Ek dhuje ke saath (ArSh, Maaneet, Preer) Part 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
thank god!!!u r going to update this week.seriouslly i m becoming deewani of this ff.😳
i can't belive all my fav jodis is in this.😎
and their nicknames.kaash show mein bhi yehi hoote.😍
plz update asap.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dashing Hitlers

Mean while at an Basket ball court
At 9:00 PM, we can see a shadow of a man in the basketball court. He is dribbling the ball aggressively. Like he is trying to take his anger out on the ball. We get a flash of the man's eyes. His bluish eyes are full of hurt, betrayal and anger. We can finally see the man's face. His cold eyes. A straight nose. Full pink lips that is adored with a scowl. A dimple that is always hidden. We see Armaan's face. He is playing Basket ball. He thought about his life whose actual name is betrayal. He fell on his knees crying. Riddhima ka betrayal ke baad mere life sirf ek excuse bangayi. Mein ab woh kush insaan nahi raha. Mein ab ek bauth different insaan hu. Mein happy se sad hogaya. Shaant insaan se gussa wala insaan. Sab tumari wajase Riddhima. Tumne meri zindagi barbad kardi. Tumari wajase ab mein kishika wishwass nahi karsakata. You broke my ability to trust people. Mein ab sirf teen cheez ke bareme care karta hoon; Meri family, mera kaam aur mere friends. Go to hell riddhima.
*********** mean while in Sanjeevani Hospital at deep mid night ***********
A man with a :height of 6 foot,Dark deep chocolate coloured eyes filled with coldness, a well shaved yet stylish beard with a stubble, a dimple, sharp nose, gelled hair,builted body, head held high in air and dressed in his designer clothes with an apron, walked in his cabin, sat in his chair and reflected back on life.
His self tought: Main Maan Singh Khurana kya se kya bangaya pehle mere duniye mein sirf khushiyon ka ganga behrahi thi, tab mein life ko aise jeeta tha ki like there is no tommorow, enjoying, partying, flirting and studying sometimes being an happy go lucky guy par jab se Sameera aayi hai meri zindagi mein tab se main sirf dhukh ko dekha tha apna postive attitude kho diya, khud see zyada pyaar karne waala maa baap ko kodhiya. Tab mein kuch nahi tha sirf Maan singh khurana hoon, Vikrant aur Priya Singh Khurana ka beta aur Savitri Singh khurana ka pota, tab mein kamzoor tha ab nahi.Ab mein Dr.Maan Singh Khurana hoon: the young medical icon of India ( we don't even know this exists, just making this title up) and one of the most richest people in th world.Now, my life only revolves around work, family and friends. Ab mein kisi bhi aurat ko meri life mein aane nahi doonga.The sound of the pager makes him come out of his thoughts and he continues with his work.

