Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134 - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome and heart breaking update
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Posted: 14 years ago
v ery nice update sad too please aab geet ko jaldi se theek kardo na feel very sad for maan
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dhani24m

feel good when geet hosh main aaye thi 😊

brij word is so true.inka pyaar hi use waps layega.😊😊😊
good going dear👏👏👏
but pls clear that ke yeh food poision mashroom ke wajah se hua he?so kya thai ji ne jaan buj kar khane main mashroom dale the jo geet ko pata nahi chala.😕
pls update soon


Yaa this food poisoning is bcoz of mushrooms. Some mushrooms are poisonous.. so bcoz of them. thaiji had put poisonous mushrooms bcoz firstly geet is allergic to them & she usually doesn't get to know abt them.. she just eat them & later comes to know..
Hope I cleared ur doubt.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 44



They went from there & maan went inside her room. he sat there holding her hand. After some time he kept his head nears hers & dozzed off still holding her hand in his. He knew that warmth will surely work & his geet will come back to him.

It was a fresh morning, a new beginning. And each day brings some happiness and some new challenges with it. He got up & saw her face. The sunlight was directly falling on her face. He tucked the hair falling on her cheeks behind her hair & softly caressed her cheeks. Geet tum dekhna mai tumhe wapas lakar hi rahunga. u can't go away from me. Aaj tak tum mujhse jeet payi ho kyaa jo ab jeet jayogi. Tumhari koshishen bekar hain.. u can't run from me. He kissed on her forehead.

Meanwhile the dr came. Mr khurana we need to do a checkup.
Sure dr. He went out. It took hardly 15 mins. dr called him to his cabin.
Mr khurana there is a lot of improvement in just one day. Hame toh geet ke coma me jane ke pure chances dikh rahe the. but now I suppose she will be fine very soon.
A smile formed on his lips. Dr when will she gain consciousness?
Mr khurana she had just opened her eyes, but she couldn't open them longer. I think just bcoz of weakness. u don't worry unhe jald hi hosh aa jana chahiye aur abhi 48 hrs pure bhi nahi hue hain. So need to worry. I'm sure wo aaj raat tak hosh me aa jayengi
Thanku so much dr.
Mr maan thanks to aap bhagvan ko kahiye. Its just a sheer miracle. I'm sure u love her so much. Isn't it?
He passed him a smile & went outside.

He rushed to the temple there. Thanku babaji aapko akhir meri geet ko mujhe dena hi pada. thanku so so much. Dadimaa came & patted his back from behind. Maan bete yeh to bas apke pyaar ki takat hai. Bhala babaji do pyaar karne walon ko kaise juda kar sakte the.
He smiled. Chaliye bete ab ham yahan rukte hain aap ghar jayiye aur fresh ho jayiye
Dadimaa I'm not going anywhere. geet ko aise chodke how can I
Maan ham hain naa. Don't u have faith on me.
Dadimaa yeh aap kaisi baat kar rahi hain
U trust me naa to jayiye
Fine but mai bas half an hour me aa jayunga
Bilkul nahi. u rest for some time & then come
But dadimaa
No arguement maan
He had to give up. Theek hai

He freshened up & sat on his bed. Ab thodi der baad hi jana padega warna dadimaa naaraz ho jayengi. Just in a few mins his mind was occupied by strange thoughts. How did this happ at the first place. Kisne kiya hoga yeh. Her family, yaa they can do, but... nahi nahi how can they do such a thing. Mana ki they do not like her now but this.. nahi I don't think ki unhone kiya hoga. But it was food poisoning to kisi ne to kiya hoga na & in her home who cud have done it except her family. He couldn't control any longer. He didn't wanted to think abt all this. He just rushed to the hospital. By the time he reached there, it was one.

