FF-Enigma- THREAD 8- (NOTE pg 137- Link to thrd 9) - Page 4

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Congratzz for the new thread...waiting for the next part...
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I love your FF and the last update was freakingly hottt☺️

Wonder what will Maan do bechara?😆
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~ENIGMA~
Part 66





"toh kaho!How will you show me?" maan observed her naked body, only covering her assets. Her each step was taken carefully as she Stood in same bight as me. She snaked her hand round my neck...
Geet "ap khao na! How will you show me? Will you strip? Or act." maans eyes widens hearing the words! What is she talking about? Stripping? Why would I strip? There was pure angry glare. He could clearly see she is not in sense.
Maan "geet, you sleep here! You are not in sense!" he tries to free but geet holds him tighter!
Geet "are you gay?"
Maan "what?"
Geet "why aren't you getting wet seeing a almost naked girl?" she demands pushing him to the bed, then quickly he unzips his trouser shoving her hand in, "I want to feel!"
Maan in shock just looked at her, and jumped moving back! Does she realize how hard is to control her! And top of it this... She pulled her trouser off... And sat on top of him, her expose breast touched his bare chest & then she started to sing..."Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam"

She brushes her cheek against his... While taking his hand and spreading it all over her body... Maan was loosing it... Specially both with there inner, only little something to prevent them to be one... He wasn't sure how he exactly was controlling, but one more step he will be filling her with him...




Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam

She stood up, stood there with her leg spread, on either side of his body... Holding his hand for a support...

Oh, le liya dil, oh haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam...

She stepped back and went off the bed... Maan could see the pain, he knew well what they shared but her fear was not letting her go anywhere... He took the spread from the side and hide her nude body. Kissing the nape... Pleasure was nothing compare to where he wants to take her. Relationship is something there to stay for ever... Where desire, lust is just another way to enjoy a relationship... Maan worried will she understand his thought...

(Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein
Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein) - 2
Tum mere ho, ho tum mere ho
Aaj tum itna vaada karte jaana


Maan smiles and gives her forehead a kiss.. Promising never to leave her.. How can he through way his own life... He may not understand the proper meaning of this relationship... But he understood how much he needs her...

Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam



Maan wasnt sure how to reply but he started... Started with his love...

Ho, sajaaoonga lutkar bhi tere badan ki daali ko
Lahoo jigar ka doonga haseen labon ki laali ko
Sajaaoonga lutkar bhi tere badan ki daali ko
Lahoo jigar ka doonga haseen labon ki laali ko
Hai vafa kya is jahaan ko
Ek din dikhla doonga main deewana
Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam

He knew well geets fear but did she know his fear... Did she know how he may react if she leaves him... Did she know, what will happen to him is she ever think about dumping him...

Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Le liya dil, haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Hm hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm


The moment was week, but its not that week that this night may break there relationship. It does not need to take it in to a next level because love does not have any level. If its true everything will happen by it self.



Maan picks her up and takes her to the bed, taking one of his shirt and helping her to put it on. She smiled and slept peacefully in one anthers arm... While he next to her...

Morning horizon work the love birds. Geets eyes open bit by bit, she stretched and rubbed, rubbing her eyes then suddenly she felt a hard chest under her... Geet instantly jumps up... Holding her head... Maan shift from one side to another... Making him self comfy... While geet started to worry, but she found her cloths intact, except maans shirt, and quit few love bites...
Suddenly maan spoke out... "don't worry we have not done anything!" geet took a sigh relief! "and if you go to hospital for checkup mujse bura koi na hoga!" geet made a face! She did have some thought!
Maan went back to sleep.

The cold water took her hangover way! "uff ae maan bhi na!" her back was sore, there was also few bite Mark as well... "how can I believe we have done nothing! And now even if I go for check up! He will be angry!... Chado! Geet Teri bhi galti hi! You probably have drank something last night!" she spines round under the shower. Worried, not exactly sure what to do! "geet! Chado! You Have done nothing!... & it's maan!"
She walks out... Wearing a towel... She have no cloths! Another baby face... "where have he brought me?" she took maans White kurta and wore it! No inures! Urg! That's probably the 2nd time... She walks out... Sat by maan. Her tummy rumbling badly..
Geet "maan!" he did not reply, instead hide his face on his pillow... "maannn! Uto na!" she spoke in her cute innocent voice, for few second she felt like a bride! "please utto na..." he nodes a no... "hamari bath toh suno!" he nodes a no again... He was rather surprised with her calm manner, no shout, no arguing! Was everything alright. He snaps up... And quickly cheks her forehead! "no! No fever!" she wonders if he still have the hangover...
Maan "are you feeling dizzy?" she nodes a no surprisingly!
Maan "are you feeling sick?"
Geet "no!"
Maan "oh phew! You are not Ill!"
Geet "why would I be ill?"
Maan "no this normal behavior! It's shocking! Because last time you ran to the hospital!"
Geet made a baby face... "shall I check up? Have we..." maan wanted to bang his head hard now! Didn't those word sound like a joke!
Maan "you will be doing the mericale!"
Geet "how?"
Maan "getting pregnant by just kissing!" geet started to get angry.
Maan "and anyway you were trying to rape me!" he stood up but geet brings him back to the bed, "see! Exactly like this you pulled my trouser off! And you can't ask what it looks like any more!" he smirks... "you have felt it yesterday!" geet frees him in shock while maan snakes his hand round her waist... "agar tum chaho, you can see it now!" geet puts her hand round his mouth... "shall I help!" she was so embarrassed! She barely could look at his face...
Geet "au private bathe hi!" she hides her self on his chest... Under the spread in embarrassment...




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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Woohoo me first::
Awesome and Hawwt update😳😳
ooof geet is such a naughty girl,,feeling maans ahem ahem☺️☺️
Maan is scared that geet will leave him and geet is scared to be in a relationship after seeing her mothers...
Haha luvd how maan told her not to get a test done😆
cont soon Xx...
Oooh wats next?
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Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago

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