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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
awesome update...waiting for some AbhIya scenes...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hey thanx swati for d double bonanza offer...
both parts were very nice...
i loved d way misha-aleena- pia became frnds so easily...
n dat was too funny where aleena called misha monkey n she called abhay -donkey...😆
so pia is already finding abhay's name cute...ahem ahem😉
kabir- i m gonna love him till d day he wl nt try to come b/w abhay-pia😆
nw waiting for clg trip...n ofcourse abhay- pia's meeting...
pls continue soon...
thanx for d pm


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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
awesome update..
can't wait till abhiya's meeting..
kabir .. poor guy..he gets a slap...hehe..
continue soon..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

both updates were really fantastic

they were surely a treat for us😃
misha and pia's friendship is blossoming i m really happy at this
i hope we will get to see abhay pia meeting in coming update
the trip is ought to be very exciting
thanks for the pm and continue giving us treats like this

thankxxx...
abhiya are going to meet in my next to next update...
trip is quite interesting and adventuorous too...
till then stay tuned,,,
swati...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
thankxx... to all of you...
and i am really glad that you liked it...
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take care... and stay tuned for more updates...
regards...
swati...!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: missglam

awesome update..

can't wait till abhiya's meeting..
kabir .. poor guy..he gets a slap...hehe..
continue soon..thanks for the pm
tc

thankx...
abhiya gonna meet soon...
swati...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow yaar loved both ur updates.Destiny planned 2 bring Abhiya 2gether.Pia is going 2 masoorie 2 b wid Abhay.Sugandh was hinting Pia abt Abhay I guess.I m happy the way u r planning out all😊