Mean while @KM early in morning
A young man is jogging swiflty in park, His hair is ruffling back and forth due to the vigorous yet garce full steps, his deep brown chocolate colored eyes were filled with peace and tiredness. He biceps are flexing due to the movement. He was doing his normal exercise routine and taking in the peacefullness of an early morning where nature sings it's song out loud. He is doing his excercise but stops suddenly. A petite figure of girl is seen walking through the fog, the wind was blowing her hair, a beautiful smile was playing on her luscious lips and she was towards him and he still lost in her beauty and taking in the breath taking sight towards him. suddenly his dazed yet confused expression change in to calm, and he breaks into a big smile.. She comes close to him closing the distance between them , touches his cheeks and whispers "prem". suddenly his phone rings.and his dream ends.
he is still in his dazed state and whispers "heer" in the phone.
Caller: bhai!! heer nahi Maan.Aap phir se uske bare mein sapne dekh rahe the.
Prem: abey!! Maan saale main tumhe zinda katdoonga phirse mere dream ko tum choput kardiya na.
Maan: Ladoo!! stop dreaming and look at time it's 6:30am
Prem: by the way why are you calling me, room mein aa nahi sakta hain kya aur don't tell me again that you spent your night in the office.
Maan: bhai!! darasal kuch kaam that isiliye mujhe waha rukhna pada.
Prem: bahad mein jaaye tere kaam. Take care of yourself Maan!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maan: bhai i will, but please get ready we have play squash with Armaan remember.
Prem: ya ya i remember and i am on my way.
Maan: okay!! mujhe abhi Armaan ko bhi call karna hai. bye
Prem : chalo Bye!!!!
With that Prem went to the washroom to get ready and before going out of his room he took a picture from his wallet out and said: I love you Heer!!!!!! with this he went to the stadium.
Meanwhile @ MM(Malik Mansion)
Armaan phone rings and he picks it up.
Armaan: hello
Caller: guess kaun
Armaan: abey aur kaun hosakta hai Mr.Punctual
Maan: oy!! tu bhi koi kam nahi
Armaan: ok fights aside ab bata kyun call kiya, sab kuch tik hai na.
Maan: sab kuch tikh hai. Tu bhi bhool gaya, time horaha hai yaar squash game keliye.
Armaan: oh!! time ka pata nahi chala.
Maan: waise aise kya kaam karahe ho jo tumhe time ke bhi andaaz nahi hai.
Armaan: bus charts complete karaha tha.( In the medical profession i North America there is a system called charts where we fill the patients info and how much prescription of medicines we gave them).
Maan: oh!! okay!!! ab jald se pahuncha!! bye
Armaan: okay bye!!
With this they all went to play squash.But they are not aware what's awaiting in store for them in future.
The End
-Luv Dhanno and Mishti. ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update!

thnx for the pm

cont soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Really nice..
Thanks for the pM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi, i just read your FF and its awesoome so far cant wait for the next update, continue soon, and can you plz add me to your PM list 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey

Thank You everyone for liking the part!! We will try to update sooner!!

Luv Ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap. ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
update was fantastic.
really luved it.😊
i really like the entry of dashing hitlers.😃
luved the heart broken armaan and maan😭and
a dreamy prem. 😍but maan put break in his dream.awww,that was so sad.
now waiting eagerly fr the first meeting of three jodis.
plz!plz!plz!update soon and
thanks fr the pm.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

Family Union!!!!!!!!!!!

