FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#411

My Reply

Hello friends many of u were asking me about the song that I had used in the last update

The song "Chand se parda kijiye" is from the movie Aao Pyar Karein starring Saif Ali Khan n Shipa Shetty

Regarding the poetry that was present in the four letters then Yes wo poetry maine khud likhe the

I m so happy k aap logo ko meri likhi hui poetry pasand aayi

I will b updating the next part tomorrow

I Hope I HAVE CLARIFIED UR DOUBTS REGARDING THE SONG N THE POETRY

Love-Piya

Quote

Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: ritzy09
what Piya...no update today?

No Di update kal dungi...sorry Di..par kal update zaroor milega

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#413

of course ur poetry is outstanding...

i commented on ur poetry b4 also... i loved it

Quote

Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#414

great work...nice song tat u chosen..😊

Quote

minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Ya dear i told u na the poetry was just fantastic...i was seriously speechess reading that...
Well now waiting for the next super update... 😍

Quote

mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#416

Piya u r such a fab writer,me kayal of ur hindi n ur shayari,cont soon

Quote

saim

@amzu32

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#417

i love your work!!!

waiting for update!!!

thanks :)

Quote

swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#418

wow cool poetry... cant wait for the update..

Quote

375400

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#419

I LOVE UR POETRY DEAR
AND THE SONG
UPD SOON DEAR
WILL BE WAITING

Quote

Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#420

Thank you for ur encouragement and support friends. Here is the next part I hope u all will like it

PART 30

Eh..mere humnawa...eh mere huzoor...

Maan geet ko apne baho mein utakar ek jagah le jata hai

The place is fully decorated with flowers. Background mein romantic music chal raha hai

Maan geet ko apne ghodh par bithatha hai...

Geet is too shy she immediately hugs him

Maan: Geet kuch kahogi nahi

Geet is silent

Maan: Kya ab bhi mujhse naaraz ho

Geet: Naraz kis baat se?

Maan: Mujhe maaf kar do geet meri wajah se tumhare aakhon mein aasu aaye the...main tho mazak kar raha tha...mujhe nahi pata tha k mere mazak k wajah se tumhara dil tuth jaayega mera yakeen mano geet party ki raat hi main tumhe batanewala tha k meri zindagi mein tumhare alawa aur koi bhi nahi hai

Geet: Maan...main aapse pehle tho naara z nahi thi haan magar ab naaraz jaroor hoon

Maan: Tum naaraz ho?

Geet:( breaks the hug) Aur nahi tho kya...itne achhe romantic mood ko sorry bolkar aapne kharab kar diya...babaji mere maan ko thodi tho akal de dijiye thaki unhe samaj mein aa jaaye k romantic atmosphere mein romantic baate hi karni chahiye...saare mood ko kharab kar diya

Maan: Achha ji toh ye baat hai...waise geet tum mujhe baar baar aap kehkar kyun pukar rahi ho

Geet apni nazare jhukha lethi hai

Maan: Geet bolo na

Geet: Mujhe achha lagtha hai...aisa lagtha hai k main wakai mein maan ki geet hoon aur aap mere maan

Maan: O tho ye baat hai...sachmuch meri mishty wakai mein lakho mein ek hai

Geet: Mishty? Ye mishty kaun hai?

Maan: Hai koi dil ki behet hi kareeb (suppresses his laughter)

Geet hits maan on his chest

Geet: Maan sach sach batai warna main aapse kabhi bhi baat nahi karungi

Geet tries to get up

Maan pulls her

Maan: Misthy ka matlab hai Sweetheart...Tho batau kya mujhe ye batane ki zaroorat hai k meri mishty kaun hai

Geet starts blushing

Maan: Geet tum phir se chup ho gayi subah tho radio par bahut bol rahi thi ab jab main tumhare saamne baitha hoon tab tum kuch bhi nahi keh rahi ho...ye tho galat baat hai na

Geet: Ye sab aap hi ki wajah se hua hai

Maan: Ab maine kya kar diya

Geet: Aap hi ne sorry kehkar mere romantic mood ko kharab kiya hai...tho iska solution bhi aap hi ko dhundna hoga

Maan: Tho chalo solution ready hai

Geet gives a confusing look to maan

Maan geet ko ek baar phir apne bahu mein uthaletha hai

Maan: Geet ye tumhare liye

Geet opens the gift

Geet: maan ye tho jewellery ka set hai...then she stops in between

She carefully goes through the design of the jewellery

Geet: Maan inn gehno k designs tho bilkul waise hi hai jaise uss din humne shopping mein kharede the ...magar

Maan: Magar kya geet?