He rushed near her room & found dadimaa sitting outside reading some magazine.
Dadimaa geet is ok naa
Maan bete aap itni jaldi aa gaye
dadimaa mujhse aur nahi ruka jaa raha tha so I came. Wo theek hai naa
Haan beta wo theek hai. Dr ne bataya mujhe ki unhe raat tak hosh aa jana chahiye
I'm sure dadimaa use raat tak zarur hosh aa jayega
She patted his shoulders. Yeh huyi naa baat. Bas isi tarah apni himmat barkarar rakhiye beta. Sab theek ho jayega.
Hmm.. I hope so
Aapne kuch khaya?
Wo.. nahi
Bete aap ko geet ki itni fikr hai to apni bhi to fikr kariye naa.. plz have something beta
dadimaa bas use hosh aa jaye, then I will eat. abhi mera bilkul mann nahi hai
Aapse kaun jeet sakta hai bete. Theek hai as u wish
Dadimaa mai geet ke paas jaa raha hun
Hmm

He went inside & sat beside her. He kept staring her. his mind lingered on all that that had happ in his life. First that kasak which haunted him day & night. then his realization of love. How he had changed from dusht danav to pyaare wala dusht danav. he laughed at his own plight. And then how he made her realize that she loved him. Their cute & romantic moments. How she trusted him with her life. she told her everything, the bitter truth of her life. their first kiss.. he wanted to do that agian he wondered & let out a giggle. But then how everything suddenly changed. His geet was being taken away from him. His life was being snatched from him. But now he had hope. He knew nothing wrong cud happ to his geet, his life, his jaan. He will make her come back to him.

He carresed her cheeks & softly kissed them. She shivered in his touch. She was showing some response. Oh god, he was so happy. he called the dr. He checked her. She was recovering. Her lips responded to his touch. Maan she said in a whisper tone. Her breath were no longer breaths. They were his name. She was taking his name continuously. He held her hand. Geet mai yahin hun tumhare paas. Plz aankhen kholo geet.. plz

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Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... finally geet has got her conscious... atleast let us rejoice their reunion in this as i dont see it happening in the serial in the near future...

i just hope there is awesome moments waiting for us in the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏awesome part👏
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
WHATTT BLACKMAILINGGG!!!!!...😉😃😆 thik hai , chalo lambaaa comment hi denge...updates bahut achha tha, i hope Geet bahut jald puree tarha thik ho jaayegii...Maan hai naa, dont worry...waise uushke baad ek romantic sa date chahiye with romantic sa gana-sana...bahut huya rona -dhona...aur hain jaldi se Maan ko bolo pata lagane ko key aakhir kisne kiya yeh ghinona kaam, i m sure its DAARjii,, still mann nahi maanta..key koi apni hi beti ko...anyways...BABAji sab bhali karenge...waiting for ur updates dear, u hav done an awesome job so far, & hope u wil continue to do that ...lov ur FF...it rocksss 🥳🤗
Edited by 810Kankana - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ur update is just ... n also ...
u done a ..👏👏👏..really ...
...4 u again i said ...
updates r ...
4 ur hard work...👍🏼...
4 pm me...plz keep pm me...
once again ...
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 810Kankana

WHATTT BLACKMAILINGGG!!!!!...😉😃😆 thik hai , chalo lambaaa comment hi denge...updates bahut achha tha, i hope Geet bahut jald puree tarha thik ho jaayegii...Maan hai naa, dont worry...waise uushke baad ek romantic sa date chahiye with romantic sa gana-sana...bahut huya rona -dhona...aur hain jaldi se Maan ko bolo pata lagane ko key aakhir kisne kiya yeh ghinona kaam, i m sure its DAARjii,, still mann nahi maanta..key koi apni hi beti ko...anyways...BABAji sab bhali karenge...waiting for ur updates dear, u hav done an awesome job so far, & hope u wil continue to do that ...lov ur FF...it rocksss 🥳🤗


Thanku so so much dear 😊
Aise hi lambe lambe comments dete raho..
mai bhi lambe lambe updates dungi 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunjar

ur update is just ... n also ...
u done a ..👏👏👏..really ...
...4 u again i said ...
updates r ...
4 ur hard work...👍🏼...
4 pm me...plz keep pm me...
once again ...
continue soon...:)


Such a sweet comment..
thanks a lot..
It really motivates me 😊

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