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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ambibamby


Begging n crying for updAte

me too waiting for asap😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
sory sory sory late hogya wo kia hai i wrote really long update. so now dividing in two parts. one posting right now and the other after 30 mints happy?
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi all
thanx for your support
here is the update
if you want pm
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dont forget to comment cuz i m not going to update unless i get adequate responses
oh and this update is especially for ambibambay
😉

Part 42:

Days passed their regrets increased.Maan's ego was not letting him go near her and she was now confused what fate wanted from her.. who was her destiny. Nivi was always saying dev dev and now maan not once tried to contact her.

5 days left only till Friday both houses were getting decorated.when vickey entered

Arey bro. congrats how are you? I m so happy for you per itni jaldi sab and where is my bhabhi ha?and why did you not come to pick me up. per me phir bhi agya khud hi. kia laga tha ere bgair hi shadi ker lo ge. mere gifts ki list apko pata hi hai sab chahiye hai bata ra ho abhi se

Vickey was laughing and teasing maan as soon as he entered the house.

he went and hugged daadi ma
Bro kia hua aap chup q ho. Bhabhi kaha hai? Maan's silence was indicating some thing was wrong . he scanned the room to find other ppl there too.

Arey dev bhai . aap kab aye.

Last wk or sirf apne bro ko hi congrats kare ga mujhe nahi mere bhi shadi hori hai .

Oh congrats. He was not that happy to see dev here.and on top of that maan did not look happy. he can sense problem dev means problem for maan. he had always done that and now he was back.

He turned back to him.

Bro bolo na bhabhi kaha hai.?

Hum yaha hai. He turned back there in the door was standing naintara.

Naintara.. vickey whispered.

Arey ha vickey . daikhiye na hum jeet gai ab aap k maan bro hum se kaise peecha chuarae ge ab to 5 din reh gai hai hamari shadi me.

Vickey was shocked beyond limits.

Per geet didi

Oye tu janta hai geet ko she is going to be my wife soon dev had come near him too.

Per wo to maan squeezed his hand.

He looked at maan.who nodded in negative. And went to his room.

Vickey followed.

maan told him everything he knew
Bro how could you let this happen.

Geet did not stop it she let it happen when I came back I came to know marriage date was fixed she had said yes what more could I do.

What could you do. You guys love each other how could you let her go.

She wanted to go.

Me unse khud baat krta ho.

It's useless

We will see. And he left to find geet.

Geet was sitting on the swing outside her house.

Didi how cd you let this happen.you loved bro.

He never listened to me

What do u mean?

and she told her side of story.
Vickey jo bhi hamari kismet me hoga wo hi hoga.

Kismet hum khud banate hai.

Mujh me itni power nahi hai

Aap bohat bari galti ker ri ho.

Pata nahi and she went inside.

She was feeling suffocated she went out in the balcony. She was hesitant to do so. That was the first time she was coming out there since that unforgettable night.. there was a party going on down in the ground.

Hey geet. Dev waived at her. Maan looked up to meet her eyes. He was standing in a corner with naintara trying to talk to him. He was just looking at her.

Tears dropped her eyes. Dev went up there and put his hand on her shoulder.

Chalo geet nache sab wait ker re hia tumhara.

Maan could not control it .the glass in his hand could not tolerate the pressure he was applying on it.how can some one else touch her. He squeezed his hand more the glass broke.blood oozed out from his hand.

Maan geet and naintara screamed together.

Geet ran down the stairs and maan rushed towards her she was about to trip on the last stair when maan caught her

How many times do I have to tell you not to run on these stairs. You know you always trip here. It's broken idiot. Kabhi to mere baat sun liya karo.

You are idiot you was supposed to fix it.

Why wd I fix it you broke it you fix it

Cuz it was you jis ki waja se i accidently broke it

It was you.

You

You

And then she saw blood in his hand.

Kitna khoon nikal raha hai zara bhi khayal nahi rakh sakte apna.

She cleaned his hand with her dupatta. Dev and naintara were standing there listening to there convo. Why were they so frank..

Yaha kia hora hai ? rano came there too.

Kuch nahi ma

And geet ran back to her room. And maan went outside.

PRECAP:

Geet finding the truth😳😳😳😳

spoiler for next part on page 75
next part coming in a little while
Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee
update soon pretty please
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey samra
awesome part ,
now vickey is here so everything wil be fixed
& now he even know the truth of both's side
i just hope ki dev & nt will understand that maaneet r in love
wating for next part egerly
hope it will revel the truth
& thanx for pm


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Posted: 14 years ago
VIcky plz save the day. Knowing dev n naintaras character they r evil n will come up with evil plan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...please waiitng for next one...you know this scene reminded me of movie Chandani...where in climax Sridevi runs to Rishi Kapoor
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar it's over 2 hrs r u updating?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ne possibility of an update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww hope they clear their misunderstandings!!

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