Ek dhuje ke saath (ArSh, Maaneet, Preer) Part 10 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8 (The scar)

*****************In Geet's bedroom****************

Geet is lost in her thoughts while unpacking her clothes but suddenly her phone rings. She
snaps out of her thoughts and attends the call. The call is in speaker mode
Geet: hello
Voice:is it Ms.Geet
Geet: hmmm, tell me
Voice: '...
Geet smile spread into an evil smile
Geet: good, bye
Voice: bye maam and remember you have an appointement.
geet: ok, good night with that she cuts the call.
She stares at her phone intently. She goes back in to her flashback in Europe. Tears start to
form in her eyes.

flashback

voice: beta vaada karo ki use kadi se kadi saza milegi.
Geet: main vaada karti hoon.Mein iss hadsa keliye zaroor unse badla loongi. Get ready for
revenge.
voice: par beta apna kayal rakhna kyunki abb tumhi meri sab kuch ho.
geet: jee

end flashback

GEET! some body calls her from behind that causes her snap out of her thoughts and makes
her freeze on her spot
geet(st): Oh my god! what should i do now.I hope he didn't hear the phone call. babaji raksha
karo.Geet turns around thinking its armaan.
geet: Haan bhai! but turns out to be it's her dad. she breaths a sigh of releif
Shahid: geet where were you lost. I have been voicing out your name for past 15mins and tere
chehre par yeh baara kyun baji hain.
geet: nothing dad, i thought it was bhai.
shahid looks at for some time and says: geet tell me truth, what made you come here suddenly.
Geet stammers but manages to say: dad i told you na, I missed you guys and so i came here.
shahid: you came here for him.
geet gave up, as she knows that she is been caught.
Geet: yes, you heard the convo right
shahid: ha and then he goes towards Geet and says: for how much long r u going to hide this
truth form everybody. How much longer are you going to tolerate this pain alone
Geet: i don't know and who said I am in this alone you , heer is with me na.
Shahid: I know beta and I also know, how important this call is for you, par beta i am scared that
you will hurt yourself and others. Think about your decision once beta
Geet:there is no going back dad. once the decision is taken then it's final
Shahid: as you wish and be careful to look around while you attend these calls. thank the god
that it's just me
Geet: ya
shahid turns to leaves and while he is walking towards the door geet calls him
Geet: dad!
shahid turns around and says: ha beta
geet goes to her dad and hugs tight saying: thankyou
shahid: for what beta
geet: for your support
shahid: i am always with you and be careful
geet: i will. I love you dad
Shahid: love you too buttercup, now go to sleep
Geet: ok dad and you also go to your room or else your sweetheart will get mad at you
shahid: chup! nautanki! bye with that they depart.

************* In shilpa's bedroom*************

Shilpa, Maan, Prem and Dadimaa are talking in Shilpa's room and shilpa is lying on dadi's lap.
Maan: So, how's your internship in Canada?
Shilpa: it was good bhai, infact I liked it. If I don't like the practice in India then I will go back to
Canada.
Prem: So, you will leave us again
Shilpa: when did I say that bhai. I said if and I am sure I will like it here because you guys here
for me.
Maan: Okay
dadi: beta, now you are 24 years old. You should think of marriage before its too late
Shilpa: dadi, I will.
Maan: By the way shona are you joining as a senior doctor,
Shilpa: no, just normal doctor we need to be at least 30 be a senior doctor.
Maan: yes you are right.
Prem: Is Heer and Geet also joining you
Shilpa: Heer is joining me. Geet is going to join you guys because you guys are the 2year batch.
Maan: what's Geet's profession?
Shilpa, Dadimaa and Prem are amused. Maan never asked about any body's profession
especially girls and now he is asking geet's profession.
Shilpa: she is a psychologist
Maan raises his eyebrow: a psychologist! good I don't need to see her face everytime as my
blood boils as I see her. She defeated Maan Singh Khurana and she dared to show attitude to
me. I am going to give her hard time. Just wait and watch Geet.
the trio just sighed in defeat.
Shilpa, suddenly, grinned evily.
Shilpa: So PREMJI, how is HEERJI?
Daadima, Maan and Shilpa burst out laughing while Prem blushed deep cheery red.
Maan: ya Prem BHAIYA
Prem: Shut up guys!! I seriously had a heart attack when she called me bhaiya!!
Before Shilpa could answer her phone beeps. She checks the number and suddenly gets
tensed. Dadi, Prem and Maan noticed this.
Shilpa: Umm excuse me
shilpa goes and checks the message slowly her frown turns into a huge smile.
shilpa: YES! milgayi!
The trio walk to her hearing her exclaim.
Maan: what happened?
Shilpa: na na nothing! heeeheee!
Maan: you are weird!
dadimaa understood and came inthe scene to help shilpa.
dadimaa: anyways goodnight bachas.
Maan/shilpa/prem: good night and shilpa mouthed a thankyou with out her bro's noticing.
dadi just smiled.with that they exit!
shilpa: get ready for revenge.
shilpa/ geet in thier rooms: they scarred us and I will scar them.

the end :)

precap:

Geet: don't come near me Maan!! you don't know what i am going to do
Maan: Try me Malik!!!

Shilpa: Dr.Armaan me aap se behetar basketball khel sakti hoon
Armaan: oh really!! let's see then Khurana
Shilpa: But we need a bet!! Whats Say????

