Maaneet Honeymoon SS COMPLETED - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 part dear
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wow!...that was too HOT!!!!
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part 8
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the Cullen's home wow...
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Dat was damn super duper hottt!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, romantic, passionate part
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I am very sad about geet...😭just as the rest of you! I just don't want to accept that it's the last episode or my heart doesn't want to accept it...only god knows! Well here I am with the next update as promised! I hope you like it...and it's my request to all the FF writers for maaneet...that please do carry on and writing...as maaneet will be in our hearts...and just because they are not on telly doesn't mean that we can't use our imagination! Today was the most heart wrenching episode as it showed all the flashbacks...and it just made it impossible to watch! But Gurmeet & Drashti did a good job and it is our job as fans to support them where ever they go...even if they aren't together! All the best to Gurmeet and Drashti for making 2 years memorable for us! 👏

Now back to update...as always lots of comments and likes because the more you do that...the quicker you get your updates! And thanks...to everyone that helped me learn a few things from India Forums...like how to add youtube videos! 😊 This is a song for you guyz...to enjoy! You maybe sad but just think of the positive then the negative!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=NSBGYFFw6pA[/YOUTUBE]
Here is a nice clip of Gurti enjoying themselves...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=Ey_NB3L39xo[/YOUTUBE]


Warning 18+ ONLY
Part 9

Geet and Maan were just lying in bed, exhausted from their love making.

Geet: Maan mujhe bhook lagi hain! Humne dinner bhi nahi kiya...chalo na kuch khate hain!
Maan: Geet tum pregnant ho aur tumne kuch nahi khaya hai abhi tak...tumhe apna khayal rakna chahiye...aur mujhe bhi...ab chalo!

Geet found Maan's shirt and put it on herself while Maan was about to walk out when geet stopped him.

Geet: Maan sharam kijye..kadpe toh pehne...
Maan: tumse kya sharam sanam...
Geet: Maan please mujhe sharam aa rahi hai...(She turned around shying in front of him)

Maan came from behind and hugged her.

Maan: Geet ankhein kholo...(She opened her and he slowly turned her around so she was facing him...) Geet...tum meri shirt do...kyunki yeh meri shirt...
Geet: Par maan...aap tho kuch aur pehnsakte hai na...
Maan: Nahi par mujhe yahi shirt chahiye...aur main yahi pehnunga...
Geet: Theek hain...main change karke aathi hun! (She was just about to walk off when she felt a pull and she crashed into Maan's chest...
Maan: Nahi Geet...mujhe shirt abhi chahiye aur main abhi hi loonga...

He started to unbutton the shirt when geet suddenly held his hand in shock.

Geet: Maan...yeh aap kya kar rahe hain?
Maan: Geet...main meri shirt le raha hoon..
Geet: Par Maan (then geets stomach rumbled due to her hunger...colour flooded her cheeks)
Maan: (Maan smirked) Lagta hai tumhe bahot bhook lagi hain...chalo! (Before she could even say something, he picked her up and headed downstairs into the kitchen)

Maan placed her down gently and stood behind her as watched her getting something to eat. He had already got their food in the evening, but forgot about as soon as he saw geet in the nighty. After realising geet's hunger, he knew that she should eat something as it wouldn't be too good for the baby otherwise!

As geet was warming up the food, maan placed his cold hand on her waist, over the shirt squeezing her waist a little! Then he turned her around in a jerk and placed a quick kiss on her lips. He pulled away when they heard the beeping of the microwave.

Maan: geet baaki ki romance khane ke baad...chalo geet khana khate hain...mujhe bhi bahot bhook lagi hain!
Geet: (she blushed) hmm chalo!

Geet got 2 plates out and was about to start serving when maan said "geet humhe do plate ki kya zaroorat hain...jab hum ek hain...tho ek hi se plate se kahange na!" Geet put away the extra plate smiling at her romantic husband. She was about to sit on her chair besides maan when he pulled her. She landed straight on his lap. He moved his hand onto her waist tightening his grip so she couldn't run away, not that she wanted to run away. On the other hand, Geet already fell shy seeing her husband stark naked, roaming around the house and the fact that she was sitting on his lap, aroused her more. They started to feed each other slowly. Maan's one hand was on her waist while the other caressing her thigh, slowly creeping up towards her inner thigh, and caressing the skin there.

