Ek dhuje ke saath (ArSh, Maaneet, Preer) Part 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey! Awesome update! Hats off! 👏👏
Aww I loved Geet and Heer! Best sisters on earth!😛
Geet instigating Armaan to give gaalis to Riddhima and then their conference convo was superb! I was seriously laughing! 😆
Loved the bonding a lot!❤️
Aww their nicknames are shooo cute! Amazing!😳

Thanks for PM! Continue soon!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
heyya!!

I am LOVING this! Really love how it is shaping up and the pairings of the characters. The love between Armaan and girls, and Shilpa and boys is amzing. Love it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice intro and parts!
Continue soon and Do PM me if you can!
Edited by Radhika Shah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loving it shahid mallik and amrita mallik thats blody awesome :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update.
please update soon.
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shattered Mirror (Part 3)

********************************************London**************************************************
After Geet and Heer talked to their brother Teddy (Armaan), they talked about Geet. Geet is talking happily on the phone with Heer about her boyfriend, Shakti. They have been dating for about one year. Her hazel eyes full of happiness as she talked about Shakti. She is a full on chatter box and a very happy person that loves everyone. She talked to Heer about her feelings for Shakti.
Heer: So pandu, how is my Shakti JIJU?
Geet: Shush Pari!!! He is not your jiju yet.
Heer: YET? What do you mean pandu?
Geet: Welll...
Heer: Spill now OR ELSE '..
Geet: Fine. I love him.
Heer: I am sorry I didn't hear that right. Did you just say that you love him?
Geet: Ya I love him. Atleast i think I do.
Heer: What do you mean by "think"?
Geet: I feel happy with him. I have been with him for 1 year and he hasn't forced me into anything.
Heer: Just becasue he hasn't forced you doesn't mean that you should love him.
Geet: I don't know. I am so confused. He is just so perfect and I am '. i just don't deserve someone as perfect as him.
Heer: Dont you dare Geet Shahid Mallik. You are the one of best people I met. No one deserves you because you are too good for them.
Geet: But...
Heer: No buts
Geet: Fine but I know that I love him
Heer: Okay say hi to my future jiju and please tell Teddy and our parents about him. Oh and Shilpa knows about my future jiju. Sorry di but I tell Shilpa everything.
Geet: (in a worried voice) What? Will she tell anyone?
Heer: No she won't but di I have to go now. And you Missy , get ready for your date with Shakti Jiju.
Geet: For the last time he is not your jiju and I will call you later.
After Geet puts the phone down, she gets ready for her date with Shakti. She started talking to herself about what to wear...
Geet: Mein kya pehnu. Nahi, yeh red dress bahuth chota hai. aur yeh blue wala mujh per aacha nahii lagta. Hey babaji, ab mein kya karu. Kya pehnu.
Geet started pacing after her little tirade about her clothes. After 5 minutes she remembered that she went shopping yesterday for her date.
Geet: Yeh Armaan and Heer bhi naa. Mujhe saab bhula dete hai. I swear that they are the most devilry devils found on this earth. Kash mere bhai and behan '. Aree Geet tum phirse distract hogayi. (Geet hits herself on the head) Remember that you need to impress Shakti and tell him that you love him.
After her internal pep talk, Geet wears a purple tube dress. The dress came up to her thighs and she looks like the most prettiest girl in this world.
Geet took a deep breath and left the house. She found a cab and went to a hotel called Purple Ocean. Halfway there she realized she forgot her wallet and phone. "Damn!! There is no time to go back." she thought. When she reached there, she saw Shakti dress in a black tuxedo. To her, Shakti looked handsome. They both sat down and ordered food.
Shakti: how was your day sweetheart? You did anything fun?
Geet: Today was slow and lazy. I talked to my bro and sis. Thats it. How was your day?
Shakti: It was good. Wait a second sweetheart, I forgot something in my car to give my friend.
Geet: Your friend?
Shakti: Ya he is a waiter here. He told me to bring something which I forgot in the car. I will just go get it.
Geet nodded. She saw Shakti return and go to the waiter and give him something. They talked for a few minutes. When Shakti came, they continued their conversation. After a while, the food arrived and they started eating. When they were leaving the hotel, Geet started feeling dizzy.
Geet: Pata nahi mujhe kyu chaker aa rahe hai, maine toh aaj sharab bhi nahi pi.
Shakti: Its okay Geet. Chalo mein tumhe hotel room mein lee jata hoon.
Geet doesn't say anything and faints in Shakti's arms. Shakti picks her up and carries her in the hotel room upstairs. On the way to their room, Geet opened her eyes but her vision was to blurry. Suddenly, she was flying in the air. She landed on the bed roughly. Surprised, she looked up and saw Shakti.
Geet: Shakti, Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe aise kyu pheka?
Shakti said nothing and advanced towards Geet. He smiled at Geet who found it creepy.
Shakti: Ab mein apni icha puri karuga. Mein tumse tumari sabse pyarri chez chenuga.
Geet started shouting for help.
Shakti: Jitana chilana hai chilao, tumhe ab koi nahi bachaega.
After saying that, he jumped on her and started kissing her neck. Geet was sobbing but then stopped when she remembered something. She started responding to Shakti's advances.
Shakti: I knew you couldn't resist me for long. No one can resist me.
Just then Shakti closed his eyes in pain. He realized that Geet had just kicked him in his private spot. Geet quickly pushed him upwards and ran from the room like her life depended on it literally. She noticed that Shakti is running after her. She ran into an alley with Shakti after her. Just then, she realized her mistake. She had no way out.
Shakti: Ab tum kaha bachke jaogi. Tumhe ab koi nahi bachaega.
Geet smiles sweetly at him and says...
Geet: Come here sweetheart
Shakti is shell-shocked. But he doesn't pay attention to it and goes to Geet to molest her. When Shakti is close enough, Geet punches him very hard.
Geet: Mere saath panga mat lena warna tumari nobauth ayegi.
KICK
Geet: Oye Ullu ke pathe!!!
PUNCH
Geet: Soower ki aulaad
KICK
Geet: mere se panga liya ha, Ab tuje batati hoon
PUNCH
Geet: Kutte ki aulaad
Geet picks up her heels and starts beating him with it. Just then she hears a cough behind her. She looks and sees a man. The man, whose name is Raj, is staring at her with his mouth open.
Raj: WOW!!!!
Geet: Abe khoke de putter!!!! Mujhe aise kyu dekh raha hai. Tuje koi problem hai?
Raj: Uhhh no. I was just admiring...ummm...your true indian nari skills.
Geet: oh Thank you! Thank you!! (Geet bows down)
They both look at each other and laugh hard. Raj and Geet look at Shakti. Shakti is bleeding badly and he has cuts/bruises all over his body. Geet smiles sheepishly and says...
Geet: I didn't realize how badly i beat him magar meine bauth acha art banaya hai. What do you think '
Raj: Raj, my name is Raj Khanna. Naam to suna hi hoga. And whats your name beautiful?
Geet: Beautiful hogi teri maa. Aur meine naam nahi suna hai. By the way my name is Mallik. Geet Mallik.
Raj: Fan of James Bond?
Geet: Totally. He is the hottest and the most awesomest man ever.
Raj just smiles and her and they both look at Shakti again.
Geet: Umm can I borrow your cell phone to call the police so they can arrest this a**hole?
Raj: Sure

THE END
Precap: INDIA HERE WE COME

~ Luv Dhanoo and Mishti
Edited by ArSh_Maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey

it seems really interesting...could u add me to ur pm list


thx

luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...


continue soon ...


now who is this raj ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!

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