FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start.
love it.
do continue plz,
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#12
love the concept...Its really nice. Continue soon
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hey sweety loving your story update soon 😊
and your doing a great job 👍🏼

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelaraf

love the concept and enjoyed reading the parts

please update soon !!!! 👍🏼

thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: Mina420

hey, don't give up. it takes time for people to find this ff and read. just keep posting and the more updates, the more response u will get. I remember that when I started posting my first ff, it took quite some time for me to get comments but evtl they started comming... so don't give up and do pm all those who are in ur buddy list

thanks Mina
will try to keep lil patience
may be you are right i will definately give it a try and wait for the responses 😊
your words soothed me a lot
thanks a tonn
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Originally posted by: shah10

nice start.

love it.
do continue plz,
thx

Thank u 😊
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Originally posted by: izzazubr

love the concept...Its really nice. Continue soon

Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: kinno

hey sweety loving your story update soon 😊
and your doing a great job 👍🏼

Thank you Kinno
your words really inspire alot
please keep on reading and commenting too
thanks 😊
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CHAPTER-3
The sweet song of life
The night definitely brought a new breeze in the life of Maan not that he was grown enough to understand these things but sweet love it never lets anyone know when they fall for it...
Morning
Mannat
Hoshiyarpur
8:00 am
The sun rays were shinning definitely bright today on the khurrana families horizon there was a new layer of happiness that was covering the khurrana's this morning and shinning on their faces but the brightest of the shining star was maan who woke up today to a new world..
Maan-nothing seems right was she a dream but I am sure she was there
then where is she now I remembered i met her last night at the
road and made a promise to her naah she can't be a dream let me
ask dadi she will clear it up if she was with him then dadi might
know after all she was with him too...
Dadi Dadi...he came down yelling her name almost colliding into
his father Abhimanyu
Abhi-wooh someone is in a hurry and someone woke up really early
today
kya baat hai My lil devil missing dadi
Maan-No dad i just wanna ask her something
Where is she do you know?
Abhi-Well guess I do but what will i get in return if i tell ya where she is
(he says making a funny evil face)
Maan-Dad plz batao na dadi kaha hai plz anything you want
But please batao na
Abhi-really was surprised to see maan so restless he is not the one who agrees to his demands so easily
Well Maan
your dadi has gone to mandir and is gonna come back in an hour or so
Maan- oh an hour that's long (maan was really getting restless now firstly her little friend was not in the house secondly he was scared what if it was just a dream he saw last night too many questions running in his mind)
Abhi-was completely aware of maan's state he can clearly read those change of emotions on his face he knows that restlessness to well)
Not wanting to trouble his son anymore he decided he will end his miseries...
Waise maan are you just missing dadi or someone else he said as he walked towards the breakfast table in the dining hall
Maan- who was lost in his thoughts suddenly looked up to his dad searching his face for his answer which to some extent was answered by the smile on his father's face
Dad did you...did you meet her too
My new friend he asked with hope in his eyes
Abhi-smiled yes my little devil I met your angel last night
Maan- was so happy to hear it that he just ran into abhi's arm
Thanks dad i was really worried
I thought she was a dream I was really worried dad
Abhi-just hugged his son maan he knew the feeling is new for his son and he is too small to understand anything about it he really needed to guide his son on this way atleast till the time he is not ready to recognise the feeling
It's ok Maan happens at times you meet someone so beautiful that really assume it is a dream but it's not necessary that all beautiful things are dream at times it is a reality carved into your life
So just trust your heart it will definitely help you see what is dream and what is reality
Maan-was listening to his father intently not getting all the things he said but still understanding a little bit
Dad where is she now he asked resting his head on his shoulder
Abhi-with your dadi
She was too scared was not even talking to anyone so dadi thought
to take her out for a while maybe then she will feel good
Maan-aapko mujhein utha na than a
I am her friend mein hota toh nahi darti
Abhi-(just smiled at the sweet words of his son he was taking
responsibility of his new found friend )
acha are u sure Maan aap rehtein toh nahi darti
Maan-Hmm dad
Abhi-Ok since she is so close to you then why don't you tell me her name
Maan-Name ahh wo dad wo toh mujhe pata hi nahi he said making a cute
Face
Abhi- just smiled hmm how innocent his son is claims to be her good friend lekin naam bhi nahi pata
Hmm koi baat nahi maan
Ab wo jab aaye toh aap unse puch lena ok
Maan-yes dad i will
Abhi-good now go get ready they will be here soon
Maan kissed his dad on his cheek and ran towards his room
Abhi just laughed and said Maan
Yes dad
Do take good care of your friend
Maan just smiled and nodded
Precap-friendship
Plz ppl do press the like button and please leave comments really motivates a lot will try to update tommorrow too but plz till den enjoy the above part and leave your feed back 😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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all parts amazing
love it
do cont soonnn
pls do pm me
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