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wow..wow...ausu...loved it...update soon...that metri is such a b****...always coming between abhiya...but thanks for super update

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superb update!
Wow. .the picnic was awesome. .the song. .i cud imagine it. .
But. .metri. . .arghhh. .she is making me so mad. .i feel lyk killing her!
Plz. . Abhay aur pia ko dur mat karna. .is metri ka kuch karo. .i only want to see abhiya together. .
I hope. .chand n haseena r fine!
Continue soon. .tc
P.S: ur 2nd ff is terrific. .update soon

Originally posted by: missglam

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superb update!
Wow. .the picnic was awesome. .the song. .i cud imagine it. .
But. .metri. . .arghhh. .she is making me so mad. .i feel lyk killing her!
Plz. . Abhay aur pia ko dur mat karna. .is metri ka kuch karo. .i only want to see abhiya together. .
I hope. .chand n haseena r fine!
Continue soon. .tc
P.S: ur 2nd ff is terrific. .update soon

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey kajal dat was reli a well written partawesome bt quite painfull in d end...ahhh..i hate metri😡wondering how wil pia deal wid this..?i thought dat guru ma wl understand dat love happens at its own u cn't force it on someone...bt she n materi both r alike...😡

plsss continue soon

luv

heena

Hmm very romantic i love Abhiya. But this Matri she is a witch i hate her. Very nice job keep it up. Love you

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

oh no. 😭 itne romantic update ke baad ye tragedy 😭

Originally posted by: stary_kajal

hey friends if u dont like extra characters i will stop writing...