FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

yes dear updating right now



fab ...waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 29

Geet opens the gift

Geet: Ye...ye tho wahi saree hai...jisse maan ne lene se mana kar diya tha

A beautiful smile appears on her face

Geet wears the saree

Jaise hi geet darwaza kholthi hai uspar phoolon ki barsaat hone lagti hain'

She closed her eyes to live that moment

Dheere se geet ne apna pehla kadam darwaze ke bahar rakha'as soon as she comes out her eyes meet a spectacular sight

The entire place was brightly decorated with lights.

The ceiling and windows were dressed with shimmering curtains and white drapers with heart shaped prints on it

Aromatic candles were making the decor very passionate

The floor was full of red and white coloured baloons

Roses were beautifully adorned with red and white coloured ribbons and each of the flowers carried a heart shaped card with it

Geet was searching for maan

Maan was secretly admiring her

Geet ka dyan achanak se ek taraf chala gaya

She went ahead to see what exactly the thing was

It seemed to b a painting

She carefully removed the cover and then'she couldn't believe her eyes

It was a hand made painting of hers'n it was painted by none other than maan

There was a letter attached to it

Geet removes the letter and starts reading it

Geet is reading the letter

"Simat raha hai aasman teri panahon mein

Baarish ki pehli boond chahthi hai tujhe choona

Titliyaan keh rahi hai tu hai chand mera

Chand bhi hai hairan dekhkar chand sa chehra tera"

I love u Geet

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Maan

Her happiness knew no bounds. She looks at the moon

Maan comes and then' he starts singing

Chaand se Parda kijiyen'.

Chaand se Parda kijiyen'.

Kahi Chura na le Chehre ka noor

Eh mere humnawah'Eh mere Huzoor

Haa Chaand se Parda kijiyen'

Geet sharmakar chali jaati hai

She comes across a second letter which was kept in between the roses

She starts reading the letter

"Deedar kar raha hai har phool tera

Shabnam ki hai khwaish ki ban jaaye aaina tera

Tera aachal hai ya saath rango ka basera

Khoobsurathi hai tujh mein beshuma

Har pal har lamha ab hai intezaar tera"

I love u Geet

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Maan

Maan comes and stands besides her and once again starts singing

Julfo se Udi Khooshboo Pyar ki'

Hontoon pe khilgai Kaliya Bahar ki

Hontoon pe khilgai Kaliya Bahar ki

Phool se Parda kijiyen

Phool se Parda kijiyen

Kahi Chura na le Chehre ka Noor.

Eh mere humnawah'Eh mere Huzoor

Haa Chand se Parda Kijiyen.

Maan looks at her lips lovingly'Geet once again feels shy and goes ahead. Her heart beat was increasing'.

She then notices a third letter from maan this was placed in between small diyas

She goes and picks it up and starts reading it

"Tum saadgi ka gehna ho ya Phoolo ki Taazgi

Diye ki jooth ho ya mathbari chaandni ki roshni

Husn k rango se likhi hui gazal ho ya

pyar ke dariyaan mein khiltha hua kamal

Tum khoobsurathi ka ek aisa gulshan ho jo k

Raat k ghehre andhere mein bhi ek jhilmilatha savera sajade"

I love u Geet

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Maan

Tears of happiness start rolling down her cheeks

Just then maan comes and wipes her tears

Lagti ho kisi Shayar ka Khayal'

Aisi sadhgi to hai khud me Bemisaal

Aisi sadhgi to hai khud me Bemisaal

Khud se se parda kijiyen

Khud se se parda kijiyen

Kahi Chura na le Chehre ka Noor

Eh mere humnawah'Eh mere Huzoor

Haan' Chand se Parda kijiyen.

Geet sees another letter'she lovingly looks at maan and runs to get the letter.

Maan is simply bowled by her innocence and charm

She opens to read the fourth letter from maan

"Tumhari muskurahat hai ya koi oas mein dhula hua khiltha hua phool

Tumhari aakhen hai ya koi sitaro ki chadar jo pyar k moti bankar baras rahe hai

Tumhari chahat mein main kuch iss tarah madhosh hua k tumhare saaye ko bhi dekhkar uske paas jaakar usmein simat ne ka mann kartha hai

Ek sachhe dildaar kithi talash aaj wo hasrat puri hui

Tumhe paakar aisa laga jaise zindagi ki har adhuri tamanna puri hui"

I love u Geet

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara Maan

Geet starts smiling

Maan starts singing

Haas de aap agar Banjae Dastan
(geet goes and hugs maan)

Haas de aap agar Banjae Dastan

Palke jo Jukhi kahi Jukjae Aasmaan

Palke jo Jukhi kahi Jukjae Aasmaan

Rab se Parda kijiyen

Rab se Parda kijiyen

Kahi Chura na le Chehre ka Noor.
Eh mere humnawah'Eh mere Huzoor

Chaand se Parda kijiyen'.

Kahi Chura na le Chehre ka noor

Eh mere humnawah'Eh mere Huzoor

Eh mere humnawah'Eh mere Huzoor

TO B CONTINUED'.

Precap: Maan: "Main tumhe inn gehno mein aaj khud sajaaunga geet"

SO HOW WAS IT DO LET ME KNOW...N PLS PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT

Love- Piya
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
maaneetkimeet thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovley update dear ... fab ... beautifully wrote ... to good ...dear ...and mast ...love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
really dont have any words
tooo good
awesome
the pics u chose were mindblowing
thanks piya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely and wonderful update...👏
Maan's letters ek thm best and best...👍🏼
Amazing pics that ur chosen..nice⭐️
Eagerly waiting for next part😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
loved the way maan confesses
choice of song is superb

do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
deadly romantic...

n simply awesome...

loved all shayaris n pics
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow di that was fab no words 2 describe it u have written it so beautiful i really wanna 2 say that it was amazing n wonderful cant w8 4da next update di love it love it love it love it love it 🤗 Awesom update You and your ff's rock di
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow di that was fab no words 2 describe it u have written it so beautiful i really wanna 2 say that it was amazing n wonderful cant w8 4da next update di love it love it love it love it love it
it was so romantic n love all da pics
🤗 Awesom update You and your ff's rock di
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG ...
Miss romantic .. its was awesome ... especially the poem in the letters
me still in la la land ❤️
continue soon
love
Sana

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