Ek dhuje ke saath (ArSh, Maaneet, Preer) Part 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
awesomeee part i think the person 1,2,3 is heer,geet and shilpa
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

i think i know the winners ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum update!!!
really luved it.😊luv the family bond.
and shahid-amrita little romance is so cute.😳
i luv amrita when she consider shilpa-maan and prem as their child.
who r the 1,2 and 3 persons?
but i m little sad,i thought in this part all the jodis r going to meet.but they r not.
can't wait fr their first meeting.
plz!plz!plz!update soon.and u did't send me pm.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AMAZING ….. 👏LOVED THE UPDATE …...😳

PLZZZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST …..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Salims VS Salmas (name inspired by the song 'mere salim, meri salma' by aasma)

Armaan looks at the first person in a blue and black bike suit. He stares (more like glares) at the person with his bitter but awesome and intense eyes. He thinks that the blue colour suits her. That she looks beautiful even though he cant see her face. Then he shrugs away the thoughts and thinks "yeh mujhe ho kya gaya hai. Pagal ho gaya hoon mai, pagal. Mein to isse nafarat karta hoon. Aaj yeh ladki gaye." Prem looks at the 2nd person in a hot pink and black bike track suit. Prem thinks "abbe yeh to ladki hai. Koi ladka toh hot pink nahi panega. Yeh ladki hai ya ek gay insaan hai but i am leaning more towards ladki. Chiii yeh to girly girl hai!! YUCK!!!" Maan looks at the last but not the least person. She is wearing a red and a black suit. Maan's face is red with anger and he thinks "Iss ladki ki aise himmat ke maan singh khurana ko haraya. Isko to mein nahi chodoga. Mein isko aise saaza dunga ke yeh zindagi baar yaad rakegi" with that all three boys move forward to meet them more like insult them seeing this even the person 1,2 and 3 started moving forward as soon as they came face to face, the persons removed their helmets. The expression on the boys face changed from anger to lost to surprise. It was none other than Shilpa, Heer and Geet.

Maan and Prem ran towards shilpa and gave her a hugeee bearrr huggg. They sandwiched her between them.
Maan/Prem: Shona, Tum yaha kya karahi ho? Tum kab ayi? Tum ab yahi rerahi ho? What are you doing here? (prem and maan shouted)
Shilpa laughs: HAHAHA hello to you too bhai!!!! Main ab yaha hamesha rehane ayi hoon. You guys like the surprise??
Prem: *sigh* Maan ab humein ek gun aur sleeping pills laani hogi
Maan: So true bhai!
Shilpa: What are you guys talking about??
Maan: We need a gun to shoot all the boys that flirt with you '
Shilpa:(with a shocked face) what are yo...
Maan and Prem lifted their hand up as if to say we are not finished
Maan: To continue from what bhai was saying, we need sleeping pills to sleep (Maan said this with a serious face)
Shilpa: what??? are you guys okay? Why didn't you tell me? Is anything wrong? (shilpa says all this in one breath and in a concerned voice)
Prem: No no no Shona, we need the sleeping pills so we can fall asleep.
Maan: Because we can't fall asleep with your chatter so we decided to buy sleeping pills.
Prem: By god kabhi to lagta hai ke tum hamari behen nahi ho par basanti ki behen ho.
Shilpa pouted and said: You guys are mean!!! Mujhe toh laga ke mujhe kisika murder karna hai!!
Maan and Prem looked at their sister. Her protective nature reminded them of the time when they were kids. How she saved them from the bullies.
********************* Start FlashBack ******************
Shilpa walked to the soccer field to see her brother's game. On the way there she saw Maan and Prem on the ground with two tall boys hovering over them. She ran towards her brothers and heard the first boy say...
Boy1: mujhe pata chal gaya ke iske maa-baap kyu mar gaye?
Prem: Listen...
Boy 2 pushed prem
Boy2: Oye chup! Kyu bhai?
Boy1: kyunki iske parents inn dono ko nafrat karte the and wanted to get rid of you
Shilpa: Oye kuthe Kamine! Mere bhai ko pareshan maat karo.
Maan: Shona go now
Shilpa: No, koi bhi mele bhai ko pareshan nahi kalta. Silf main unko paleshan karshakti hoon aur koi nahi. Ab main tumhe nahi chodoungi sale
Prem (in a stern voice): Language shilpa
Boy1: Awww ab yeh wittle baby tum dono boys ko bachayagi. You two...
Shilpa: Shut up
Shilpa, then, started spitting on the boys' face and there was no stopping her. She was going to spit more when Maan and Prem stopped her.
Maan: Shilpa stop!
Prem: Shona its okay. No need to spit on the poor guy's face.
Shilpa: Mujhe chodo! Bhai they hurt you and no one hurts my brothers and lives.
Maan: Okay shona
Prem: One last attempt to hurt them then we go home. Deal?
Shilpa nodded at looked at the boys who were busy cleaning the spit from their faces. Shilpa smiled smugly and kicked both of the boys in their private spots.
Shilpa: Now you won't hurt anyone.
Shilpa, then, skipped away to her house with four boys staring at her with astonishment.
Maan: Thats our sister shilpa and
Prem: Dont mess with her or us
Prem & Maan: Byebye
Maan and Prem waved them goodbye and ran after their sister.
********************* End FlashBack *******************
She, then, smacked her brothers hard on their head. Maan and Prem whined but then they shared an evil look. They pounced on her and tickled her like there was no tomorrow. Shilpa laughed and screamed at her brothers to stop. The brothers stop but they wrap their arms around her. Maan and Prem put their heads on her shoulders and whisper...
Maan: We missed you shona
Shilpa: I missed you too bhai
Prem: You are never ever leaving us GOT IT?
Shilpa: I wouldn't dare leave you guys. I love you!! Now enough of the mushy stuff. Baap re is desh ka kya hoga agar kisine Maan Singh Khurana aur Prem Singh Khurana ko rote huve dekha hai!!!
Shilpa bursts out laughing at Maan and Prem's face and she kisses their noses.
Maan: I am so proud of you for beating us in racing.
Prem: Ha shona and now I want you to meet our best friend
Shilpa: Alright lets go meet him and you guys can meet my best friends.
All three stood up and walked towards the mallik hug sandwich.

