about him and his face.
Ancient village near mussorie, near riverside, 8:15am
Everyone assembled near the riverbank including abhay and piya. Panchi announced that they are going to do river rafting and for that they had to go to a nearby village on foot. She asked everyone to take some clothes for themselves as they would get wet in water. Misha was jumping with the name of water and river rafting. Panchi asked everyone to assemble again after doing as directed at sharp 8:30 am.
When everyone assembled again, villagers also came to bid them goodbye and asked them to return timely. They had to walk on foot to the next village. Misha was trying to outdate everyone like a small child. Abhay was still thinking about what had happened in the morning. Aleena was also walking with piya and kabir. Kabir was constantly trying to talk to piya but piya was in her own world. She was feeling as if a puzzle was placed before her with a single clue that doesn't make sense.
Piya was thinking about abhay, her nightmare and what her mother had told her. She was trying to link each and everything but when nothing linked so she decided to leave everything as it is. She decided to live in present and face it bravely.
River rafting camp, 9:00am
When everyone reached the river rafting camp, the captains gave proper instructions to the students. They asked them to change their clothes and wear proper life jackets for proper safety. They asked them to take the best jackets and leave the defective pieces.
Since, t was annoyed of piya's increasing fame so she decided to teach piya a lesson. T exchanged piya's lifejacket with a defective piece. Piya did not give it attention and wore it. None of them also noticed it.
When everyone reported after changing, The captains made groups of 4-5 students each. Piya, kabir, misha, t, one of the t chamchis were in the same group. Other group consisted of abhay, panchi, aleena, angad and ruhi. Everyone was settled in their rafts and then the captains showed them the demo.
After demonstration, students tried to do the same things as shown in supervision of professional coaches. While rafting they passed through 4 rapids namely baby rapid, three broad mices, one being unmanned and the last one body surfing rapid. Initially after seeing the strong currents of river Ganges even though they were assured of 100% safety, still some students specially those who did not know swimming were little apprehensive about the activity but once in water they enjoyed the activity to the core.
Piya's raft was the second one and abhay's raft was the first. When piya's raft reached the deepest point, t pushed piya out of the raft. Since piya didn't know swimming she screamed for help. Kabir managed to catch piya's hand but due to high current piya's hand slipped from his hand. Piya started flowing with the current and she started drowning in the water because her life jacket was defective. On seeing all this, abhay jumped in the water to save piya. He took piya in his arms and took her to the riverbank.
T also jumped in the water so that abhay must save her but instead of abhay, angad came to save her. She pretended to be unconscious but when angad took her to the riverbank she opened her eyes and saw that she was in angad arms. She asked angad to leave her so angad also left her and she fell in the shallow water. On seeing this everyone started laughing at t.
Piya was still unconscious and abhay was trying hard to make her conscious. Aleena came and took piya to the tent and after sometime piya gained consciousness.
When piya became conscious she decided to thank abhay. The captains came to ask everyone to resume, but piya and abhay refused. Aleena also refused to raft again. Leaving these three, everyone went again for river rafting.
Riverbank, 10:00am
Piya: thanks a lot…abhay… really you saved me today…
Abhay: that was nothing… but can I ask you something…
Piya: what… what do you want to ask…?
Abhay: have we met before… do you feel that you know me… have you felt any connection between us…
Piya: I don't think that we met before but I feel that I have seen you somewhere before… from the time I came to dehradun, everything is going a bit strange… I don't know why…
Then piya went in her world of thoughts and imaginations. Abhay also didn't disturb her because he saw that she was very happy in her own world.
Others were having a lot of fun in water. So, much so that the escorts had a tough time in pursuing them to come out of water after four hours. Misha was so stubborn that she didn't want to come out of the water. Panchi gave her last warning that if she doesn't come out now then they will leave her and go.
After everyone came out of water and changed their clothes, they returned back to the village and their riverside camps.
Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 14 years ago
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Siddhartha ' he is a newborn vampire turned by a vampire whom Siddhartha never met. He only knows that she was a woman who turned him for her own evil purpose. He doesn't know what the real plans of that vampire were. As story develops, Siddhartha will develop as an important character with a lot of shades.
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Chapter IX
Ancient village near mussorie, near riverside, 8:15pm
After returning back, all of them played games and took dinner. Piya served everyone dinner and helped the villagers in other works. Abhay was also trying his level best to look normal and behave like a human. He also helped piya and the villagers in serving the food.
As the night advanced, everyone went to sleep but aleena and abhay went for hunting. Tomorrow they had to return to the hill view resort. They had spent almost 2 days in the village and had got many new memories for life.