Prem: aap ko koi aitraaz to nahi hai na.
Heer: nahi mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai!!!

Luv Dhanno and Mishti
Edited by ArSh_Maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

unreserved

great part.
luved it.😊
what is geet hiding from every one and shahid also knew it.😕
shilpa,maan teasing prem is so sweet.😊
and what is shilpa up to?
precap::::
what is maan going to do with geet?😲
arsh fighting.😃
aur yeh heer ko prem ki kis baat par aitaraaz nahin hai?😲😉😳
update soon plzzz.😊
Edited by deshdeewani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

what are these two girls upto ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, plsss do PM the updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
wowww loved it
awesome ff
plz update soon n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys,
sooo sorry we have not updated in a while. But, the good news is our holidays started so, we will updates the parts more frequently. Thank you for being a great support and we will PM this time.
-Mishti and dhanno
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Posted: 13 years ago
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will be wait fr ur updates.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Part 9
Khurana's Vs Mallik's
At the break fast table
Shilpa: Good Morning every body!
Shilpa goes and hugs geet: good morning di
Geet: good morning sweety
Maan is jealous of Geet as he used to get the hug from Shilpa first
Maan: wow! Shilpa ko mujse kisi aur zyaada important bangaya
Shilpa goes and hugs Maan tighly and gives him a kiss on the cheek: I luv you bunny.
Geet giggles: Maan Singh khurana aur bunny!
Maan: tumse to zyaada behthar hai PANDA!!!
Geet: abey!khotey! Panda nahi Pandu hai!
Maan: ha! ha! i never noticed . you are fat as panda!
Geet: very funny! phustande!
Maan: Oye! kya kaha? are you trying to mess with me
Geet: Haan! Koyi shak
they started fighting
Shahid: Stop it! yeh dining table hai khusti ka maidhaan nahi
Geet and Maan: sorry Dad!
Maan: tumhe to main baad mein dekhlunga
Geet: dekhlenge!
Geet pokes Maan
Maan: what now!
Geet: dekho majnu aaraha hai apne laila ke paas bhetne ke liye.
(Prem has to sit beside Heer as that's the only spot left)
Maan glares at geet for calling prem majnu but smiles when he turns towards Prem
Geet (ST): iska page tho deela hi rahega( courtesy: Ek hazaaron me meri behna hai)
Prem enter the dining room. Prem sits beside heer on the dining table.
Shyly, Prem: Good morning everyone!! Good morning heerji!!
Prem has a light blush on his face, just like heer.
Heer: Good morning premji!!
Prem: Aapki neend kaise thi??
Heer: bauth achi aur aapki??
Heer and Prem, both, were blushing.Main to appke baaree mein sooch raha tha. Puri raat nahi soho paya. Aur jab soya, tab appke sapne dekhe. Prem thought. Maan and Shilpa exchanged glances and stifled their giggles that were threatening to erupt because they knew he was lying and why he was lying
Prem: uhhh acchi (Prem did not look at Heer afraid she would figure out that he was lying)
Everyone else on this table, Geet, Maan, Armaan and Shilpa, just tried to stifle their laughs.
Heer just nodded
Armaan: Oye Hoye!! Tum log humse kuch share karna chate ho??
Prem and Heer blushed but looked confusedly at everyone else.
Shilpa: Haan Bhai (and bhabhi - shilpa said under her breath ) Agar aapko kuch kehna ho toh bejijak kahiye
Shilpa grinned at him with all her teeeth showing. Armaan leaded towards her and whispered...
Armaan: Mere behan is so unlucky
Shilpa raises her eyebrows and glared at him
Shilpa: Kyu??
Armaan: Kyuki usko tum jaise nanad (sister-in-law) mili!!
Shilpa: WHAT? Kya kaha tumne?
Armaan: Are you deaf? Maine kaha...
Shilpa: Mujhe pata hai tumne kya kaha!! Salle Tumari himmat kaise hui? Tumari behan is MOST LUCKIEST girl kyuki usse prem bhai jaise guy...
Armaan: Oye pardesi girl, apni hindi sudharo. 'jaise guy' nahi kethe. Its 'prem bhai jaisa ladka'
Shilpa: Aur tum apna chera, manners, aadatein...
Armaan: Tumari list puri hui to breakfast kare (Armaan said with a fake smile)
Shilpa: Shuru karo, tumara hi ghar hai (Shilpa said with a sarcastic grin when armaan glared back at her)
*********************** after couple of hours*********************************
Geet: Dad and mom we are going to sanjeevani!
Amrita: already! you just came sweetheart
Geet:Mom!! we didn't come now we came 168 hours 56 min 35 sec and 358 milli seconds ago
Everybody looked with their mouths open
Geet: what?
Amrita: Why did you become like this? where's my old geet, who used to run away from work?
Geet: Mom i am fine! I got over that a long time ago. Mom we did enjoy with bhai, now its high time we go to work.
Amrita sighed in defeat: as you wish.
Geet: heer shilpa let's go. Trio goes and gives kiss to their mom and dad
- The end
Mishti and Dhanno
Very sorry for the late update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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YAY FIRST TO COMMENT
All the couples are so cute
Prem/Heer just melt my heart
Armaan/Shilpa AND Maan/Geet make me roll on floor laughing
please continue soon from now on
thanks for the pm
Edited by riddhimarmaan - 13 years ago

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