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Posted: 13 years ago

PART -33

" Maan.." geet suddenly scremed clenching her duvet.

Suddenly maan waked from her scream. She is in pain." geet what happened..."

her eyes are filled by tears. " maan pain?.muje kuch ho raha hai.." its midnight. Immediately maan caressed her tummy. When he about call dadima geet holed his hand.

Now she is looking better. " maan I think baby started its movement..." she smiled with tears. He relief and he try to feel baby. geet taken his hand and kept on stomach. "maan not here...here..." again and again she moved his hand all over her hole stomach. His eyes widened. Yes baby is moving. he saw her face. Motherhood given different glow in her face. They both are feeling so great. They are to exited to give birth to another life. he kissed her tummy softly.

After few minutes again geet slipped to sleep. But maan still enjoying his happiness with the feel of becoming a father of his baby. in front of his eyes a small tiny baby appeared. He can hear baby cry. Cute smile appeared on his lips... Imagining his baby. putting thumb inside of its mouth and sucking its little thumb, small twinkling eyes , with rosy lips, hitting again and again with its small legs and hands, changing its position again and again ... oh god what a great creation...what a great feel...he remembered one Sanskrit slokam" poonarapee jannanam, poonarapee maranam..." he closed his eyes dreaming his baby.

Next day when she informed about baby movement to dadima everybody rush to feel baby. vicky kept his ear on geet tummy. Anni hit him and she started to feel baby caressing her tummy. Maan crossed his arms and watching from far all the happiness of his family. Dadima kissed on fore head "geet, ye baby hamara khurana khandahan ka amanath hain". Geet shied and hugged dadima.

All are caring geet like a their precious treasure. Dadima didn't let her to remember her maika. They are ready to fulfill her wishes. Once geet simply looking at kaccha mangoes at magazine...within few hours vicky brought half of the market into khurana mansion. Everybody's care and love made her speech less. She couldn't digest their love at a time. Many times she thanked her bhabhji for giving such a wonderful loving family to her.

Now she is in seventh month. Baby will kick too much to her .some times it will be very smooth , at the same time its make her to cry. When she cried vicky couldn't see her in pain." geet don't worry once she come out , ill take revenge on her...for hurting you..." Folding his shirt arms.

Anni: " hey don't dare to touch my baby..."

dadima just burst her laugh listening their fake fight.

Today morning it self maan went to attend some important meeting in KC. When he entered his room he find geet weaving sweater leaning back on bed. It is a too beautiful site for him. pregnancy given her very cute look and her big tummy showing his love. She didn't notice when maan came from her backside and closed her eyes." maan..." she showed her fake anger on him."?did you think your geet is such idiotic not finding her own husband?" she removed his hand and kissed to his palms.

"umm...geet I need here .." he showed his lips and lean her. she pushed him with fake anger. He laid on her laps inserting his hand into her kurthi searching to her waist.

She started to remove his hand from her waist. Its giving tickling sensation to her. maan made baby face." Geet aaj kal bahuth bhuri hu?.you are not letting me to love you. Always you care only baby."

Geet:" no maan ?how can I stop loving you. You are given me such a happiness to me. " she kissed on his lips and stop protesting his act.

Now his fingers moved to her mounts." Geet no you are lying with me. already you started to weave sweater for baby. but me..."

Geet burst her laugh." Arrey buddu, I am not weaving for baby this for my big baby..."

Maan:" what..."

Geet:" this is for you..i have lot of time to baby...now its for you..." she opened fully and shown the sweater yes she is right. She is weaving to him. he made apologies face and kissed her lovingly. He loved the way how she response him. she called him big baby... how sweet. Both lost in their eye lock. They come on sense when dadima knock the door. Immediately they corrected their positions.

Dadima: " geet what are you doing.." geet shown her sweater. Dadima smiled .

Dadima: " geet anni is waiting for you out side. she wants to speak with you?"

Geet :" theeke dadima" she went out.

When maan tried to follow her dadima stopped him.

Dadima: "maan bte I want to talk to you..about geet.." immediately he turned to dadima.

Maan:" any thing serious..."

Dadima: "no ...just I am planning for geet ghodh bharai function. What you say..."

Ghodh bharai function ...actually he forget it." Thank you dadima you remembered me..tell me what we should do.."

Dadima: " you no need to do any thing. Already I have planned every thing. Before completing seven months we have to do it. Already vicky arranged for function. What you say"

Maan : " theeke dadima...as u wish but when you have planed"

Dadima:" next Friday..."

Maan: "oh dadima , I had a meeting in UK regarding Sharma project ..." He worried.

Dadima :" what to do...then..we are not having any good muhurtham for function..."

Maan:" dadima don't worry I attend the function and I move to UK..."dadima agreed.

