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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
hey hazra
awesome cs
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice cs...add me to ur pm list...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept cont soon plz
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nice cs..would like 2 read
see u soon
love yaaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice..cs..
waiting for first part
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Nice
Awsum
i love it like nything!
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hey...
nice ff cnt soon ur update loveed it...add me in ur pm list lzzz.
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi guys..updated 1st part..i hope u like it...dont forget to comment..read n njoy...

so here the story starts..2 may 2009(monday)...dobriyal house...misha is sleeping n piya is trying to wake her up..
p-misha now wake up yaar..we r getting late for clg...
mi-piya pls thodi der mujhe sone do..sirf 5 minute..
p-tumhari 5 min kabhi khatam nahi hogi isliye utho varna mai akeli chali jaogi...
mi-ok go...
p-thick hai..😡
piya went from there...
madhu-piya...misha kaha hai??
p-vo madam abhi tak so rahi hai isliye mai jaa rahi hu...
madhu-ye misha kabhi nahi sudhregi...piya beta tum breakfast to karlo..
p-nahi mom abhi nahi...mai vaise bhi bohot late ho chuki hu...
madhu-thick hai..driver ke sath chali jao..
p-papa kaha hai??
madhu-beta vo aj jaldi office chale gaye..
p-ohk...thick hai ab mai chalti hu..bye mom..
madhu-bye beta...
piya leaves...other side...gunjan's entry in clg...she wears this..
all guys r mad on her...
she went to mayank..
g-hi mayank..😊
m-oh hi gunjan..😊
m-aj to puri clg ki nazar tum par hai...😉
g-obviously hogi yaar..after all i m gunjan-the most beautiful girl...😊
m-vaise aj sach mai tum bohot achi lag rahi ho...😊
g-wht u mean aj..mai roz achi lagti hu...
m-ha tum roz achi lagti ho par aj bohot achi lag rahi hu...
g-thnks mayank...😊
m-i wil talk to u later...abhi class jaa raa hu...
g-ok bye...😊
m-bye...
mayank went...
g-hey rohit...vo cartoon kab ayega??
rohit-samrat bas abhi thodi der mai ata hoga...
g-usko pareshan karne mai bohot maza ata hai..😊
rohit-sirf tujhe nahi sabko maza ata hai..
g-😉
...
(introduction of kabir rathore)
kabir rathore
he is from a very rich family...has a friendly nature...best frnd of misha and piya...loves piya a lot bt never told...
...
k-hey piya..😊
p-hi kabir..😊
k-whr is misha??
p-vo madam so rahi hai..
k-ye misha bhi na...
p-kabir ab chalo class mai...vaise bhi bohot late ho chuki hu us misha ki wajah se...
k-ya lets go..mai bhi tum dono ka hi wait kar raha tha..
p-kabir...vo ladka kaun hai??(pointing towards abhay who is a new student)
k-vo...vo abhay raichand hai...naya student hai...bohot attitude hai...
p-vo to shakal se hi pata chalta hai...anyways lets go...
...
rohit-hey gunjan...samrat aa gaya...😊
g-wow...ab ayega mazaa...😊
...
n-samrat mai class mai jaa rahi hu...
s-thick hai di...mujhe library jana hai..
n-ok..bye..
nupur went...
g-ab dekho..mai kya karti hu...😊
gunjan went to samrat..
g-hey samrat..wats up...😊
s-gunjan...tum...
g-samrat maine tumhara bohot mazak udaya na...i m sorry..pls mujhe maaf kardo...
s-nahi gunjan pls tum sorry mat bolo...
g-samrat mai bohot buri huna...
s-nahi gunjan..tum to bohot achi ho..
g-maine tumhara itna mazak udaya...mai sach mai bohot buri hu...
s-nahi gunjan...tum buri nahi ho...
g-to banoge mere dost...😊
s-tum sach bol rai ho na..
g-samrat mai sach mai tumhe apna dost bana na chahti hu..kyuki tum bohot ache ho...
s-pa tumne to kaha tha ki mai tumhari dosti ke layak nahi hu...
g-samrat ab vo sab bhul jao...kya mai tumhe achi nahi lagti...
s-nahi aisi baat nahi hai...tum to bohot achi ho..sab log tumhe kitna pasand karte hai..
g-to abse ham friends hai ok..😊
s-ok...😊
g-ab tum mere dost ban chuke ho isliye ab mai jo kahugi vo tum karoge na...
s-zarur karuga...😊
g-thats like a good boy...😊
s-par mujhe karna kya hai??
