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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Sunshine

You're mad if you think it's short 😆 meri line mujpe use kar rahi hai ? 😲 Areeyyy I love my banner too I said it's the best from the stuff I try to make dhyaan se padh betaa 🤓 Ha meri elder MG I will update okieee... 😛 Phir se shark ? Why do you do this to me ? 😆 LOLZZ

yes...i love that line 😆 and LMAOO...i just read it again and now i feel like i'm buddhu 🤣 and yes, meri pyaari shark will kill everyone who annoys me so if you don't update today then she'll kill you. you have like 11 hours to update because i'm going then 🤣 i know you're still asleep now...but wake up early today and WRITE. 🤣🤣 okies...now i'll stop spamming you're thread with my nonsense 🤣 i'll only comment here when you've update meri choti CG 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

yes...i love that line 😆 and LMAOO...i just read it again and now i feel like i'm buddhu 🤣 and yes, meri pyaari shark will kill everyone who annoys me so if you don't update today then she'll kill you. you have like 11 hours to update because i'm going then 🤣 i know you're still asleep now...but wake up early today and WRITE. 🤣🤣 okies...now i'll stop spamming you're thread with my nonsense 🤣 i'll only comment here when you've update meri choti CG 😆

MY UPDATE IS READY TU ONLINE AAJAAA..I annoy you ? 😭 Kaisa sila diya tune meri pyaar ka.. 😭 Meri badi MG ONLINE AAJA PLEASE!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Trasshy babyyy😆
😆😊(ok i m putting a verry formal smile here so that u dont think i am making fun of ur ff)😊
i loved the concept of ur ff please jaldi update kar u know i am gonna bug u soo much evryday ok!!!
so dont mind if u get a comment evryday on ur ff!!😃
acha acha likho aur mogambo ko khush karooo😆
and yeah can i request u something🤔put some good dp😆yeah u up a dp of my choice
😆
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Edited by love_dmg1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
jaldiii update CG, i'm hereee 😆😆😆😆
sholly for makeing you wait so much!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello

