New MANEET FF! My Angel - Part 6 pg 19 4th NOV - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME PART
come on Maan rescueee her from that stupid Kabir!
cont soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update..
liked it..
interesting precap..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue soon

good update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomeee
welcome back savni
after a longgg timeee
cooolll
luved ittt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4:

Maan saw how much his family liked her, he must give her a chance.

Maan goes and takes blessing from Dadi maa and looked at Geet who was going to take blessing at the same time. Both bend down and looked at each other.

Geet and Maan had not breaked their eye-contact yet.

Annie came between and Geet started to look somewhere else, she was feeling awkward.

Annie drag her to her room, and both took out their homework's.

Geet took out her books and gave them to Annie.

Annie- What the heck!! I'm so not going to do your homework,
Geet- Please annie, dost kis kaam ke liye hote hai
Annie- It's only maths we have, and English, not so much that you can't do it
Geet- Please na, you are so mean, you know na that I'm weak in maths?

Annie's mom entered the room with two glass of juice.

Geet- Hello Aunty , and hugs her
Mom- hello , how are you ?
Geet- I'm fine, just little bit tired
annie- mom don't listen to her, she is such a liar. You don't know she don't want to do math homework because she is weak in it.

Mom was thinking a solution and Maan had just passed from Annie's room.

Mom- why don't you have Maan as your teacher?
Geet - the new boy?
Annie- GEET! He is my brother, stop it.
Geet- Alright, but aunty will he teach me you know na how strict Darji is. I don't want to get a F this time.
Annie- it's called Failed my dear. And laughs.
Mom- I will go and talk with him you follows me.

Geet takes her math book and goes after Annie's mom.

Annie's mom enters the room and Maan was just doing his science homework. He looks up and smiles at his mom

Maan- Mom aap?
Avantika- Haa mein Maan, kya kar rahe ho? And sits on the bed
Maan- Kuch nhi, science ka homework hai, uske baad math
Avantika- Oh that's good, would you like someone, it needs help in math
Maan- Mom aap ko to kabhi puchne ki zarorat nhi haai, kaun hai woh
Avantika- Geet, andhar ao
Maan- Geet?

Geet goes inside and she was looking like someone had scared her.

Avantika- Maan you will help Geet, and you will not let her do any masti, only work

Geet felt akward and didn't look at him once, but suddenly when she lifted to meet his eyes, she fall in love with those dark brown eyes.

Avantika leaved the room and Geet was looking at his eyes.

Geet- Wow, cool colour you have on your eyes. I love them.

Maan thought that she is maybe is a mental patient.

Maan- Where is your books?

Geet looks at her books and shows it to him.

Maan- Itna easy yeh hai, aur tumhe nhi atha?
Geet- Mein tumhe, I mean apko koi einstein lagti ho?

Maan was smiling at the way she talks, she sounds like a little kid but still she is 13years old.
Geet-
you smiled, Omg for the first time I see you smile. So cute you look and pulls on his cheeks.
Maan gets angry and looking very hard at her and she quit immediately.

Geet- I'm sorry
Maan- mhm, thik hai, chalo aab meri bath deiyan se suno and started to explain math's for Geet.

After two hours of practice she began to take a little. Maan started to to lose patience and closed her book with anger


Maan-How hard can it be to understand algebra? And whatever your name is.
Geet-Men, why are you angry now? I have not done anything? And Geet is my name!
Maan-Please, you have been on the same page for over two hours now.

Geet knew now that the tears started to come up. She looked down and listened to all the barks she got from him.

Maan-Listen, now, please, I will not say anything nasty to you even though you really have to force you to practice in all Algebra otherwise mom will kill me, and then your darji kill me, or should I say the opposite?
Geet-How can Aunty kill you , if you are already dead?

Maan looked up at her, he wanted to die of laughter, but he managed to hold his laughter. Geet look at him with her tearful eyes. Suddenly Maan did something he should not have done. He wiped away her tears with his thumb. Geet looked into those dark brown eyes and felt that she got a shock when he touched her. Their eye contact was broken by Annie and Dev came running into the room. Dev thought that Maan had said something about Geet for he saw she was crying.

Dev-Baby what's happened?

Geet started laughing of the he said. Maan thought now, no, never thought he knew she was mentally abnormal guaranteed.

Geet-Dev, how many times have I told you not to call me baby? 1st it cannot happen anything between us. 2nd It will never happened something between us.

Maan also began to laugh of what she said to Dev. She should probably be the first girl who ditches Dev. Otherwise; he can get the girl who wants him.

Geet- Dev Believe me, I feel sorry for you. Look at you. I think you can only get the girls who want to come to you. But look at your oldest brother. My God he is so hot. All the girls drooling over him, and he can get any girl.
Maan was first scared of her; she can read my thoughts now but is disturbed by the others she said.
Maan-Oh so you think I'm hot?
Geet was shocked. She did not think he was standing near
her.
Annie started to to get bored and went out and pulled Dev too. She knew that Maan Bhai would not let Geet be until he finds out what she meant.
When the door was shut Geet started to shake. He walked slowly up to her and she began to walk slowly back. Geet went straight into the wall and Maan is right in front of her.
Geet-Can I go? She says to him with her ??sweetest voice
Maan-If you reply to my question then yes otherwise no.
Geet now swallow her saliva. And brings a fake smile on her face

Precap: Maan- I'm awake! Btw what have you two done together?

ADD: Dramafaan

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Edited by SaVni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
LOVED IT
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...

lol..geet called him hot n now doesnt have any explanation...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4
nice part...
Maan is teaching Geet maths who is very weak in that...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Loved it! U update after so long!!

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