Ancient village near mussorie, near riverside, camps, next morning, 7:00am
Today they had to leave the village, the riverside and the scenic beauty of that surrounding to return back to the resort. The only person who was very sad was piya because she had made a strong bond with the nature there. The mountains, trees, grasses, flowers, animals, villagers etc were now the eminent part of her family. She bade the entire people goodbye with a heavy heart and left the village to return back to the resort.
Mussorie, hill view resort, 10:45am
They reached the resort and freshened up for the lunch. After taking their lunch, everyone left the dining hall and went to sleep as there was a party organized for them at the resort party hall in the evening.
Mussorie, hill view resort, party hall, 7:00pm
All the girls dressed themselves in beautiful evening flowing knee length gowns.
Piya was looking like an angel in her baby pink gown, her hairs were loosely tied in a bun and she wore two small matching pearl earrings with her dress.
All the eyes were fixed on her, when she entered the party hall. Abhay was dressed in white shirt with black trousers and a matching black blazer. Though all the girls wanted to dance and be with abhay but his heart was only with piya. Deep in heart, piya also felt a strong bond with abhay but she was not able to make sense why was she feeling like that.
Everyone was enjoying the party and was on the dancing floor except piya and abhay. Misha went to take piya but she noticed something strange with piya.
In the whole party, her eyes were fixed on abhay and misha noticed it very easily. Piya was sitting on one of the couch which was facing abhay. Abhay was also sitting on the couch facing piya. Abhay's eyes were also locked with piya's. Misha came and broke their eye lock.
Misha: piya'jab se abhay aaya hai, tumne toh mujhe aur baaki sabko bhula hi diyaa hai' kahin tumhe L.O.V.E. syndrome toh nahi ho gayaa hai'
Piya: misha'aisa kuch bhi nahi hai bas mere Kisi cheez mein Mann nahi lag raha hai'
Misha: yeah' I know why' phir bhi aao hamare sang dance karo naa please'
Piya: nahi misha mera Mann nahi hai'
Then misha went to the drinks corner where aleena was sitting. Aleena was happily watching abhay and piya who were in their own world.
Misha: aleena' tere bhai ne meri best friend KO beemar kar diya hai'
Aleena: aisa kya kiya bro ne Jo tum unki complain karne mere paas aayi ho'
Misha: tumhare USS saroo bhai ne piya ke L.O.V.E. syndrome de diya hai aur ab who ussi ke khayalon mein dubbi hai'
Aleena: piya bhi kuch kam nahi hai' aaj kal bro mere bare mein kam aur piya ke bare mein zyadaa sochte hain'lagta hai dono ko love ho Gaya hai'
Misha: woh toh saaf dikh raha hai lekin ye dono manene KO taiyaar hi nahi hain'
Aleena: toh tumhi kuch plan karo Na mish'
Misha: theek hai' when misha is here then there is no fear'
Then, misha and aleena decided to have couple dance according to chits.
According to chits, the couples were--- abhay- piya, angad- kabir, aleena- misha, panchi- ruhi. Firstly all the couples danced at the dance floor except abhay and piya.
After everyone danced and the dance floor was cleared, abhay piya danced with elegance on the song pyaar kii ek kahaani suno. They were dancing as if the whole world had disappeared. Piya had left her whole body on abhay and he was handling her with total care and attention. They so much synchronized as if they had practiced with each other for years and ages. None could find any fault in them. Nobody noticed when the song ended and the other was started. Abhay and piya also didn't want to leave each other but when the second song ended, everyone in the hall started to clap and their dance ended.
After the dance ended, everyone took dinner and went back to their rooms.
Piya was now feeling much better than before. When she was dancing with abhay, her heart was dancing with joy and was totally content. Today she peacefully slept with no dream to scare her.
Mussorie, hill view resort, next morning, 6:00am
Abhay had gone for hunting. Everyone was still sleeping like t, kabir, angad, tracker etc but some like Piya, aleena, misha and panchi had got up early in the morning. So, these girls decided to go spend their morning time in the swimming pool.
Panchi and piya had decided to maintain a distance from the water due to the incident that had happened with piya a day before. She had nearly drowned but was saved by abhay. Aleena and misha were having a great fun in the swimming pool. Suddenly a bright idea struck misha's mind.
She stepped out of the swimming pool and asked aleena also to come. Both went to piya and surrounded piya with their puppy faces.
Piya: hey' what are you going to ask? Hmmm.
Misha: piya' we have an offer for you' a bright offer'
Piya: What types of offer' please give the details madam misha'?
Misha: the offer is exclusively for you and this offer needs your accompany in the swimming pool' so that we can teach you swimming.