g-samrat...vo jo ladki vaha khadi haina...vo jisne blue colour ka top pehna hai...
s-vo to tanushri hai..
g-ha...to tumhe tanushri ko i love u bolna hoga sabke samne..😊
s-nahi gunjan mai...
g-samrat tum meri itni si baat bhi nahi manoge...
s-par mai usko...
g-samrat agar tum meri baat nahi manoge to mai tumse dosti tod dugi...
s-nahi gunjan pls aisa mat karna...
g-to fir meri baat manoge na...
s-...ha...
g-so go now...😊
samrat was going to tanushri...
g to herself-tanushri...ab dekho kya tamasha hota hai tumhara...😊
...
he went to tanushri...
s-ta...tanushri..
she turned back...
t-tum...oh god...pls mere samne se chale jao...i dnt want to see ur face...
s-...mai...mai tumse...kuch..kehna chahta hu...
t-tumhare jaise pagal logo ki baate sunne ka mere paas waqt nahi hai so get lost..😡
s-..tanushri ruko...
t-oh joker...chal nikal yaha se..😡
s-tanushri i love u...
all were shocked..
t-wht...
s-tanushri mujhe vo...
t-shut up...bloody bas***d...
she slapped him n all were laughing n making fun of him...
boy-oh psycho...apni shakal dekhi hai tune...apne jaisi koi ladki ko propose karna...
t-agli baar apni shakal mat batana varna...😡
tanushri went from there...gunjan was also laughing...samrat saw her n he understood tht she again played a prank on him...
s to himself-gunjan ne fir se mere sath mazak kiya...😔
he went in the class...riddhima saw all this n she felt very bad for samrat...
r to herself-ye gunjan apne ap ko samajti kya hai..
she went to gunjan...
r-gunjan...
g-oh riddhima..hii..😊
r-kyu tumne aisa kiya..
g-maine kya kiya...
r-kyu tum samrat ke sath aisa karti ho...
g-tumhe kyu bura lag raha hai...bf hai kya tumhara..
all laugh...
r-gunjan ye jo bhi tum kar rahi ho bohot galat kar rahi ho..
g-acha...to ab tum mujhe sikhaogi ki mujhe kya karna chahiye kya nahi karna chahiye...
arman comes..
ar-hey gunjan...😊
g-armaaannn...😊
she hugged him...
g-ab tum yaha kyu khadi ho...jao yaha se...
riddhima went from there...
ar-kya hua ise??
g-i dont know..
ar-mayank kaha hai??
g-class mai...
ar-to chalo ham bhi chalte hai...
g-nooo yaar..aj mujhe class mai jane ka bilkul mood nahi hai...
other side...riddhima went in nupur's class..
r-nupur...
n-riddhima tum meri class mai..
r-nupur aj tanushri ne samrat ko sabke samne thappad mara...
n-kya...
then she told everything to nupur...
n-ab mai gunjan ko nahi chodugi...😡
nupur was very angry...
n-kaha hai gunjan??
r-bahar...
nupur went outside...n saw gunjan talking with arman...she went to her...
n-gunjan...😡
gunjan turned back...n nupur slapped her tightly...
g-how dare u...😡
gunjan was going to slap her bt nupur caught her hand...
n-tum apne ap ko bohot smart samajti hona...par tumhari ye smartness mere samne nahi chalegi...agar ab tumne samrat ke sath mazak kiya ya uska mazak udaya to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...😡
nupur was going bt arman stopped her...
ar-ruko nupur..tumhe is tarah se gunjan par haat nahi uthana chahiye tha...
n-tum to chup hi raho arman...tum to vaise bhi apni frnd ka hi favour karoge fir chahe vo galat bhi kyu na ho...
r-arman...tum nahi jante aj gunjan ne samrat ko kitna hurt kiya hai...pehle usse dosti ka natak kiya aur fir sabke samne uska mazak banaya...
g-vo pagal hai aur pagal logo ke sath aisa hi karna padta hai...😡
n-khabardar jo mere bhai ko pagal kaha to...vo pagal nahi hai...pagal tum log ho...😡
g-puri clg janti hai ki tumhara bhai pagal hai...so accept it...😡
n-tumhe to mai...😡
r-nupur...chalo...
riddhima and nupur went from there...
g-arman dekha tumne..kaise us nupur ne sabke samne mujhe thappad mara...😡
ar-gunjan...galti tumhari bhi thi...tumhe samrat ke sath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..
g-bt arman it was just a prank aur uske sath to sab mazak karte hai...sab uska mazak udate hai...
