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Posted: 14 years ago

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FF:MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU

PART 5

Maan looked at his back and saw sujal standing there.Sujal came to them.

Sujal:Maan main tumhi kab se dhond raha tha tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?Aur ye kon hain?

Maan was confused about what to say to his father when geet started to speak.

Geet:Main geet hoon.Per aap inke kya lagte ho?

Sujal(Smiled):Acha tu aap geet hain main maan ka father hoon.

Geet(Shocked):Aap inke father ho.Per aap tu inke bhai lagte ho.

Sujal and maan started to laugh.

Sujal:Bhai lagta hoon per sach main father hoon.Waise aap log yahan kya kar rahe hain.

Geet:Main pehle yahan aaye thi.Mujhe laga ka koi mere pecha hai tu jab main turn hoye tu main swimming pool main gir gaye phir inhone mujhe bachaya.

Sujal looked at maan who was blushing.

Sujal:Ab tu aap theek ho beta?

Geet: Jee uncle

Sujal:Chalo phir andar chalte hain.

They went inside.

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Next day,In Handa mansion,After breakfast,Adi told Bajaj and Prena that he was leaving at 1:00pm to Dubai because of some meeting.He would be back after a week.

Bajaj:Theek hai tum jao.Waise bhi next week geet ke shadi hai.

Adi(Shocked):Next week???

Bajaj:Haan next week ke date fix ho gaye hai.

Adi:Per aap ne geet se pocha ka woh abhi ready hai shadi ka liye ya nahi?

Bajaj:Main baap hoon iss ka janta hoon iss ka bura aur bhala.

Adi(Looked at Prena):Per maa aapko aik dafa iss se poch lena chahiye.

Prena:Adi geet ke engagement dev se hui hui hai woh jante hai inke shadi aik na aik din dev se hi ho ge.Tum fikar mat karo main geet se aaj baat kar loon ge.

Adi went to his room for getting ready.

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Maan came to know that adi left for Dubai and he would not be back until next week.Maan could not wait longer.He was feeling like geet was getting away from him.He told his parents to go to geet's house for proposal.He was sure that geet's family would tell about this proposal to adi and adi would know that geet was the girl he met few years ago and he would convince his family.

On next day,Sujal and kashish went to Geet's house.Maan was walking here and there in the house.He was feeling like something very bad was going to happen.He was convincing his heart that nothing would happen.He tried to tell himself that he was only nervous that's all.He was trying to smile but he didnot know that his heart was telling him the truth.He was watching the clock again and again.

Maan:One hour has passed but still mom and dad are not back.Its ok maan aise kaamo main daar tu ho jate hai.per atleast dad ko mujhe aik call tu karne chahiye thi.Kya pata mujhe surprise dena chahte hoon.

He was pacing in the drawing room.Then he saw sujal and kashish entering in the drawing room.

Maan(Excitingly):Thanxxx God u guys are back.Kya kaha inhone?? Pleaseee bataye na.

Kashish was controlling her tears while watching her son.Sujal was looking very sad.Maan's heart started to beat fastly.His heart was telling him that he was right something bad had happened.But still he was trying to be positive.He thought that his parents wanted to give him surprise.

Maan:Aap log please batayein kya hua?Mujhe pata hai aap mujhe surprise dena chahte hain per pleasee batayein.

Sujal(Controlling himself):Maan isse pehle ka hum proper proposal rakhte.Inhlogon ko shayad pata chal gaya tha ka hum geet ka liye proposal le kar aaye tha iss liye inhone humain bataya ka geet...ke shadi next week ho rahe hai iss ke bhabhi ka bhai se.

Maan took one step back.

Maan(Controlling himself):Aap log mazak kar rahe hain na??(Looked at kashish)Aap bataye na maa dad mazak kar rahe hain na??

Kashish(Controlling her tears):Nahi beta sujal theek kha rahe hain.

Maan turned and went to his room.Kashish was about to go to maan but sujal stopped her.

Sujal:Isse thori daar akele rahne do.

Kashish(Crying):Kahe woh apne aap ko kuch na kar le?

Sujal:Don't worry kuch nahi kare ga.Tum ro mat agar hum hamat tor dein ge tu maan ka kya hoga?

Sujal wiped her tears.She hugged him.

PRECAP: Adi came to know that geet is the girl maan loved

Edited by pickachu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE:

Sorry for no proper maneet scenes!
But this part is important for the story!
Pleaseee leave ur comments.
I have replied to everyone's comment.
I hope u guys like it!



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

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