Meanwhile the malik's reunion.
Armaan: PANDU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PARIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Geet and Heer: Teddyyy
they run to each other and hug with such a force that all of them fell down and then they broke in to hysterical laughs
Armaan: such a long time!!!! actually i was going to rip guys heads but in the nik of time you both took your helmets off.Nautanki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Armaan: by the way i thought you guys were going to come later
Heer: we just decided to give you a surprise
Geet: aur bhai mein aap ke liye kuch layi hoon
Heer: mein bhi bhai
Armaan: kya
then both geet and heer give each other a knowing and each take out a cadbury chocolate
Armaan sees this and becomes emotional and remembers their childhood
******************** child hood*************************
Armaan was dead worried because his little sweethearts didn't return from school yet,. he was on verge of crying but suddenly he heard their sweet voices
Geet: BHAAAIII
Heer: tedddyyy
Geet and heer with a cute face: bhai app lo lahe ho kya
armaan: main kitna dal gaya tha tum dono kyun itna late kiya
geet: woh kya hain na bhai hum appke liye kuch lekar aaye the
heer: ha bhai
then they take out a chocolate and give it to him
Armaan with his cute smile: yeh mele liye hai
heer and geet nod their head.
Armaan; pal aaj special kya hai
Geet: kuch nahi bus app humale beshtest bhai of the world
Heer: aur hum aapko bohattt pyaaal kalthe hai
Armaan: aap dono world ki besht sisters hai
*******************end of childhood memory*******************
Armaan snaps back in to the presents and he was trying hard to control his tears
Heer: teddy aap ro rahe ho
Armaan: nahi bas bachpan yaad agaya aur ab bhi aap dono mere liye chocolates lekar aayi
Geet: kyunki bhai aap ab bhi duniya ki sab se bestest bhai he
Heer: aur aap ab bhi aapse bohaaat pyaar karte hai
Armaan: aur aap dono bhi best sisters hai and started crying
geet and heer: awww teddy !!!! and they tightly hug him
Armaan: i missed you guys and i love you guys
Heer: we missed you tooo
geet: ab yeh rona dhona band aur let's go home
Armaan: kujhe kaam hai meh baad main aaja vunga
Heer: no bhai take holidays because this week we are going to spend the entire week with you
Armaan: theek hai jaisi app logon ki marzi
Geet: waise bhai hamara gift kaha hain
Armaan: aap dono idar aayiye and saying that he gives a big kiss on their cheeks.
Armaan: mein apna friends ko aap dono se milwate hain.
*********** maliks and khuranas meet*******************************
Armaan: geet, Heer these are my friends Maan and Prem
Prem is shell shocked, he can't believe that he is meeting his dream girl
Shilpa and Maan are trying hard to supress thier giggle
Geet and Armaan are confused then geet asks shilpa
Shilpa: promise me that u will not be angry
Geet: okay!! now tell me
Shilpa: Prem bhai 5 years se Heer ko pyaar kar rahe hai
Geet: SACH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shilpa: ha sach!!!!!
Geet explains everything to Armaan, first Armaan becomes angry then he knows that prem is the right guy for heer
Now every body is trying hard to supress their giggles
Prem: Hi i am Prem Singh Khurana
Heer: hi bhaiya!!! i am Heer Malik
Prem widens his eyes on the word bhaiya: kya?bhaiya!!!!
Everybody is giggling softly
Prem: main aap se sirf 2 saal bada hoon!! tho bhai boolane ke liye zaroorat nahi hai
