Fall Out ~MG~ THREAD 3 Part 25 PG 142 - Page 84

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Posted: 14 years ago

phew!! after all those one shots and continuous ff updates...im finally taking time to catch up on all the updates i missed from my favorite writers!! i came to do this one first...after all...it has my cutie Meha!! 😃

Chapter 22:
first thing i notice...a disclaimer!! 🤣...i thought i was the only one to do that!! 😉...but we all writers need to protect ourselves from the readers!! 😆...ironic no? 😛...aab yeh aurat Geet ke paas kyun aayi hai? 😡...has she come for bheek manging for her scumbag of a son!! 🤬...when did she turn good...she made it seem like she could have done something if Meera had told her...this is what happens when i dont read on time...i get all sorts of confused!! ...i swear...im a maneet fan at heart...but i just LOVED her telling him off...he may not be at fault...but i still enjoyed it!! im horrible!!! 😳...but 😲 at the slap and the line "this is for the sorry excuse of a man you are" 😲...say what! oh man...that was brutal...but i LOVED IT!!! like LOVED it x10000000 😉...Geets breakdown about her worries/fears about Meha growing up!! 👏👏...just flawless!!!

Chapter 23:
the whole Pami Kiran adoption thing had me a little confused at the beginning..i had to read it slowly three time b4 it sunk in that Pammi was an unwed mother so Maan's mom adopted the love child...aka...the DEVil! 😡...and tauba...Pammi had an affair with her Jiju...eww!! that really irks me...on shows and real life...i mean...chi!! my Jiju's are like my big brothers...tauba tauba...im getting nauseous just at the thought!! 🤢...love Pinky...she was crying but shes no longer crying!! 🤣...lol...and lmfao at Dev getting beat up...bade miya toh bade miya (maan) and chote miya...subhanallah!! they are just going at it like idiots arent they!! ...


cant wait for next update!! cont soon!! lol...😆

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
Teaser
She turned just as she crashed into someone. Her head collided with something muscled and she stumbled backwards and her ankle twisted. Instinctively her hand reached out to grab whatever in her reach, to save the fall. She felt a hand hold her by the wrist and the next moment she felt an arm go around her waist, pulling her upright.

"Are you alright" she heard a husky voice call out.

She straightened herself as she moved a step backwards, putting some distance between the man and her, before finally speaking "Thank you"

The man smiled at her as he said "You're welcome"

"Um . . ." she stuttered, not knowing what else to say. That was when she felt him extend his arm forward. "Rohan Shergil"

*****
She twitched the door knob and as soon as she pulled open the door . . . she froze cold. Everything around her fazed as she gaped at him wide eyed. She opened her mouth to speak but words wouldn't come out. He was here . . . standing right in front of her after five real long years. Her heartbeat raced as her mind went blank and only one thought raked her nerves . . . Why was he here?

She had thought she had gotten over him, she had thought she had had a head start, she had thought she had moved on . . . until this moment. He stood before her in flesh and blood . . . and her past flashed in front of her, transpiring her right back to the day when she had decided to leave him . . . for that was the need of the time and perhaps it had seemed best option at that point of time but now seeing him after all this time forced her to question, had it really been the best option?

Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
teaser is awesme so again a separation of 5 years and was maan perfectly fine after the accident or something has happened with him i dont think anything has happened
and who he hell is this rohit shergil i hope he doesnt come between maaneet
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

teaser is awesme so again a separation of 5 years and was maan perfectly fine after the accident or something has happened with him i dont think anything has happened
and who he hell is this rohit shergil i hope he doesnt come between maaneet

things are not what they look like😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

things are not what they look like😉


so r u updating today or tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


so r u updating today or tomorrow

if i complete it by tonight then around eleven may be 😃 or otherwise defintely tomorrow😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

if i complete it by tonight then around eleven may be 😃 or otherwise defintely tomorrow😃


thanks would be waiting for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi awesome trailer...5 years separation? Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

things are not what they look like😉


Exactly ...so what does it mean???
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan
i read all ur ffs n demand for pms u do send me pm thanks for that
part 23 is awesome
guilt is very tough to over come
as i read in cell so it is not possible ti press like button but i read
if u get i like less count me n whenever i cum on net do press like button
no need to write hope i know u will understand my problem

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