Ek dhuje ke saath (ArSh, Maaneet, Preer) Part 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Hey.. Fabulous update once again.. I loved the way Geet has thrashed Shakti.. Totally perfect.. Keep it up.. Waiting for next.. Update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear..juts caught up wth this ff...its awesome...afterall its abt arsh...i have lots of expectations form this ff...plz cont supersoon and send me a pm fpr updates..plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...


continue soon ...


now who is this raj ..


Thanks!!! Raj is just a new character. He is not important. He is not a main character. He is just some random person that helped Geet. Hope this answers your question.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes yes yes!! Geet beat him black and blue!!! Lol. Kamine ki sabse oonchi jaat hai yeh Shakti! Asssholee!! But it was wonderful! Yeh Raj kiske liye hai?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian

Yes yes yes!! Geet beat him black and blue!!! Lol. Kamine ki sabse oonchi jaat hai yeh Shakti! Asssholee!! But it was wonderful! Yeh Raj kiske liye hai?


Thanks!!! Isn't Geet awesome. Raj is not going to paired up with Geet. He is just a supporting character that helps Geet with Shakti and will be a positive influence in Maaneet lovestory. I hope this answers your question.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
i loved ur story til nw...plsss continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey


I luv this FF

please cont soon

I luv all the characters

cant wait to read more

cant wait till all the couples meet

update soon


Luv Ya


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Posted: 14 years ago
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India Here We Come!!!!!!!
(Part 4)


Canada (Heer and Shilpa)

Shilpa: Heer jaldi kaar warna humari flight miss ho
Heer: ha Shijaegi.
Heer: Areee Ruk na Shilpa. Mujhe apne kapade to pack karne do.
Shilpa: Maine kab roka hai. Mein to sirf yahi keh rahi hu key tumhe jaldi karna chahe. By the way, How many clothes do you have. I swear you have more clothes that the whole Aeropostale has.
Heer: Shilpa mere kapade par nazar maat daal.
shilpa: teeke baaba!!! ab chale meri maaa!!
Heer: ha chalo!!!
********in the airport*******
Shilpa: kya geet didi bhi India aarahi!!!
Heer: paata nahi!! jabse unke saath wo hadsa huva tha tabse wo appne aapko workholic banadiya. Woh pretend hoti hai strong hoke ki par mujhe sab pata hai.
Shilpa: same with my brother.
Heer: tumhare bhai ke saath bhi dhoka huwa tha.
Shilpa: ha. Do you think we can get them together? You know
they both dealt with broken hearts.
Heer: Are you M.A.D. shilpa!!!!
Shilpa: Two broken hearts make up one perfect and flawless heart.
Heer: Gosh Shilpa!!! You are sucha hopeless romantic. if you think about it idea bura nahi tha we can try it. Oh My God if this works, we will be related. Ehhh I am so excited. (Heer said jumping up and down)
Heer: but geet ko daanth deni padegi. ithna bura incident hone ki baath bhi wo bilkul aisi hi hai, hasti, bubbly, naughty, caring, sweet and childish. Par ab wo mard se nafrat karti hai sivai meri pitha aur bhai. But, aleast wo 99% humare bhai se better hai.
Shilpa: wo tho hai. I am so excited to meet her. i never saw her but she became my role model thorugh your words
Heer: chal humari flight ka annoucement hogayi hai.
Shilpa: ha chalo.
*******in the flight*******
Shilpa: kya tum apne bhai or geet didi ko bataaya ki tum India aarahi ho.
Heer: geet didi ko bataaya per bhai aur family ko nahi bataaya.geet didi 1 week ke baath aayegi. Shilpa: oh!! okay
Shilpa: mein bhi nahi bataaya. so, this means we both giving them a huge surprise.
Heer: you are right!!
Heer and Shilpa: So, India here we come!!!
The rest of the flight journey to london is spent in talking and fighting.( We are keeping london because there is no direct flight from canada to india so, the first stop is london then they change flights to india).
********after 12 hrs*******
heer: Shilpa utho!!! London aagayi
Shilpa: ok chal!!
mean while heer's phone rings
heer: hello
caller: hey pari!! it's me dad!! heer is shocked.
Heer(in a tensed voice): Daaad
Shahid: heer why are you sounding so tensed.
Heer : nothing dad.i was just tensed because did somthing happen. is everybody okay!!
Shahid: everyone is fine.Why can't call my darling dayghter.
Heer : no dad!! i didn't mean it that way
Shahid: anyways!! what you doing.
Heer: just watching a movie with shilpa.
Shahid: subah 6 baje tum movie dekh rahhi ho beta!!! Heer bites her tongue.
she looks at shilpa for help.
Shilpa grabs the phone
Shilpa: hi boyfriend!! this is shilpa
Dad: hi girlfriend!! tum kaise ho
Shilpa: mein teek hoon, aap kaise hai aur ghar mein sab kaise.
Dad: mein bilkul theek hoon aur ghar mein sab theek hai.par beat tum dono fil dekh rahe ho! Shilpa: wo papa! i am sorry boyfriend!!! wo mooh se aise nikal gaya.
Dad: beta!! is mein sorry ki kya baath hai!! tum bhi meri beti jaisi ho, i mean meri beti ho. Tho, tum mujhe paapa bhula sakti hai beta.
Shilpa is in tears now. heer is worried and gestures to shilpa what happened. shilps gestures that it's nothing.
Shilpa: thanks papa! So now you are my boyfriend and papa. Now heer understands what happened.
Dad: ye huyi na baath. par shona tum kuch khene waali thi.
Shilpa: ha papa! woh mujhe aur heer ko neend nahi aarahi tho humne socha ki koyi movie dekhe. meanwhile the annoucement for the flight is made and shahid(heer's and now shilpa's dad) hears it.
Dad: yeh announcement kaha se aayi beta.
Shilpa: wo dad movie mein se.
Dad: okay.
shilpa: dad koyi aaya hai main aur heer aao se baadh mein baath karenge.
Dad: okay, bye beautiful.
heer and shilpa: bye handsome!! they hang up.
shahid shakes his head and says : pagal
Heer and Shilpa are walking to their terminal but they stop suddenly a recognizable voice and turn around to see who this is and Heer is shell shocked!!! Shilpa is confused as of to why heer is shocked seeing this person.
Voice: SURPRISE.

precap: guess who!!!

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Edited by ArSh_Maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
how cute!!!
really nice bondin between shilpa n heer
omg shahid!! totally adore mr. handsome
pls update fast.. cant wait for the surprise
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
nice part...waiting for the next and loads of arsh romance...

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