Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update

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Water

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Hey,

Where r u? Has been a really long time.

Miss ur updates.

Pls update soon

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jazz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Hey i don find part 22 where is it?

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Alamelu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

same here...cannot find part 22...where is it...21 is on page 103? then...

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

where r u?

Hope all is well.

U have not been online in ages.

Please update soon.

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9staroneserials

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

I lovd it plz continue😳😳😳😳

Edited by 9staroneserials - 13 years ago

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: Alamelu
same here...cannot find part 22...where is it...21 is on page 103? then...

maybe i didnt update it:s

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Part 22:

Maan woke up with a start as Arnav shook him hard...

A-Maan...

M-Haan kya howa?

A-Nothing happened and alot happened

M-Huh?

A-I cant get any signal meaning we cant call anyone plus the rain is getting heavier meaning we're stuck here for a while!

M-Crap.

A-Yes nice choice of words!

M-Hmmm...

A-Who were you dreaming about?

M-Why?

A-Well who do you love?

M-What makes you say that?

A-Well a person only smiles in a dream when he's dreaming about his love!

M-I was smiling in my dream?

A-Yeah and saying stuff too

M-Like?

A-I made a mistake..I love you..etc..

Insecurity creeped through Maan...did he really say all this?He didnt remember anything..well maybe he had seen Geet and Riya but then..Arnav's voice broke through his

thoughts:

A-Maan..Maan...MAAN!

M-Haan?

A-Good you're still there...

M-We're stuck here for a long time arent we?

A-Ofcourse we are...and I didnt even inform anyone!

M-Neither did I!

A-Well...mate looks like we have only each other for company!

M-Uh-huh...

A-So tell me about yourself

M-There's nothing much to know

A-How did you meet Geet?

M-We were really small I dont remember it...

But the truth was he remembered it as if it was just yesterday the way she fell down and he helped her...the way the became friends he remembered every little detail

he could never forgot those moments when he was truly alive and happy!

M-How did you meet Geet?

Arnav laughed as he said:'I met her fighting with a auto-driver..it was hilarious I couldnt believe a lady would fight so much for just 2 rupees..but that's Geet!'

M-W..aaait!I thought you said you met her at your office when she came for a job...

A-Well..that was our official meeting before that we had met alot of times and she hated me and I dont know what I felt about her!

A pang of jealousy went through Maan but he ignored it..today he wanted to know what it was that was going on between Arnav and Geet!

M-Then what happened?

A-Well I saw her fighting and then I walked up to her and say Madam your blocking the way can you finish this up quick?And she started screaming at me telling

me how she doesnt care about the traffic but that the auto-driver was asking for 2 rupees more the meter said 25 and he was asking for 27...and I was so frustrated

I payed for her and then she wouldnt leave me saying people like me spoil these auto-drivers..and she kept on going and before leaving me she gave me 25 rupees and went

and said I dont keep anyone's money and then I said I gave him 27 but she just said but the meter said 25 and left laughing...that day she taught me a lesson that

it was not about the amount but about her values she didnt want to encourage all this..!

M-That sounds like something Geet would do!

Maan saw Arnav take his wallet out of his pocket and saw him take out 25 crumpled looking notes:'I still have that money'

A-It taught me a good lesson thats why I kept the money as a memory to always do the right thing.

M-Geet's a very nice person you're lucky to have her.

A-I am...she's a really amazing person.

M-Urmm...yes...I'll go check if the rain's stopped.

As Maan walked towards the gate a thousand emotions ran wild inside his heart the thought of losing Geet the thought that Geet was somone else's before he reached the gate

Arnav called out to him..he turned around to reply but before he could Arnav asked him a question that he didnt know at that time but it would change his life forever.

Precap-Maan and Geet talk...

Arnav takes Geet out.

New character.

Sorry short and very very very late update.

i know you guys dont even read but im sorry guys there were problems going on:(

will try and update regularly pakkkaaa...

sorry guys:(

Misssed you alll:)

Edited by Danina - 13 years ago

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Dazlingdivya

@Dazlingdivya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Thanks for a wonderful update after long time...

Waiting for next update.

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#619

awesome upadte
good to see u after long time
hope u have not forgot ur story line i m seriously feeling maan's pain
i seriuosly dont want maan to forgive Geet that easily after all whatever she did was very hurtful for maan
and he was just showing covering his pain through anger
continue soon

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Danina

@Danina

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome upadte
good to see u after long time
hope u have not forgot ur story line i m seriously feeling maan's pain
i seriuosly dont want maan to forgive Geet that easily after all whatever she did was very hurtful for maan
and he was just showing covering his pain through anger
continue soon

Dont worry havent forgotten the story line:P

i will defo continue soon now:)