Piya: no'no'no'misha' I will maintain a huge distance from the water from now'
Misha: piya' don't behave like a coward' come Na please'
Aleena: piya' come Na please' we will surely teach you with proper safety'
Piya, aleena and misha turned to for panchi's decision. Panchi also permitted the girls so piya went to change her swimsuit. When piya returned, all the three girls went in the water.
Aleena and misha gave piya training as if they were proper trainers. Since piya was a bright student and a quick learner so she also learned swimming in just an hour.
After an hour, all the girls including panchi were in the swimming pool and everyone was enjoying themselves. Piya was now swimming quite well than before.
Now, she had learned swimming and was hungry now. So, the girls left the swimming pool for changing and taking their breakfast.
On breakfast table, 8:00am
All the girls including piya had come to the breakfast table. They took their breakfast but panchi was a bit sad. Piya noticed it and asked her what was troubling her. Panchi told that she was sad because she wasn't able to talk her father for a long time. Misha showed piya her father's photograph. Piya was shocked and heartbroken after seeing the photo that misha showed her. She couldn't bear to stay there for a minute also so she ran towards the jungle surrounding hill view resort.
Mussorie, jungle near hill view resort, 8:30am
Piya was totally grief stricken. She had secretly run from the resort towards the forest without telling anyone. She had been crying continuously and cursing her fate to land her in dehradun in the first place.
When she was in deep jungle, she stopped and fell on the ground. She was still crying and cursing herself. It was quite late now and the sun was about to set. Piya was all tired now.
Piya (to herself): why god'why' all this had to happen only to me' I have never felt so helpless and ridiculous before. Why mum' why' please mum'please'take me to the place where only you are there' I don't want to live anymore' I only want you and your company' I want to die now mom'
Suddenly she heard some footsteps. Piya lifted her head to see what was there and she saw a man standing before her. She didn't know that man but that man was not a simple human being.
Piya: who are you? What are you doing here?
Siddhartha: madam'the same question rules on you'..
Piya: first I have asked you tell me'.
Siddhartha: love, the big deal is I am going to help you in your noble work'
Piya: which noble work?
Siddhartha: just now you only said that you want to die'
Piya: what???
Piya understood what were Siddhartha's real intentions so she decided to return back. She got up and turn back to return. Siddhartha caught piya's hairs, she cried in pain.
Siddhartha: where are you going my diet breakfast' I am so hungry'
Piya: leave me' I have to go'
Piya took some mud from the ground and threw it on Siddhartha's face. He pulled piya's hairs again and tried to bite her. Suddenly, a hand pulled Siddhartha and threw him on the other tree. The hand was none other than of abhay's.
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i am really not able to reply anyone individually as i am very tired and shattered due to the news that my only serial of my whole life is gonna end... i havent watched any serial in my whole life except 'pyaar kii ye ek kahaani' and TVD...
no other thing in my life affects to the extent this show does... i really want that this news to be just a rumor and if pkyek is gonna end then after star one's revamp... there must be another season of pkyek... i still remember that day... 12th sept... when i saw the first promo of this historical show in the history of indian television... the day on which i set my eyes on this show... i could feel every moment of it... i heart this show... and the two most promising and historical characters abhay and piya which are perfectly given justics by vivian dsena and sukiriti khandpal... are so out of this world... no words can explain my love towards them... when they cry, torture or even give each other a cold look... i feel like getting in the tv and make everything alright... and when they are happy... i feel like... wow how... how beautiful... i really dont have words now... i just hope everything turns out well... and pkyek... must not end... it is truly my LIFE... it is my PASSION... may be... it is like a DRUG to me...
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finally abhiya met and this is my last double update... from now onwards i will update only one chapter... that too in 2-3 days... till i get confirmed that pkyek... isnt getting offair...
and please dont forget to send your feedbacks...
signing off...
regards...
swati...!!!! 😕 😭 🤢 😲 🥱 😭 🥱 🤢
Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing nd superb yaar.
u rock.
luvlyyy
plz plz
cnt wid next part soon.
luv u
vritika
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wonderful dear...
luvlyy
plz plz do cnt soon.
luv u
vritika
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yupeee... finally... i guess it is confirmed...
PKYEK IS NOT GETTING OFF-AIR ANYTIME SOON...
REGARDS...
SWATI...!!!!
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awsome updates once again😃
bt hey don't lose hope sweety..we all r upset abt the rumer.it am crazy abt pkyek too.
bt we have to try hard to convince them not to end this show.spam them,call them.don't waste time being upset.
we will not give up on our show...😊
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fab update love it thank for the pm ... xx😊

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