Soon they finished their food and were just sitting there feeling each other, gently caressing each other which was turning them on even more. Maan could feel her wet and ready for him so he shifted her slighty so that she was straddling him and thrusted his hard manhood in her. Geet was in a sweet shock when she felt him inside her, causing thousands of explosions within her. Maan started to thrust harder and harder until both of them climaxed together. They stayed still for a few mintues, trying to calm their breathing when maan spoke.

Maan: Dekha geet...kapde na hone ka kitna faiyda hota hai (he smirked)
Geet: MAAN...aap na bahot besharam hote jarahe ho...(Hiding herself in his chest while maan smirked)
Maan: Geet tumne meri besharmi dekhi hi kaha hain...abhi toh bahot kuch karna baaki hain...maine kaha tha na tumse ki shaadi hojane do...aur phir dekna...(she looked at him in shock)
Geet: MAAN (he left out a soft chuckle)

He picked her up and took her back to their master bedroom and placed her on the bed and covered them both with a blanket. He pulled geet closer and she placed her head on his chest and drifted to sleep.

Geet woke up hours later as the sun disturbed her sleep. She saw her masculine husband that she was sleeping next to, he looked too sexy while sleeping. She started to stroke his washboard chest as if in a trance. She stopped out of reverie when maan said while his eyes were closed.

Maan: Kya kar rahi ho Geet?
Geet: Aap jag rahe the?
Maan: Hmm...ab jab meri biwi mere saath aise so rahi hai...tho kiski neend ayegi?
Geet: aap bhi na!
Maan: Waise meri mishty bahot romantic ho rahi hain...kya baat hain?
Geet: Sab mera pati ka kusoor hain...unhi ne mujhe sikhaya hain...
Maan: acha...tumare pati ne sikhaya hain?? Abhi bata hoon geet ki tumara pati kya kya kar sakta hain!
Geet: Matlab?
Maan: yehi samajlo geet ki tumari ek hi galti hain ki tum bahot ticklish ho...aur aaj tho main iska pura faiyda uttaonga!

Suddenly, Maan came on top of geet, and he started tickling geet, while geet screamed out loud, not able to take the sensation. This was like sweet torture for her. Maan freckled his fingers beneath the shirt she was wearing. His one hand holding her 2 hands at the top of her head so she couldn't move and the other hand beneath her shirt, torturing her to no end.

Geet: MAAN plz stop it...plz
Maan: nahi geet...yehi tumari saza hain...(Me wondering par usne kiya kya hai?)
Geet: Maan..plz I am sorry...yeh sab apne nahi sikhaya (she said in between her fits of laughter)
Maan: Hmm...(He smirked)

Maan left her so she could calm her breathing down. He just loved tickling her because he loved to see her laugh and a smile on her face. She looked so serene while she was lying there, he just wanted to devour her skin. He couldn't believe that after hours of love making, that he could still feel aroused. He opened her shirt and threw it somewhere where it was out of reach. He gently stroked her skin while he was on top of her. His hands slid in the shirt to feel her mounds. Instead of calming her, he was arousing her instead. Maan pecked her lips softly, which soon turned into a passionate kiss, with him continuously biting her lips making them bleed but then licking the blood off to give her pleasure at the same time. He pinned her on the bed and started to explore her skin in great detail. Geet realised that he was loving her very aggressively today, letting go of his inhibitions, but she didn't mind as she was enjoying the passionate lover. Maan was leaving a trail of love bites anywhere he could find bare skin, but then he would lick the area to sooth her pain. He went back to kissing her passionately when Geet moaned, 'Maan..please stop torturing me!' just as he listened to her plea, he entered her and thrusted into her until they both climaxed. Due to the fatigue they went to sleep cuddling each other, to only wake up in the morning.

Precap: Geet: Maan dekhiye aapne kya kiya hai...mere sharer pe kitne nishan hai...

Maan: Acha..dikhao?

Edited by -maankimishty- - 13 years ago

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