Still one more week is there to complete seven months. Vicky decorated KM with lights and flowers. Hole KC and other relations joined for function.

anni decorated geet. when she show her to maan just paralyzed looking her beauty. Anni left them alone and she went. Maan walked towards her?geet shied looking desires in his eyes. she shown fake anger on him. slowly he moved to near her. he made her to sit in front of mirror. he holed her hand in right hand and put his left hand in his pocket. He sat on his knees. He picked two gold kangan which is mount by precious emeralds. He made her to ware it. After she ware it he kissed her palms. Its decorated with dark mehandhi including his name. "thank you geet giving so much happy to me and my family." Her eyes are teary. He filled her mang with sindur. When ever he is with her she like to fill her mang by maan. he placed soft kiss on her forehead.

maan eyes moved to her cheeks. He kissed softly. Its turn to red. "geet I need my baby bill kull like you. Tumari tarah harwakth lal rang mey hona chahiye. Thodi se com ho gaya mey nahi manugi?" she hugged him lovingly. He likes her cheeks when turn to red.

Dadima call them for pooja. Geet closed her eyes and joined her hands in front of mathaji statue. Maan continues following her. he is not ready to leave her for a second. In fact he is feeling bad for moving UK leaving her in this situation. But he trust his family more then him. He lost in her cute beauty. Her red lehanga, her red dupatta, her mangti her jewelries every thing made her most beautiful women in this world.Suddenly he is feeling in him something?yes he forgot something he couldn't remember it. Just he tried to remember no use. Geet beauty is not letting him to remember.

He stood next to geet. still she is praying with god. He whispered in her ear." Geet...kya mangha thum mathji se..."

Geet opened her eyes" kuch nahi..."

Maan:" kuch tho hain bathadho geet.."

Geet shied "wo ...mey.. hum dhono ko sath janam thak sath rakh ne keleye mangha tha..."

He sink his eyes." sirf sath janam thak...its too bad..." he made angry face"... Maiene socha tum har janam mey mera sath nahi chodungha. Geet pls tum bhaji ka sabse ladli bte haina . har janam mey muje thumara sath chahiye. Bhabaji se yahi mangho.."

He hugged her lovingly. Dadima call geet for mantap. All suhagans where blessed her applying turmeric and chanden. Many of suhagans filled her pallu by their gifts. After some time anni , arjun and vicky started to give their performance. Maan went to upstairs. He should go for UK today it self. Already geet packed every thing in his room. Before going again he watched from upstairs. All are happy dadima enjoying the function. Anni , pinky , sasha , thasha all are performing dance. This is what he needed for his family. His eyes where teary. All these happiness brought by only geet.

Suddenly he remember what he forget. Yes today is sangeetha birthday and death day. my god how can I forget it. All these years he didn't forget her at once. How can all these days I am forgetting her. he rush to sangeetha room. There is a fresh white and magenta color rose are welcoming him. yes geet at any cost she won't forget to change flowers in front of her. today she placed greeting card also. How stupid I am..i forget sangetha today...he pulled his hairs roughly.

At down function is ending .all the guests are moving one by having their lunch. Geet try to search maan. where was he. Today he has to move for UK. Mey be he is in room. I should go and speak to him . she rush to her room but she didn't find him. where he went . her eyes moved here and there searching him. she removed all are heavy jewlerry and change to night dress. she heard sobbing sound from study room.

Pre cap: REMORSE??..

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments

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Wish you all very happy sri krishnajanmashtami.
Edited by varsha-sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Loved the update.

praying nothing will go wrong this time...
It will be a perfect and happy pregnancy...
when will Maan forget sangeetha?
I m not liking that he always remembered her...after everything he has done to geet (all the wrongs)
and after all the love Geet has given him and his family...
When will he forget sangeetha n move forward in his life??

when/


hey,
i was hoping that u wud respond to some of my concerns but u did not😭
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for update...i liked the update except the last part...i know geet will be able to get Maan out of his misery but all this "sangeeta" "sangeeta" is getting too much...abhi tow he was asking for all his lives with geet...now crying AGAIN for Sangeeta...whatever it is not getting it that he is still stuck in past...This is not justified to Geet...she is giving everything and he is still keeping a big part of himself for Sangeeta...this is my opinion only.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope this time maan will open his full heart to geet and tell everything ehich r his heart...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no now what?
Happy Janmashtami :-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely.update... precap is scary... Why remorse ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
well written update...
everybody is so happy but maan is back to square one...he is hopeless...this is too much...he simply can't forget sangeeta...poor geet I am feeling very sad for her...maan is indirectly mentally torturing her... please continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
read it in one go...!! i wish maan cud realise he loves geet!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was awesome
I wish maan could just forget sangeetha..i mean it's not fair on geet..
Uhhh you left it on the edge...let's see what happens
Maan going to Uk...yaayyy he's coming to meet me ...jokes!
Plz plz plz update soon

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