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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven
ME izzz chulking sob sob me is my mommy's bacchhiii😡😆 not muski ki bachhiii

are u are ur bari wali didis fav bacchhi too😆😆😆

thanks baby...love you too

btw mera bday kal hai😕😕😕

ohh am i getting FO for my bday??😳😳😳

papad belowing maan😳😳😳

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592851

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
are u are ur bari wali didis fav bacchhi too😆😆😆

thanks baby...love you too

btw mera bday kal hai😕😕😕

ohh am i getting FO for my bday??😳😳😳

papad belowing maan😳😳😳

u shud have read it after twelve😭 Who told u to stalk GF 😡 Waise yes u are getting FO for ur birthday😆 u see Most awaited part coming up on ur birthday😆

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Nice concept. Do continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

It is so beautiful! Wait a minute scratch that..hmm it's amazing..hmm nahi kuch aur try karti hun..hmm while reading it i felt a fresh breeze of air, u know i've a spl love with water n rain. The start itself was amazing..sitting in beach,watching the tides..it is so simple yet nothing can be any more beautiful than that. Water..especially sea is the heart of nature's beauty n this beautiful story had a beautiful beginning.n coming 2da story, this point squeezes my heart..one sided love from a gal. No matter how many times u use it b4, but everytime i read da concept, i luv it. I can also see the beginning of something in maan n carrying her to home. Can it be anymore romantic? U included all dat i love,,rose.beach n walk n needless 2say i love it. Ps: m thru mobile so cudnt comment more but i've gone in2 a poetic mode :D *dreamy*

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: mchopra
Doll i wanna so kill u...i have been like waiting for FO and u give me this...
pls isko peeto and who s this didi ka bday..

😆 u call me doll n then bang u want to peeting n peeting me😭😭😭

me wondering . . . what did u do with ur dollies when u were a kid . . . i mean kitni dolls todhi phodi kitno ke hair ka postmaaatttum kiya . . . bechari dolls😆

U don't know who bari waali didi is😲😲😲 Haw . . . she is a living terror u know she can take that smile off ur face in a second . . . a look at her special Instruments which inflict pain on mankind, and u run for ur life😆 I ran when i was a kid . . . and even when i was fourteen

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven
u shud have read it after twelve😭 Who told u to stalk GF 😡 Waise yes u are getting FO for ur birthday😆 u see Most awaited part coming up on ur birthday😆

😆😆😆😆😆 tujhe hi jaldi thi na baby😆😆

ohhh myy godd..

FO ...ka most awaited part..wow!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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Dristi/twin/MK/D/dumbo/Drizzy

@DrashtiDhamiNo1

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

on your new ff

loving part one already

looking forward to the next update

cont soon please

cant wait!! :D

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

OMG doll..i still have all my dolls they are alll safe..but my dolls never tortured me like u did..

oh ok so its aashu..got it..

and hola i am scared of dentists too..i hate them..but not this one..hehe

and ok since it was bday gift..u are forgiven..but i am still waiting for FO..suspense is killing baby..

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

so this is dedicated to aash...
a lovely start as always...
but i was also expecting fallout update...and what i got is a teaser😡
par chal tujhe maaf kiya😆
keep writing froggie

love u
reva