ar-dekho gunjan...mazak ki bhi limit hoti hai...aur use bhi bura to lagta hoga na...
g-arman mere dost hoke mujhe hi blame kar rahe ho...
ar-kyuki mai hamesha sahi logo ka sath deta hu aur tum galat ho..tumhe galat kiya..
g-tumse acha to mayank hai...huh...😡
gunjan went frm there...other side...nupur went in her class..
m-nupur..kya hua??itni gusse mai kyu ho??
n-tumse matlab..
m-isme gussa hone wali kya baat hai..agar nahi batana hai to mat batao...
n-sorry mayank...
m-ab batao kya baat hai..
n-tumhari dost gunjan...nafrat hai mujhe usse...
m-kya kiya gunjan ne??
n-aj usne fir se samrat ke sath mazak kiya...aur vo tanushri ne sabke samne mere bhai ko thappad mara..aur vo bhi sirf tumhari dost ki wajah se...
m-ohhh...ye to bohot bura hua..
n-mayank mujhe bohot bura lagta hai jab koi mere bhai ke sath aisa mazak karta hai...aur vo bechara kuch bolta bhi nahi hai...😔
m-i understand nupur...dnt worry mai gunjan se baat karuga...aur vo samrat ko sorry bhi bolegi...
n-rehne do mayank...vo gunjan jaisi ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi...vo jaise hai hamesha vaisi hi rahegi...
m-nupur...gunjan itni buri bhi nahi hai...she is my frnd n i knw her..ha usme attitude hai par vo dil ki buri nahi hai...
n-mayank pls stop it...mai yaha mere bhai ke liye pareshan hu aur tum mere samne us gunjan ki taarif kar rahe ho..
m-nupur mai taarif nahi kar raha hu...mai to sirf keh raha hu ki vo...
n-mayank pls stop it varna mai class se chali jaogi...
m-ok...
other side..abhay enters the class...
t-hey abhay...u can sit beside me..😊
he gave an angry look to tanushri...n sat on the last place...
t-itna attitude acha nahi hai...
ab-shut up...
t-wht the hell u thnk of urself...tum janti nahi ho mai kaun hu..😡
ab-aur janna bhi nahi chahta hu...
t-go to hell...
t to herself-dekh to aise raha hai jaisi ki abhi mera murder kar dega...😡
other side...misha leaving for clg...
m-mamma...m leaving now...bye...
madhu-ok beta...bye...
misha leaves for clg...she reach clg...n call piya bt piya was in class so she dint answer the call..
mi to herself-ye piya mera phone kyu nahi utha rahi hu...shayad class mai hogi...chal misha ab tu bhi class mai jane ki taiyari kar le...
she was standing near her class...
mi to herself-yahi sahi mauka hai misha...mam ka dhyan board par hai...jaldi se class mai chali jaa...varna fir se mam ki daat sunni padegi...
she entered the class slowly...n sat beside abhay...
mi to herself-thank god...bach gayi...
then she saw abhay...
mi-tum mujhe aisa look kyu de rahe ho...i m nt a killer or sumthng ki tum mujhe itna daravna look de rahe ho...samne dhyan do..huh...
then miss dsoza saw misha...
miss dsoza-misha...tum class mai kab ayi..
mi-...mam mai to class mai hi thi..
miss dsoza-par maine to tumhe pehle class mai nai dekha tha...
mi-apne nahi dekha to vo apki galti...par mai to class mai thi...
miss dsoza-misha dnt try to act smart in front of me...
mi-mam...
miss dsoza-shut up n get out...
mi-bt mam...
miss dsoza-misha dnt waste my time...get out...
mi-huh...
misha angrily went out from the class...
other side...gunjan in canteen enjoying with her frnds...
rohit-gunjan...lets go to night club disco today at late night...
g-superb idea...bt...
rohit-wht?
g-ham us cartoon ko bhi disco lekar jaege...
jiya-gunjan wht u saying...vo cartoon disco mai kya karega...
g-uski behen ne mujpar haat uthaya aur vo bhi sabke samne...ab mai us cartoon samrat ka aisa mazak banaogi ki zindegi bhar apne ap ko kosta rahega...😡
hey guys...here ends my 1st part...i hope u like it...dnt forget to comment...so kya hoga ab??kya karegi gunjan??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka...love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvsalman - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Nyc start dear n gunjan is so different here pls use jaldi se sudhardo
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum update
loved it
fully college atmosphere :)
gunjan has alot of attitude. .
Poor samrat :(
thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

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