Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update - Page 55

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Posted: 13 years ago


wonderful update nina...J factor is working on Maan very well...he seem to kill Arnav...

waiting for next Maaneet moments...thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

nice update


but yaar plzz go back to the normal format ... this POV thingy is not clicking some how ... sowwie dint meant to hurt u ... and yeah next update jaldi chaHIYE .. itnaa wait nahin ho ga

continue super duper soon

love
Sana


Haan Haan I know...it's was just for this update...coz I wanted to show the feelings properly so no confusion and stuff..next update will be normal and early..maybe even today:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update wow u r torturing and making maan jealous as if all is his fault and keeping geet away from this why should maan always suffered



No..the only reason Maan is getting jealous now is he admits he still loves Geet..and dont worry Geet will also b jealous..but one story at a time!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Lovely update...but haila I still have to wait..for them to come closer...pata nahin intezaar hoga ya nahin...


Dont worry..maybe you'll get to see it today itself:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
update update cant wait 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update!
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update

thanks for the pm..!! xx

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ninaaa ... update de do plzzz 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

Ninaaa ... update de do plzzz 😍


Dont worry Im updating..update will be here in some 30mins?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 21;
Arnav sat there humming...it had almost been an hour now...and the trip wasnt going to get over in another 2-3 hours...so sitting there humming an idea clicked in his
mind...and he smirked...he looked at Maan and asked:'Maan would you mind if I sat with Riya for some time?'
He saw Maan looking at him in a murderous way and thought he was going to say no but what he said surprised him:'Yes but where will I sit?'
A-In my place
M-Okay...but only for some time okay?
A-Okay
Arnav happily went and sat beside Riya who was sleeping..he turned to look at Maan who was evidently very happy sitting beside an angry Geet!

Maan looked at Geet and knew she was angry so there was no use talking to her...so he started looking out of the window when his phone rang...he picked the call up..
(one-sided convo)
M-Hey...How are you?...Well..Im going to Shimla...umm..with a few friends...Yeah bye..take care
He cut the call and turned to look at Geet and got surprised as she was looking at him and was clearly annoyed so he asked her:'What?'
G-Who were you talking to?
Maan got confused why would Geet want to know that?
M-Umm...why?
G-Nothing,just like that...why did you lie?
M-Lie?
G-That you're going with friends...
M-I'm not going with my family right...so it'll be friends...I cant say strangers!!
Geet looked even more annoyed with this answer and Maan even more confused...but ignoring this he asked:'Kyu koi problem hai?'
G-Nahi mujhe kya problem hogi?
M-No you dont look in a good mood...so I thought...
G-Well..then dont think...
M-Arey why are you getting angry at me?
G-Yes...why should I be angry at you...Im not your family ...Riya is not your family we're just friends right?
Maan was totally confused now and thought that Geet had gone crazy as he asked:'WHAT?'
G-Just go away...I dont want to talk to you!
M-Paar?
G-...
M-Hmfhhh!!
Maan kept sitting there thinking what had gone wrong with her...why couldnt she talk nicely with him for one minute?
After some time he felt a hand on his hand..he saw it was Geet's hand which surprised him at first but then when he looked at her and found her asleep he understood...
and smiled...he remembered this was how it was the first time they had visited Shimla...and with that happy feeling he too closed his eyes.


Arjun smiled as he saw Maan and Geet sleeping while holding hands...he looked at Arohi and said:'Isnt it to early to see them sleeping like this?'
Arohi glared at him and said;'Shutup...its so cute!!'
Arjun-You want to try it??
Arohi-No thankyou!!
Arj-Hmmm...okie..waise what did Geet say about me?
Aro-Woh...she said that it's okay but I cant be with you...
Arj-WHAT?
Aro-I mean..she meant that you know we cant be together..together...we have to maintain some distance until Di is sure...
Arj-Sure..sure about what?
Aro-I dont know?
Arj-Hmmfhhh...
Aro-Arjun...
Arj-I dont want to talk to you!
Aro-But...
Arj-...
Aro-Fine I dont want to talk to you too!!
Arj-FINE...
Aro-YES YES FINE I DONT KNOW WHAT I SAW IN YOU...YOU ARE JUST USELESS...I CANT BELIEVE I FELL FOR AN IDIOT LIKE YOU...
YOUR SUCH A..URGHHH...IT'S NOT MY FAULT DI TOLD ME TO STAY AWAY FROM YOU...
Arj-FINE I DONT CARE TOO...EVEN I DONT KNOW WHAT I SAW IN YOU...YOU COULDNT EVEN TALK TO YOUR DI ABOUT IT?YOUR SOO...URGHHH!!!

Armaan smiled as he saw the fight Arjun and Arohi were having and had to agree that they were both brilliant actor's...and that they loved their siblings alot...they were
spoiling their time together as to bring Maan and Geet together...how nice of them...He looked at Arnav who was now sitting with Khushi and then looked at Maan and Geet
who were both awake now with Riya in their lap and both of them looked worried...Armaan looked at Shilpa and said:'Plan 2 completed'
S-Yes...now its time for Plan 3...which will start tonight!!
A-You think it'll work?
S-Ofcourse it will!
A-Hope so...come on lets go to sleep..we have a long journey...
S-No...lets play a game
A-Game?
S-Yes...
A-Which game?
S-Wait and watch..
And with that she spoke aloud:'Guys...Lets play a game..
Everyone-Game?
S-Yes...it's like this..we all say one word which describes our feelings for the other person...for eg I'll give you Armaan's name you all have to say one word which describes
how you feel about him..okay?
Arnav-Yeah..lets play this game...
S-Okay!!