Geet: Maan humne tho uss din sab gold jewelleries kharedethe aur ye saare diamond k set hai

Maan comes close to geet

Maan: mere heere k saamne ye tho mehez ek pathar hai geet...mera bus chale tho main tumpar heero ki barsaat kar du...ye tho bahut hi mamuli sa taufa hai

Geet picks up the bangle

Maan: Nahi geet aaj main khud tumhe apne haatho se inn gehno mein sajaunga magar usse pehle kya iss kaiynaat ki sabse khoobsurat ladki k saath main dance kar saktha hoon

Geet gives a beautiful smile

Their dance begins

Link to the song: https://player.raag.fm/player/?browser=flash&pick[]=387699 (movie dum maaro dum)

Kisi ko sapna lage tu...Kisi ko behti hawa

Kisi ko bas baato mein kare pal mein yaha waha

Kisi k sau jhooth sun le, kisi ka sach bhi gunah

Kisi ke bus yaado mein kare hulchul Saara jaha

Te amo me te amo

Tu chau hai tu dhoop hai

Te amo me te amo

tere hazaro roop hai

Koi samjha nahi jo bhi hai bus khoob hai

Fallin so crazy in love

Te amo me te amo Tu chau hai tu dhoop hai

(MAAN TAKES THE NECKLACE N BAHUT HI PYAR SE GEET KO WO PEHNATHA HAI)

Te amo me te amo tere hazaro roop hai

Kabhi lage raatho mein main khwabho se baate karu

Subah unhi khwabo ko main kabu karu...

Kabhi lage taaro se bhi uchhi udhane bharu

Kabhi lage badalo se jhebhe baru...

Te amo me te amo Taare ginu tere liye

(Maan geet ko ear rings pehnatha hai)

Te amo me te amo saare chunu tere liye

Khwab saare bunu tere hi tere liye...

Fallin so crazy in love

kabhi lage mili nahi tumse mein khwabo mein bhi

Kabhi lage kahi tho hai rishta koi...

kabhi lage choou tumhe yuhi khayalo mein hi

kabhi lage nahi nahi chori nahi...

te amo me te amo

Tu paas hai par dur hai

(MAAN PUTS THE MAANG TIKKA )

Te amo me te amo

jaata nahi ye noor hai

Teri chori bhi ye manzoor manzoor hai

Fallin so crazy in love

Te amo me te amo

(MAAN GEET KO KANGAN AUR PAYAL BHI PEHNA DETHA HAI)

Jaata nahi ye noor hai...

Geet hugs maan...

Maan: Geet tum dekhna nahi chahogi ke tum inn gehno mein kaisi lag rahi ho?

Geet: Mera sabse anmol gehna tho aap hai...aap mere paas hai mujhe issse zyaada aur kya chahiye

Maan: Hmm...magar mere hothe hue meri geet apne sundar se chehre ko ek baar bhi naa dekhe aisa kaise ho saktha hai

Maan: Aaj main tumhe bataunga k tum inn gehno mein kaisi lag rahi ho

Maan kisses the forehead of geet

Maan: (referring to the maang tikka) Jaanti ho geet shaam tho bahut pehle hi dhal chuki hai magar tumhare maathe par ab bhi suraj ki laali chamak rahi hai

Maan then places a kiss near her ear lobe

Maan: (referring to her ear rings) Chand sitare falak se utarkar tumhare kaano ki baaliya bankar chamak rahi hai aur chaandni bhi tumhare chaand se mukhde ko pyar se chum rahi hai

Maan slowly starts kissing her hands

Maan: Tumhari choodiyon ki khankhanahat mujhe tumhare muskurate hue chehre ki yaad dilaega geet...ek aisa chehra jo k sirf aur sirf mere liye bana hai

Maan holds geet by her waist and brings her more close

Maan: Tumhare payal ki cham cham meri dil ki dhadkan hogi geet...jo hume har pal ek hi saas ki dor mein bhandhe rakhega...

Maan dheere se geet k chehre se uske baalo ko hata detha hai

Maan places a kiss on her eyes and looks at her lovingly

Geet starts blushing

Maan apne haatho se geet k chehre ko lift karta hai

Maan: Mujhse kabhi bhi nazare mat churana...main jee nahi paaunga

Geet looks lovingly at maan

Maan: (looks at her lips) Ijaazat hai?

Geet apne haatho ko maan k gale pe encircle kar dethi hai