Heer: okay then nice to meet you Prem ji
Prem: same here
Prem shakes hands with heer they both get elctricuted but they shrug it off
Prem: Heer ji ye mera bhai Maan.Maan ye Heer hai.
Maan: hi
Heer: hi
Prem turns towards geet: aur aap Geet hai na, shilpa aap ke baare mein bohaut kuch bataaya
hai.nice to meet you geet ji
Geet: aree mujhe ji bulane ke liye zaroorat nahi hai jiyaj i mean prem ji. anyways nice to
meet you. she turns towards Maan, aur aap ...
Maan says wiith pride: hi I am Maan, Maan Singh Khurana
Geet(to herself):kitna khadoos hai saala!!! iska naam Maan nahi Kadoos Singh khurana rakhna chahiye aur mujhe kya hogaya anyways hum bhi to kam nahi hai.chal geet dekhavo isko geet malik kaun hai.
Geet with same attitude as maan: hi, i am geet!! Geet Malik
Prem whispers to shilpa: ye dono perfect for each other
Shilpa:I know
Geet and Maan shake hands they both are suddenly filled with an warm feeling.
Geet(she thinks): mujhe ho kya gaya lagta hai i am hypoglycimic. jaldi chal kar khana kaa lete hain
Maan(he thinks): baap re baap kya ladki.aaj tak Maan Singh Khurana kabhi kisi ne itna akad nahi dikhaya. she is different. interesting. by the way why am i thinking about this. Man, i need some rest.
Geet: shilpa!!! ye Armaan bhai hai. Bhai ye Shilpa hai
Armaan: hi shilpa,nice to meet you
Shilpa: hi Armaan,nice to meet you to
Armaan liked his name from her mouth. it sounded sooo soothing.
but suddenly some body bumps hard in to Shilpa and Shilpa lost balance and shut her eyes tight due fearof falling but a strong pair of hands catch her,Shilpa opens her eyes and is suprised to see Armaan and they both are lostin each others eyes. Then Armaan notices how pretty and cute Shilpa is he wanted to kiss her nose he leans forward but he realizes what he is doing and he breaks the eye lock and shilpa breaks from her trance they both come in to a standing
posture.
Shilpa: ahhh!! thanks!!!
Armaan: no problem!!!
Maan and Prem run to Shilpa and starts asking her
Geet and Heer gave each other a familiar look
Heer: Di!!! are you thinking what i am thinking
Geet: ya!! i have never seen bhai talk to some other girl this soft!!!
Heer: hmmm!! kuch to chakar hai!! patha lagna padega
Geet: anyways it's getting late!! let's go home
Geet: guys let's go home
Armaan: ya let's go
with that they all go their house with the determination in thier hearts
The End

Precap: Geet: don't come near me Maan!! you don't know what i am going to do
Maan: Try me Malik!!!

Shilpa: Dr.Armaan me aap se behetar basketball khel sakti hoon
Armaan: oh really!! let's see then Khurana

Prem: aap ko koi aitraaz to nahi hai na.
Heer: nahi mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai!!!

- luv Dhanno and Mishti.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyyy

awesome part

loved the meeting

the childhoop flashbacks were so cute

LOL shilpa spited on the bully

awww armaan and his sisters are so cute

hahaha sleeping pills

loved the bond between them

cont sooon

plx pm me and thanks for the pm

plzzz conttt sooon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
loved their bonding
thnx for the pm
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved their first meeting. continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update!!!

arsh is feeling something for each other after the eye lock.
interesting precap.
please update soon.

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