I am extremely flattered by the response.Yes I apologise for the delay of the update but well 600th KaJen AT was coming up so I had dedicated myself to that.Now that's it done I am here WITH an update..Thank you for commenting it means alot and yeah please make sure you are in my buddylists 😃 Oh Yes this part is for you MG.Hope you come back soon and I hope you take your laptop with you so that I don't miss you alot :(
(Use karna compulsory che 😆 nahi toh i'll send your shark after you 🤣)
Part One - The Beginning
"Baraat agayi..Baraat Agayi" a kid yelled and ran away.All the people sitting in her room rushed to the window to catch a glimpse of the 'Baraat' and of course the 'dulha'.
There were people dancing like crazy.Enjoying themselves to the fullest.The latest songs were being played and every one was having a gala time.The ladies searched for the car where the groom was seated and at last they found a black car decorated with flowers.They wanted to see the groom and they were trying their level best and soon their wishes were fullfilled.
They saw the groom getting out of the car and getting pulled by people to dance with him."Chal yaar Armaan dance kar" said a friend of his but Armaan was least interested.Why was he getting married in the first place.Heck he didn't remember the name of his to be wife.
"He looks normal for a change" whispered a girl and that was heard by Riddhima.She shut her eyes.Did she have to hear all this for entire life ? She saw every one busy watching the baraat.She quietly left the room and went to find her parents.
She went to their room and found her parents talking to each other.She was about to enter when she heard "Unhone paise de diya na ?" Padma asked..Shashank nodded his head happily and said "Unhone poore 1 billion diye hai Padma.Ab hum araam se jee sakange..Jo bhi paise humne Riddhima pe kharch kie hai vo saare paise hume wapas mil gaye" "Humme toh zyaada mile hai.Bhagwaan ka laakh laakh shukar hai ki hume itne saare paise mil gaye..Ab hum humari zindagi araam se jeeyenge"
Riddhima made her way back to the room.Her parents had sold her off ? They got 1 billion rupees to get married to Armaan ? They loved money for than their own daughter ? Not once did they think about her future ? How she would live with Armaan..She wanted to cry but after a few minutes she thought why should she cry over the people who didn't care about her feelings.She hated her parents.She could run away from this marriage but no she wouldn't she wouldn't stoop as low as them.
She quietly sat on the bed.No one realised she had left the room.Every one was busy in their own world to be specific seeing the groom.She didn't know what to do.Her Internship would start in a week.Would her in laws allow her to do her internship ? What if they told her not to do her internship.No,she would do her internship.Her hardwork for 5 years wouldn't go to waste.
"Chalo beta.Tumhe neeche jana hai.Vaar mala ka samay hai" she saw her aunt looking at her.The images of her dad and mom talking flashed infront of her eyes.She gave a smile to her aunt and went with her.
As she reached down.She saw every one looking at her including the media who were taking various pictures of hers.Her gaze went to Armaan who was looking at the ground.His friend nudged him and that's when she realised he was dozing off.
She wanted to shake up him and beat the hell out of him so that he could stay awake in the marriage atleast.Both of them stood on the stools kept out infront of them.
Armaan was trying hard to recollect the name of the bride."What the hell of was her name man!Chod na kya farak padta hai.Who cares what her name is." he thought.."Armaan beta ye lo ye Riddhima ko pehnao" his mom said with a extra sweet tone handing him a garland.
"Riddhima?Ab ye Riddhima kaun hai ?" he thought.He saw the bride looking at him expectantly."Ek kaam karta hu isko pehna deta hu.She's the bride any way .Jo hoga dekha jayega" Armaan took the garland and put the garland around her neck
The crowd cheered and clapped which made Armaan realise that he didn't do anything wrong and the bride's name was Riddhima."Riddhima ? Ye kaisa naam hai itna lamba ? God!" Armaan was busy thinking when he felt he was picked up by his friends.What the hell!Why were they picking me up.."Armaan thoda bend kar Riddhima has to make you wear the garland" his friend hissed.
Armaan bent a bit and felt a garland around his neck.He looked up and saw bride aka Riddhima lifted by her friends.She was busy looking down at her friends and giving them a smile.While her friends cheered for her.
Riddhima was soon brought on the ground and she made her back to the room."What ? Itni jaldi ho gayi shaadi ? We just have to exchange garlands!Amazing now I can go to.." Armaan was interupted when his family was pushing him to go ahead "Oh no!Abhi tak baaki hai.Ye shaadi kab tak chalegi.." Armaan thought sadly
Armaan sat on the chair in the mandap with the pandit chanting some mantra's.After some time he told Armaan to repeat some mantra's after him which Armaan recited after alot of difficulty.Once he recited them he let out a sigh of relief.It was so hard to say these mantras.Soon a white cloth was put in between and as that happened Riddhima descended down from the stairs.
Riddhima removed her shoes at the steps the mandap and sat on the chair.After the pandit said some more mantra's the white cloth was taken off.They could now see each other.Armaan's scarf was tied to Riddhima's saree symbolising their union.A cord was tied around their neck which protected them from all the evils
Now it was time for the pheras.They completed the 4 phera's.At the end of the 4th phera Armaan was about to start the 5th phera with Riddhima caught his hand and made him sit down.Armaan was confused he thought there were 7 pheras he had seen in films and serials.
Soon Armaan was handed the mangalsutra and was asked to tie around Riddhima's neck.As Armaan tied the mangalsutra Riddhima closed her eyes.She was now officially a Mallik not a Gupta any more.Her life now consisted of her husband and her in laws but she made her mind that she wouldn't change herself for them.It was her life and she would live the way she wanted to but being a married woman she would take care of Armaan.
As she was thinking she didn't realise when Armaan applied the sindoor on the parting of her hair and when a little sindoor dropped on her nose.It is a saying that if the sindoor is dropped on the bride's nose the groom loved the bride alot.When Riddhima thought of Armaan loving her she laughed mentally Armaan Mallik could never love her.He loved something else.Some thing that she hated.
The marriage was now complete and it was now time for the Bidaai.Shashank hugged Riddhima blessed her and so did Padma.Riddhima did not cry.Not a single tear.The pain of leaving her parents had died down when she heard the conversation between them
Armaan sat in the car ordering the driver to proceed.He rested his head on the window and dozed off.Finally he could sleep.He was so sleepy during the wedding but he had been warned by his family if he would sleep the consequences would be bad so he tried his level best to be awake and he succeded
Riddhima looked at Armaan in pure shock.She didn't expect him to talk to her but atleast look at her a smile or a hey or anything but he made it as if it was only him in the car.She felt so wierd sitting in a car where the driver was driving and the person sitting next to her dozed off!A few tears came out of eyes.She wondered how her life would be.Would she curse every single day of her life ?
They soon arrived at the Mallik Mansion which more looked like a palace.As she entered she saw there was no one to welcome her.She was the bride wasn't she ? Not a single soul to welcome her into the new life she had stepped into.Armaan had gone somewhere the minute he entered the house.This left her in cladded in a bride's wear standing alone at the enterance of the house.
A servant tapped her shoulder and told her that she would show her the room where she would live.This made Riddhima astonished.A servant was going to her room ? What was this ? Where was she brought ? Where had her parents brought her to ? A life where no one welcomed her ?
She entered 'her' room which was beautiful she had to admit that.She went to the washroom to change her dress.When she came out side she saw Armaan sitting in balcony with a whisky bottle in his hand.He was looking out and sipping his whisky.She turned her gaze away and she knew this was going to be her life.Her life with her husband being a complete drunkard
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Here is the 1st part.Hope you guys like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
res. awww CG i'll miss you so much 😭i wish you were in mumbai now so we could meet up and THANK YOU SO MUCH for the siggy...I LOVE IT, you are one talented girlYou are so cute and that was so nice of you to do that. You are an amazing friend :) i'll definately edit my res soon and make my comment longgg. and LOL at the shark thingyy 😆i'll miss you...and i'll miss LG too. love youu <3