i am really glad that u liked it...
abhiya will surely come together...
thankxxx once again...
swati...
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Chapter VI
Dehradun, Dobriyal house, 7:00am
Next morning
Piya and panchi woke up early but they had a great trouble in waking up misha. Piya, panchi and misha got ready for the trip, took their breakfast, and left for the trip… misha and piya left in another car to pick aleena up and panchi went straight to the college to check the arrangements of the trip…
Dehradun, in the bus, 7:45am
Misha, piya and aleena sat together in the bus while Kabir sits with Angad. Panchi and tracker too sit together. Everyone gets seated in the bus except t and her bimbo chamchis, as they were late. Misha starts getting annoyed.
Misha in a frown: panchi…agar ye bus agle paanch minute mein nahi chali toh main isko khud hi drive karke chali jaoongi…
Panchi: mish… shut up main us bimbo t ka intezaar kar rahi hoon kyonki principal ne kaha hai ki koi chootna nahi chahiye…
Misha (chuckled): but she must be busy with her makeup usse aanaa hoga toh WO aajayegi…waise hum jaa kahan rahe hain… jab princi announce kar raha tha toh main so rahi thi…
Panchi (annoyed): hum mussorie jaa rahe hain…pure 10-dino ke liye… and now shut up your mouth…
Then panchi asks the bus driver to move, as she was also annoyed with t. aleena gets shocked that they were going to mussorie for the trip where abhay had gone so that piya remains safe…
On the way to mussorie, in the bus, 8:00am
On the way to mussorie, panchi saw t and her chamchis standing on the road to take the bus…
Panchi: what are you doing here…why did not you come to the college for the trip…
T: Actually, I had to go to the parlor so I was late…
Panchi: ok…come on…in…
Misha was the only one who was cheering everyone with her sense of humor. She could not shut up her mouth for even a second. Kabir, Ruhi and Angad were also having a great time with piya and misha. But aleena was in her deep thought. She was thinking about what was going to happen as they are heading towards mussorie. Then aleena suddenly gets another vision.
Aleena got another vision in which abhay is running fast to save piya but is a bit late so he is screaming in anger. She thinks hard and then decides to call abhay and tell about the vision.
She calls abhay but due to network problem, she is not able to talk to him.
On the way to Mussorie, 4:00pm
All of them were very excited about their trip but piya was still trying to figure what her mother told her in her dream. She was not so worried about anything but still she wanted to know that who is so important, who is going to enter her life soon…
Mussorie, hill view resort, 5:00pm
All of them reached mussorie and checked in the resort. The scenic beauty of the resort was worth seeing and everyone went to his or her room as all of them were tired. Today, they took their dinner and went to sleep. Tomorrow, they had to go to some village near mussorie so they had to get up early. Piya, aleena and misha shared the room while Kabir and Angad took another room. Panchi and tracker went to their room.
Mussorie, hill view resort, misha-piya's room, 10:00pm
Piya, aleena and misha had developed a strong bond of friendship and the trio spent a lot of time gossiping with each other. Aleena was very upset with the vision and she wanted to talk to abhay about her vision but she was not able to do so. Piya could sense aleena's trouble so she decided to ask her.
Piya: aleena… you are looking upset…is something troubling you…you can tell me…may be I can help you…
Misha: yeah…piya is right…I can also see that something is troubling you…aleena…is that your saroo brother, abhay… if he is….then I will surely break his jaw…
Aleena: no…yaar… bro ne kuch nahi kiya bas mujhe unse baat karni thi aur unka phone nahi lag raha hai… it is nothing serious… you guys don't worry… lets sleep now… it is too late and tomorrow we have to wake up early…
Piya: ok… If you are saying so… but where is your brother, he did not come with you… where he is…
Aleena tried to cover with an excuse: actually, he had to go out of town for some business purpose so he could not join us…
Misha: ok…so let us sleep now…good night…
Suddenly aleena's phone rings and it was abhay's call.
Misha: dekha naam liya uska aur sachme shaitaan ka phone AA Gaya.
Aleena went to the resort garden to take the call.
Mussorie, hill view resort, garden, 10:30pm
Aleena went to the garden to talk with abhay who was on the line on phone.
Aleena: yeah… bro I was trying to call you hard but you were not taking your phone…are you safe Na…
Abhay: yeah I am safe…and what about you and piya…are you both safe… have you handled the situation well…
Aleena: yeah… we are safe but there is one problem… we both are in mussorie for a college trip… and I had another vision…
Abhay: there is no problem with the trip as I will be out of mussorie for some days… so tell me… what was the vision… was it about piya…
Aleena: yes it was about you and piya.
Abhay: me and piya…????
Aleena: yeah…In the vision, I saw you running fast to save piya but you were late and then I saw you screaming with anger on yourself…