Geet sat there as they were discussing the game...she was not paying attention because she was worried about Arjun and Arohi..she did'nt understand why they were fighting...
Riya shook her and she cme out of her thoughts...
R-Mamma...it's your turn you have to tell them what you feel about Shilpa aunty?
G-Okay...Shilpa...umm...Funny...
S-Oh...funny haan?
G-Yeep..
S-Well thankyou..Maan your turn now...
M-Umm...sister..you're like my sister...so yeah sister
S-Well..i dont know how to respond to that..Im honoured...Hey I am the younger one right?
M-Haha..ofcourse...
S-Okay..next person is Khushi...I think Khushi is a very honest person...
K-Thankyou shilpa...
Geet's thoughts drifed back to Arjun and Arohi..she sat there thinking was it because of her they were fighting?What had gone wrong?Everything was fine..should she talk
to Maan and ask him..if he knew anything...and then her thoughts froze as she remembered how they woke up..they were holding hands..how had that happened?
Then again Riya's voice bought her back:'Mamma your turn'
G-Umm..Khushi...umm...you're the most amazing friend I have...
K-Geet Im honoured..Wish I could say the same for you..
G-Haww:O..Im not talking to you..
K-Arey yaar you're the most amazingly awesome friend..
Geet smiled as she said:'I should be'
S-Maan you're turn..
M-Umm..I dont know Khushi much but from what I know she's a nice person...
K-Thankyou...chalo let's continue...and wait Arjun and Arohi you guys sure you dont want to play?
A&A-Yes..we dont!
K-Okay you're wish...How about we start with Armaan...
E-Okay...
K-Armaan is very caring...
A-Why thankyou Khushi...
Geet looked at Maan and saw the same look on his face she was sure was on her's too...she put a hand on his shoulder and nodded inicating she was worried too...and that
they would talk to Arjun and Arohi and everything would be fine and in return she got a smile...which she returned..soon it was their turn again..giving their answer..
they drifted back in their thoughts again...and for the 4th time..Geet was called by Riya..
R-Mum..you have to tell what you think of Arnav uncle...
G-What?
R-What you feel about Arnav uncle?
G-Oh...hmmm...Arny...
She had flashback's of all the times he was with her...and a 'Most caring person I have met' escaped her lips without her realizing it...but nobody had heard it
except Maan..who's face colour was worth seeing...
G-Umm..Arny...He's a good friend...
A-Only good friend?
G-yes..ONLY GOOD FRIEND...
A-Ruk jao dekh loonga tume..
G-Dekh lena...
A-Hmmm...
And then came Maan's turn to which he said:'Ummm...Very smart'
Geet didnt get he said that but she let it go...and soon again it was her turn and this time the person was Maan...and the first thought that came to her mind was
Perfect but ignoring that thought she said:'Umm...lovable'
She saw Maan's face expression's soften..but ignored it and talked with Arnav!

Maan had heard what Geet had said about Arnav and anger bubbled inside him...but then when he heard her say that he was lovable a warm feeling filled him...
soon it was his time to say what he thought about Geet...the first thought that came to his mind was Perfect but he didnt say that instead he said:'A caring mother'
Then he drifted back in his thoughts until it was Arnav's turn to say something about Geet...and he said:'She's the most amazing person I've met...she helped me change...
and ofcourse realize alot of things...I dont know whatI'd be doing today if it werent for you(he winked at her)...anger bubbled inside him once again...his body stiffened
how dare he talk about his Geet like that?After some time he felt a tug on his arm and he looked up to see Riya standing there...
M-What happened?
R-Thats what Im suppose to ask you..What happened?What are you thinking about?
M-Umm..nothing Im not thinking about anything...
R-Dont lie daddy...
M-I am NOT...
R-You so are...but choro...Daddy can I ask you something?
M-Hmmm..
R-Why dont you live with me and mamma?
M-Why do ask that?
R-Well..because everyone's dad lives with them but you dont why?
M-Woh baby you're mom is kind of angry at me so thats why...
R-Phir toh you're suppose to say sorry to her...
M-I dont think sorry is enough!
R-Hmm..then give her a gift..she loves Gifts!
M-I think it'll take more then a gift too...
R-Hmm...daddy looks like this is a big problem!
M-See...
R-Idea!!
M-Kya?
R-Haan..whenever mom is angry with me...I give her a kiss and say sorry..It'll be perfect!
M-KYA?
R-Yes papa...just give a kiss to mom and say sorry she'll melt in seconds...
M-Beta..this is not the right place...there are so many people...
R-So?
M-Beta..not now...
R-Papa you love me right?
M-Haan beta...but this doesnt mean...
R-Its final if you love me then kiss mom and say sorry!!
M-Riya...
R-...
M-Riya...
R-...
M-Riya...
Riya started shouting:'PAPA IS GOING TO KISS MAMMA...PAPA IS GOING TO KISS MAMMA AND SAY SORRY TO HER'
Maan looked around embarrassed and saw Geet glaring at him...he gulped and gave her a pleading look because Riya wouldnt stop...so moving closer to Geet..he..

Precap-Maan and Arnav get stuck in the storm...
Geet confesses...
Maan's jealousy takes the better of him...
Geet jealous too?
New entry?

Okay guys hope this is good enough!!
2 updates in 2 days<3
Thankyou all for being patient with me:)
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Edited by Danina - 13 years ago

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