A middle aged yet very cute and handsome man(Shahid) was sitting in his lavish sofa along with his darling and dashing wife (Amrita) and his sweet mama (Savitri devi. She is Maan, prem and Shilpa's daadimaa but shahid always to her as his mother because savitri devi son and Shahid are more like brothers than friends.) and conversing with them.
Savitri: Shahid beta, ghar kitna suna suna lag raha hai bachon ke bina
Shahid: theek kaha ma. agar heer aur geet Armaan ke saath hoti na hai yeh ghar ghar nahi court lagta hai!! har waqt jagda. Teeno ki teeno itne shararat hai aap pucho hi mat.
Savitri: Maan, Shilpa aur Prem kuch kam nahi har waqt jagda
Amrita: Ma vo bache haina par ma kitni bhi jagde kyun na ho, jab ek dusere ki zaroorat ho tab ek dusre par jaan chidak tha hai. Ab Armaan ko hi dekh lijiye agar wo ab hamare saath has kar baath karaha he to vo sirf unke sibilings aur dost ke wajhe se and same with Geet and Maan.
Savitri: Geet se yaad aaya. ab vo bachi kaisi hai aur Heer kaisa hai
Shahid: Vo bilkul theek hai aur Heer bhi theek hai
Amrita: kya theek hai maa theeno ki theeno ladkiyan patli hogaye hai. kya zaroorat hai videsh main rehna aur waha peeka food khane khi.
Trio together: isiliye tho hum aagaye hain Maa.
Shahid, Amrita and Savitri turn towards the source.
Shahid, Amrita and Savitri: arey Shilpa, Geet aur Heer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aap theeno kab aaye!!!!
Geet: abhii abhi Maa.
they all go and hug
Heer: i missed you dad and Mom
Shahid and Amrita: us to beta
Trio:toh kaisi lagi surprise!!!!
Savitri: FANTASTIC!!!
Heer and Geet turn towards her
Heer: aap tho Shilpa ki daadi haina. Kya hum bhi aap ko daadima bhol sakte hai
Savitri: kyun nahi beta ofcourse.
Geet and Heer go take her blessings
Savitri: jeeti raho!!!
Geet: daadi ma waise ek baath tho theek kahi hai shilpa ki aap world sab se sweet aur gorgeous daadi ho.
Savitri: Thank you beta.
Heer: hamare hero kaha hai
Savitri: ab vo theeno subhe hi squash or bike racing per gaye
Amrita: un log ko paata hai ki aap log aarahe hai ya pir un logo ko bhi surprise hai
Geet: suprise hai. Tho maa, dad and daadi hum bhai ko mil kar aathey hai
Shahid: Theek hai gorgeous and take care.
Trio: jee Handsome
Savitri: tho hum bhi hamare kamre main chalte hai
Amrita: jee Maa.
As soon as savitri goes, shahid pulls amrita against his chest and tries to kiss her
Amrita: kya karahe hai aap. chodo na. koi dekh lehga to
Shahid: flirting aur kya and what do you mean by koi dekh lehga. Tum kabse yeh purana dialogue use karne lage. Tum na serials dekhna ban karo
Amrita: Shut up kaddu (pumpkin)
Shahid: Oye mera naam Shahid Mallik hai, kaddu nahi. I am not fat like a pumpkin (shahid pouts like a 5 year old kid) Tumne mere abs dekhe?
Amrita: Awww mera chota sa baby ko bhura laga
Shahid: Main aur baby!!! Babies yeh nahi karte (he tries to kiss her again)
Amrita: (she pushes his face away) aapke theen ladkiya aur Theen jawan beta hai.
Shahid is confused
Amrita: Maan, Prem aur Shilpa bhi hamare bache haina
Shahid just smiles at his sweet wife
Amrita feels his grip loosen and she quickly takes this chance and runs away
Shahid: yeh!!!! hahaha!! and goes to his work

Meanwhile @ racing league

Our DD's(dhak dhaks) are all ready with their stylish bike suits, helmets and their top class bikes.
Maan: dekhna iss baar bhi hum teeno hi jeetenge
Armaan: Yep because Armaan Malik, Maan singh Khurana aur Prem Singh Khurana kabhi harte nahi
Prem: you are absolutely right dude!!!!
They were not aware that some other people are listening to their boasting
Person 1, 2 and 3 just smirks and says: aaj dekhenge ki kaun jeet ta hai aur kaun harta hai.
The anouncment of the race has been made, everybody is in their positions and they heard the gunshot and the race started. Everybody zoomed away. Maan, Armaan and Prem are ahead of everybody they are giving a hard time to everybody, many people were unable to catch up to their speed so they gave now there were only six people left on the track: Maan, Armaan, Prem, Person 1,2, and 3.They were giving a hard competition to each other but after sometime person 1, 2 and 3 come to an agreement and dissapear from the track. Armaan, Maan and Prem smirk ahead. But after sometime the person 1,2 and 3 accelerate to 250 km/h and move ahead of the boys. All three boys stare at each other and try to speed up but cant catch up to the person 1,2 and 3. They reach the end of the racing track and see that the person 1,2 and 3 are on the other side of the ribbon. They reach the finish line and see the 'winners' (the boys think with a bitter voice) leaning against their bikes. The boys stalked towards them. 😡

We hope you guys liked this part. We will try to continue soon. More comments equals faster updates. So PLEASE REPLY. For those who replied, THANKS A TONNN.👏

Luv Mishti and Dhanno😊

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