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Sooo I've finally started editing but this comment won't have any emos :( this is such a sad day. People used to call me emo queen and now :| anywayyy, I better edit quickly before my dad kills me! So I really loved the way you described the atmosphere of the wedding with everyone dancing and waiting for the groom... It was so detailed that I could actually imagine it happening! And Whatt my ammy isnt interested in the wedding :O I don't like him in this FF :/

And how could he not remember Riddhimas name? Its so unique and original so he should remember it! And also he's getting married to her so it's weird that he doesn't know! CG unless you make him nicer I think I have to make my shark kill him! And I don't like violence :| and why are people saying he looks normal for once? Does he normally look like a clown? Im confused :S

But I don't like people talking about armaan behind his back it just annoys me! And OMKAJEN Riddhimas parents sold her? I hate them so much how could they do that to their child. They are such shampoos (angry emo) Poor riddhima. Her fiance doesn't know her name and her parents are ghadde! You've written this so well that I have so much sympathy for her. I would hate to be her.

And seriously, armaan is sleeping. ON HIS WEDDING DAY. I HATE HIM. HE SHOULD DIE. I can't even bear to call him ammy because he is such a hhksbahsosbsj. Sholly but I didn't wanna swear on IF. and riddhima, go and beat him please. That's the best thing to do :) And OMKAJEN I was laughing so much when armaan didn't know where to put the garland. You shouldve made him put it on someone else, that would be so funny LOL.

And dude how do you know and remember all this about weddings! If I ever write an FF I'm never gonna make them get married cos I never understand what happens at weddings :$ And aren't there 7 pheras? Why did they stop after four :S and that sindoor thing reminds me of Sid and dmg and that scene made me so sad :( but I'm sure this is a sign. Hopefully one day he'll be good to her!

He slept in the car too? Well that wasn't surprising. If he sleeps in his wedding then obviously he'll sleep in the car. Have i said that I hate him? Because I HATE HIM. for once I like riddhima more than armaan! And WHAAT NO ONE WELCOMED HER? not even his parents! There was no rice thing? Where are his parents? And he's a drunkard? OMG. Poor riddhima. I wanna kill him. Please makehim nicer! Anyway I loved this episode it was amazing! And Sooo long! Now I'll only come on in a few days! But I'm glad you updated and post the next part soon!
Edited by kajen_hamesha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum part Trassshyyy👏
i feel soo bad for poor Riddhima😭her parents r soo rude n mean,they sold her off🥺
and Armaan is a drunkard😲😆well but he doesnt seem like a bad guy😛😆😆😆well i hope he isnt evil like her parents😒no1 to welcome her to her new house😔!!
Well i m soo curious now how the story proceeds😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
So Madam Trasshy i want update as soon as possible😆😆😆😆😆😆

😆
Edited by love_dmg1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Sorry. That was my little moment of silence. So Riddhima got married to Armaan because her parents wanted money (biatch!) and Armaan is a DRUNKARD! Zor ka jhatka kuch zyaada hi zoron se laga. 😆 Anyways. I really loved how you showed the marriage atmosphere. It was perfect. LOL. I found Armaan's thoughts to be amuzing. Please update uber soon!
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Edited by Medzi_ARian... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it was an ausum update
😲 armaan didnt know the name of his bride?😆
it was funny
😲 armaan and drunkard😕
may be he has a past
update super soon
nd thnx fr d pm
Edited by youth_showsfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
RES...

OKAY!!..
SRRY FOR EDITING SO LATE
(BUSY IN BBQ😆)

ANYWAYZ..

I LOVED IT😃
AMAZING!!

CANT BELIEVE SHANKY N PADMA WOULD DO SUCH A THING
I MEAN..SELL THEIR OWN DAUGHTER😲!!!
POOR RIDDHIMA😭

OMKJ..CNT BELIEVE ARMAAN MALLIK IS A...DRUNKARD!!😲😲😲
HAWWW!!

AWW..I FEEL EVEN BAD-ER FOR RIDDHIMA NOW😭😭
AND NO ONE WELCOMED HER INTO THE HOUSE EITHER😲

WONDER HOW SHES GONNA HANDLE HER NEW LIFE!!

CONTINUE SUPER FAST THIS TIME..
CNT WAIT

LUV,
AASHI <3



Edited by KaJen_IK_DMG - 14 years ago

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