Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134 - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh dear
now u are making us fear
pls geet be strong
mann is there


love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
so touchy update this time...!!
but loved it...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar waiting for ur next update mahi
loved ur today's update and the precap its gonna be rocking and interesting
cant wait till tom holding my breath
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii awesome upd dear
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 14 years ago
very sady sady update...
maan ki halat dhekhi nahi ja rahi...
hey babaji geet ko thik kardo
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

poor maaneet both

cry, sad icon
in pain
i hope she get feel better soon
nobody understand what maan going
through
yu pinned down so prefect
waiting next part
ty 4 pmcry, sad icon


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

very well written...sad to see maan like this...geet should be fine for her sake and maan's sake...hope brij makes daarji and pammi pay for their mistake


Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...
bechara maan😭😭
hope evrything gets fine soon😲😲
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 43


He drove furiously. the weather was also not good. It was raining for past several hrs. It seemed as if a torondo is coming & the worst it was night. He went to a place near a lake & some mountains cud be seen there. It was far away from delhi. He himself didn't knew which place it was, but he often used to visit it whenever he was sad. And he couldn't remeber any day of his life when he was sadder than this.

Suddenly his cell rang, it was dadimaa. He didn't wanted to talk to anyone at that moment. But he thought maybe something impt. He picked it. Ji dadimaa
Maan bete kahan hai aap? plz bete jaldi se yahan aa jayiye.
Par dadaimaa baat kyaa hai
Maan aap bas yahan aa jayeyi plz
Ji dadimaa mai abhi aa raha hu

He sat in his car. while driving he thought he should have informed arohi & arjun abt this & maybe geet's family. they had the right to know it atlest. He stopped ate car. He first called Arohi.
Jiju aap.. kyaa hua
Arohi wo geet
Geet.. kyaa huya use.. jiju kyaa baat hai
Arohi geet is in hospital. Severe food poisining
What. which hospital jiju?
Apollo
Theek hai I'm reaching there
they hanged the call

Maan wondered if to call & inform her family or not. He looked at his watch. He had top reach hospital too, so he avoided to inform them. And he didn't wanted to inform such ppl who didn't even thought abt geet once. & maybe it was them only who did all this he wondered.

He reached the hospital. dadimaa & anni were sitting there tensed. He went near them. dadimaa kyaa hua?
Maan bete aapne itni der kyun kardi
dadimaa wo..
Khair chodiye beta.. geet ko hosh aaya tha she was continously taking ur name. But wo phir se unconscious ho gayi hai. Drs said it was really nice that use hosh aya but uska phir se behosh hone its not good for her.
He immidiately rushed to the dr who was standing there. Dr kyaa hua
Mr khurana apki dadimaa ne bilkul sahi kaha. I think aap geet ke paas jayiye, maybe she will be consious again Many a times only god's miracles work.

He rushed to her room. He sat beside her & held her hand. Tears flowing from his eyes. He was just lost looking at her. As if the whole world had stopped. He knew that now nothing wrong will happ. She will surely open her eyes.. for him. She loved him a lot & he loved her a lot. So god cud never ever separate them. He felt so light now. The darkness that had occupied him was slowly vanishing. He cud sense it that just few more sad moments & then he wud be there with his love, his life, his jaan. Those painful 7 bitter tears suddenly beacme tears of happiness. He was happy bcoz he had faith in his love. It was now that he got to know how strong love is. Now he klnew. nothing worong wud happ. He knew his geet will be fine.

He was snapped by a voice. Jiju how is she now?
He turned around, it was arohi. Arohi tum bahar aayo I'll tell u
They went out. Jiju ab to batayo naa how did this happ.
He told her everything how it happ when they were in hp & then he rushed her to hospital & those bitter moments that he experienced. he was abt to say abt her family but he stopped. He didn't knew whether to say it or not. What will she think he wondered. Just then brij came there. she turned around.
Arohi - Brij veerji. She hugged him. Kaise ho aap?
Brij - Mai theek hu aru tu kaisi hai
Arohi - Mai bhi theek hun veerji. Veerji aapki gudiya ko yeh kyaa ho gaya.
Brij: Aru u don't worry. She will be ok. Maan hai naa he will make her ok. u know use hosh aya tha & she was taking maan's name. Ye pyaar ki takat hi use theek karegi
Arohi: I know veerji.. how much these two love each other.
Acha chalo ab tum log jayo & have something. Brij tum daadimaa aur anni ko bhi apne sath le jayo. mai yanhi ruk raha hun.
But maan even u havn't had anything.
Brij plz, jab tak geet theek nahi ho jati I'm not going to have anything. tum log plz mujhe force mat karo.
But maan
Plz brij.
theek hai

They went from there & maan went inside her room. he sat there holding her hand. After some time he kept his head nears hers & dozzed off still holding her hand in his. He knew that warmth will surely work & his geet will come back to him.

PRECAP

Geet concious.. again unconscious


REALLY REALLY SORRY FOR A SHORT UPDATE. I WAS REALLY BUSY. HOPE U ALL WILL UNDERSTAND.


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Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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