Abhay: so I think piya will get in another danger on the trip only…
Aleena: if I am not wrong… then I think you must return as soon as possible as there is no other option left… you directly reach to the resort where we are staying…
Abhay: but we decided that I would not show my face to her…
Aleena: If you will not show your face to her then she might not be able to show her face to you ever… you must return…
Abhay: ok let me think something and talk about this to mom… I will call you later and tum piya aur apna dhyaan rakhna…
Aleena: theek hai…bhai … but Jo karna hai jaldi karo otherwise time nikal jayega and phir baad mein pachtaana padega…
Abhay: ok… bye...
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is this part complete or u r writing more
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Chapter VII
Mussorie, hill view resort, misha-piya's room, 10:45pm
Aleena goes back to her room and sees piya and misha sleeping.
In the night
Aleena was busy with her thought as always because today slumber was far away from her. Though vampires don't sleep but usually aleena used to lazily spend time in her bed before piya entered in the scenario. She never cursed piya for taking her comfort. She was happy to see piya sleeping near her with no tension.
Aleena (facing piya and caressing piya's hair): dear… piya…tum kitni sweet lagti ho sote huye… tumhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki akhir tumhari kismat mein kya likha hai… tumpe konse dangers mandra rahe hain… par tumhe pareshaan hone ki koyi zaroorat bhi nahi hai kyonki main aur bhai tum tak koyi danger ko pahuchne nahi denge…
After that aleena went and sat on her bed.
At night in misha-piya's room
Piya screamed with pain due to a horrible nightmare, which she used to get from her early childhood. Everyone was shocked to hear her scream and gathered in the room.
Panchi: what happened piya… why were you screaming… did you see a bad dream…
Misha: yeah dude tumne toh mujhe daraa hi dala…
Kabir: wow…piya tum pehli aisi insaan ho jisne misha ko dara daala…
Panchi: both of you… shut up your foolish talks and koi piya KO pani do…
Aleena: lo piya paani piyo and ab sab wapas jao… mai aur misha hai yaha piya ka dhyaan rakhne ke liye…
Piya: sorry to disturb you all… all this is my fault…
Panchi: piya…there is no fault in having a nightmare… it can happen with anyone… ok then … good night…
Everyone headed towards his or her room and aleena and misha started asking piya about the nightmare.
Aleena: piya… kya tum mujhe apna dream bataogi taaki mai tumhari help kar sakoon…
Misha: haan…piya ab batao aisa kya dream tha Jo tum itni zor se chilayi…
Piya: ye same dream mujhe apne bachpan se aata hai… lekin kabhi samjh me nahi aaya ki kyon yahi dream aata hai…
Aleena: kaisa dream…
Piya: mere dream me ek ladka aata hai Jo ek ladki KO apni goad me rakh kar chila raha hai… us ladki ke bahut saara khoon nikal raha hai aur who ladka bahut helpless hai… aur mai uski koi madad nahi kar paa rahi hoon…
Aleena was shocked to hear piya's dream as it was the same scene after zaara's death that Abhay used to scream taking zaara in his lap. She understood that piya does not know about her past birth but just has that dream of her past.
Aleena: ok... Piya leave it and try to sleep again…
Misha: piya agar tum chaho toh hum lights on karke so sakte hain…
Piya: sorry to disturb you all but there is no need of it…
Misha: ok then… let us sleep now… good night once again…
Piya and misha sleep again while aleena was busy in thinking about piya's dream and her vision. She constantly tried to link both of them but was not successful. Now she was more disturbed with piya's dream and her last vision. She was oscillating between her brother and piya as if she was a ping pong ball who was once bouncing towards Abhay and then once towards piya.
But then she thought that Abhay and piya are on the same side so she doesn't need to bounce anymore.
Now she focused on making Abhay and piya meet as soon as possible as this is the best way to make piya safe. Piya is most safe with Abhay and Abhay will never let even a needle to prick piya. She was his life and aleena would never let anyone take his brother's life. Though aleena was not abhay's biological sister but she was only one in abhay's life who would never leave him in any condition.
As the night advanced, Aleena also started feeling comfortable.
Mussorie, Next morning, leaving the hill view resort for the village trip, 7:00am
Everyone was ready to head towards the ancient villages of mussorie near the borders. T was as usual late and everyone was annoyed because of her. Panchi asked all the people to take some clothes as they had to stay there in the village overnight. Misha was very excited so she ran first to take the seats in the bus for Piya and aleena. They sat together and everyone left the resort. T was very annoying and villages and t were a bad combination. She was very unhappy as everyone was giving piya more importance than her.
Ancient village near mussorie, near riverside, camps, 12:00pm
