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Posted: 14 years ago

FF:Madly in love with you

Part 2


Maan entered in the office along with sujal.He gave smile to his staff and stood infront of them.

Maan(Smiled):Good morning everyone! We have completed Rathods Project because of your efforts.They really liked our work.Thank you so much for your support.I hope today we will get Patels project too...I guess i have taken your too much time...Now get back to your work.

He went to his cabin.Sujal heard that the staff was appreciating maan.He felt happy.He knew that his son could win the heart of people by his sweetness.After few hours,Maan came back to his cabin after attending the meeting.He was very tried.He closed his eyes and saw her innocent eyes.He smiled.He could feel that he was not tried anymore.

Surili akhiyon wale, suna hai teri akhiyon se

Behti hai neendein aurr neendon mein sapne

Maan(Thinking):Main jahan bhi jata hoon tum meray saath hote ho.Jab se maine tumhare masoom ankhyion ko dekha hai kuch aur acha hi nahi lagta.Pata nahi tum kahan ho.I wish tum mujhe mil jao phir main tumse wada karta hoon tumhi bohat pyaar doon ga.Mom dad mere shadi karna chahte hain per main kisse aur se shadi nahi kar sakta iss liye kyuki main kisse ka saath zayate nahi kar sakta.Main ye janta hoon ka main sirf tumse pyar karta hoon aur humasha karta rahoon ga.Phir main kisse aur ladke ke zindagi tabah nahi kar sakta...Hmm I wish ka tum mere pas hote tai ke main tumhi bata sakta ka main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon.

Kabhi to kinare pe, utar mere sapno se

Aaja zameen pe aurr mil ja kahin pe

Mil ja kahin .. aa ..

Mil ja kahin, samey se pareh, samey se pareh

Mil ja kahin, tu bhi akhiyon se kabhi meri akhiyon ki sunn

Meanwhile,Geet saw those pair of eyes filled with love.It looked like they were saying something that she couldnot understand.The song was playing in the background.

Everytime I look into your eyes, I see my paradise

The stars are shining right up in the sky, painting words or designs

Can this be real, are you the one for me

Gee(Thinking)t:Maine tumhi pehle kahin dekha hai..

Geet woke up with a jerk when meera poked her shoulder.

Meera:Geet uth jao ghar aa gaya hai.Pata nahi tumhi haar waqt neend hi kyu aate rahte hai..

Geet remembered that adi promised to take them to the lunch.In that excitement,she forgot about her dream...

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Maan was doing his work when someone knocked the door.

Maan:Come in

He was surprised to see adi.He smiled and hugged him.

Adi(With fake anger):Main tujh se baat nahi karta..England se wapis aa gaya aur mujhe aik call bhi nahi ke.

Maan(Embrassed):I'm sorry yaar! Main kal raat late aaya tha aur subah meeting thi iss liye tumhi call nahi kar saka.

Adi:Acha theek hai per tum tu wahan aur din rahne wale tha tu jaldi kyu aa gaye.

Maan:Kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya tha..Iss liye jaldi aa gaya.

Adi(Teasing):Kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya tha ya kisse ke yaad aa rahe thi?

Maan(Blushed):Nahi aise koi baat nahi thi.

Adi:Waise i must say she is very lucky...Iss ladke ko shayad ye bhi pata nahi ho ga ka koi iss ka pehle nazar main itna dewana ho gaya hai.

Maan:Woh lucky hai ya nahi iss ka mujhe nahi pata magar main tab lucky hoon ga jab woh mujhe mile ge...waise woh mere saath na ho kar bhi mera saath rahte hai.

Adi(Smiled): Maan you are madly in love with her.Tum pe tu woh sher suit karta hai:

tum mere pas hote ho goya

jab koi dosra nahi hota

Acha main chalta hoon main bus tumse milne aaya tha aur haan aik baat tu bhool hi gaya ka kal tumhi mere ghar aana hai aur iss dafa main koi excuse nahi suno ga.Kitne ajeb baat hai ka tum mere university se best friend ho aur tum mere ghar aik dafa bhi nahi aaye na hi mere family se mile ho...Acha main late ho raha hoon.Bye!

Adi went away.Suddenly, maan heard a ringtone.He found adi's mobile.He attended his call.

Geet(Angrily):That's not fair,aap ne promise kiya tha ka aap aaj humain lunch per le kar jaiyein ga...Main ab aap se baat nahi karoon ge.Bye!

Maan felt like he heard that voice before.When Adi entered in his cabin.

Maan:Tumhare koi call aaye thi koi ladke thi bohat gussa ho rahe thi.

Adi(Hit his hand on his head):Oh no!!! Kiddo ho ge.Woh maine naughty group ko promise kiya tha inhe lunch per le kar jao ga...Acha ab main chalta hoon.Bye and don't forget to come to my home tomorrow.

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Pinky took tea for bajaj in his room.He was talking to prena about something.

Pinky:Papa jee aap ke chai.

Bajaj:Thank you beta.

Prena:Beta khare kyu ho bhait jao.

Pinky sat on the chair.

Bajaj(Drinking the tea):Beta dev aa gaya hai America se?

Pinky:Jee papa aaj hi aaya hai.

Her mobile started to ring.

Pinky:Papa jee mama ka phone hai main baat karke aate hoon.

When pinky went out of the room.Bajaj turned to prena.

Bajaj:Prena main soch raha tha ab geet aur dev ke shadi kar dene chahiye.

Prena(Hesitatedly):Mujhe lagta hai geet main abhi bohat bachpana hai.

Bajaj:Shadi ka baad ye bachpana chala jaye ga.Hum Haseena se baat karein ga.

Prena:Theek hai.Jaise aap ke marzi.

Precap:Maneet meeting and dev's entry!

Pleaseee read the note!


(Vm of the song.Credit goes to the vm maker)


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ritq6TRJkj4&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Note:

Thanxx for liking and commenting on previous part😃!

Basically in Part 1, I wanted to show the relationship of maan with his family and friendship of geet,meera and yash especially their childish behaviour because it was necessary for the future track in which geet's childish behaviour will cause trouble for her.

In Part 2, I wanted to show maan's feelings because then you can understand his feelings in Part 3 and i also wanted to bring the topic of geet and dev's marriage.

I know these parts were boring but they were necessary for the future track😳.Don't worry you will get maneet scenes from the next part😉.

If u have some questions related to the story you can PM me😃.

Sorry for not replying everyone individually😭!

I will try to reply from the next part.

Pleaseee leave ur comments even if u don't like the part😔.

Need help:

Please tell me some sweet song related to eyes because i want to put it in maneet meeting!.

Thanxxx for liking previous Part🤗

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Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Awww maan ha fallen in love wiv geet
Can't wait for ther first meeting...
Cont soon Xx...
Errmm song...well how about tere mast mast do nain
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...maan already seems to be in love with Geet...can't wait for them to meet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part..
Thanks for the PM..
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Hey awesome Part...cant wait for more...add me to PM list too

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How about Aankhon ki gustakiya...or whatever it is...you know the one that was picturized on Salman and Aishwarya

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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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