Soon they reached the village and were warmly welcomed by the villagers. They were astonished to see the handicrafts and the ruins of the ancient times. Panchi and other students distributed some blankets and food items that they brought from dehradun for the villagers. Villagers guided the students in the village.
The scenic beauty was worth watching. There was a river flowing near the village. Piya was very happy with the trip and she was enjoying it to the core. She had never got such chance before when she used to live with Aunt Martha. She worked very hard to reach to this instant of life and now this was time to enjoy it. She had no fear about anything as she was not that type of person who thinks about future as she belonged to the people who live in present. She did all the activities with total enthusiasm.
They settled their camp near the riverbank and burnt a bonfire near. They ate the food provided by the villagers. Then everybody sat near the bonfire while piya went to sleep as she was very tired. Piya had worked a lot and spent a lot of time in the village and the villagers. All the villagers were praising piya and were treating as their daughter. Some had asked her to stay with them for the night but she refused them and said that she would come to meet them again in the morning.
Panchi was also happy with the arrangements. Everyone was sitting near the bonfire and was talking about each other. Suddenly, they could see a boy coming towards them slowly from the woods near the camp.
Aleena suddenly jumped up and ran towards him to hug him tightly.
Aleena: Hey, bhai…finally you are here… I was waiting to see you…
Abhay: yeah…I thought to surprise you…i.e. why I did not tell you… did you like my surprise…
Aleena: yeah… it was very nice… come with me…
Misha whispered in kabir's ears about Abhay.
Misha: lo aa gaya ye dukhi aatma… Ye to surely hamari trip KO maatam bana dega…
Kabir: yeah... mish pata nahi kahan se tapak padaa ye… isko dekh kar toh mera mood hi off ho Gaya hai…
Abhay and aleena went near the bonfire where everybody else was sitting. Everyone was also surprised to see Abhay there.
Panchi: so Abhay… where were you… so how did you know that we are here…?
Abhay: actually… I had to go somewhere to meet my relatives… and aleena told that you all are here…
Misha: but aleena told that you were out of town for some business purpose…
Abhay tried to cover up: yeah…firstly, I went to for the meeting then to my relatives…
Panchi: achha ab tum log baad mein baat karna… Abhay tumne khanaa khayaa kya….
Abhay: actually Maine khanaa khaa chukka hai… so I won't eat now…
Panchi: then you can sleep in one of the camps…
Abhay: I will sleep later… I want to get freshen up…
Abhay leaves everyone gossiping and goes in one of the tents. Aleena follows him.
Aleena: bhai… mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai…
Abhay: bolo aleena….
Aleena: abhi nahi baad mai jab sab so jayenge tab aap mujhe nadi ke paas milna… its important…
Abhay: achha theek hai ab tum jao nahi toh Kisi KO shak ho jayega…
Aleena went back to her tent and waited till midnight so that everyone sleeps. She leaves Piya and misha sleeping and goes near the river where Abhay was already waiting for her.
Abhay: jaldi bolo aleena… kya itna important hai… kya Piya ke bare mein hai…
Aleena: bro Piya ke bare mein hi hai…
Abhay: toh jaldi batao Na kya hai…
Aleena: Piya KO bachpan se ek same sapna aata hai jisme ek ladka aata hai Jo ek ladki KO apni lap me rakh kar chilata hai… us ladki ke bahut saara khoon nikal raha hai aur who ladka bahut helpless hai… aur Piya uski koi madad nahi kar paati hai…
Abhay: oh no… ye nahi ho sakta… ye toh wahi same scene hai jisme mai zaara KO leke mai chila raha hoon… lekin iss baar mai AA Gaya hoon aur aisa phir nahi hone doonga…
Aleena: theek hai bhai… mai tumhare aur Piya ke saath hoon… ab mujhe jaana hoga… par bhai tumhe piya KO jaldi apni girlfriend banana hoga nahi toh who Kabir piya ko propose kar dega aur mai aur aap piya ke paas pure time nahi rah payenge…
Abhay: nahi aleena mai piya KO kabhi apni dark life mein enter nahi hone doonga… agar piya ka saath mere fate mein hoga toh woh apne aap se hi mere paas ayegi…
Aleena: theek hai bhai… jaisa tum kaho…
Then aleena went to the camp where piya and misha were already sleeping.
Ancient village near mussorie, near riverside, camps, next morning, 7:00am
Everyone was up in early morning. Some were getting ready while some were still getting freshen up. Panchi was very amazed by seeing piya's efficiency. Piya completed all her task within minutes.
Till now piya had not met Abhay. So, aleena decided to plan their first official meeting. She asked Abhay to meet her near the riverside where nobody would be there right now. And she also asked piya to get to the same place to bring her scarf which she left there last night.
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today there are two updates again...
so abhay and piya wold meet in the next update...
till then please send your feedbacks and support...
regards...
swati...!!!!!!! 😃

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