Once upon a time in a fairytale - P7 Pg18

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queenofhearts01

@queenofhearts01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Once again - amazing part Monz! Aapke ab kya kehne? 😆 Dil toh humara bhi dhak dhak kar raha tha! I once again really enjoyed the level of detail you went into throughout this part but I must give a special mention to the manner in which you write from Arnav's point of view! Truly truly commendable! 👏

Jhappis and non-gheeli 😉 paapis my monz!

🤗 ❤️

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Hey Mohini!!!

I'm Zeba...🤗

I loved the two chapters you've written. Your style of writing is absolutely fantastic. It holds the reader from start to finish, and leaves them wanting more!!!

I'm not sure five parts are going to be enough hun...😆😆

Looking forward to the next part...😊

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meepha

@Meeph

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

hey nice work

Plz pm when u upd8

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Mujhe bataya kyun nahi :(

me will read and comment soon :)

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Hey Mohini!!!
I'm Zeba...🤗
I loved the two chapters you've written. Your style of writing is absolutely fantastic. It holds the reader from start to finish, and leaves them wanting more!!!
I'm not sure five parts are going to be enough hun...😆😆
Looking forward to the next part...😊

That's a very generous comment Zeba. Very sweet! Thank you!

I will be updating my next part in a couple of days! 😳

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: meepha
hey nice work
Plz pm when u upd8

Thanks Meepha for the sweet words.

I sent you a buddy request 😛

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Suvi7884
Mujhe bataya kyun nahi :(
me will read and comment soon :)

Thread pe daala tha na? Mujhe laga everyone knew. So Sorry darling. I will PM you next time I update! 😳

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

WOW Mohini!!

Simply fantabulous!👏

I loved it...the setting is so nice..in a cruise..😍

Blue blue sky...fluffy fluffy clouds (the simmmppsssoons wale LOL)...the azure of the ocean, with waves lapping against the ek dum mast white ship...and Arnav and Khushi😍 Hayyyeee! How romantic!

Ooh so Khushi is a business woman..a clean freak and totally organised...and Arnav 'Strange fella' is here to spy on her! :O

LOL Its cute how she's such a perfectionist and so meticulous...she panicked so much just because she thought her meeting with Arnav is today..hayye but they've already met ;)

Oh oh! Arnav is fascinated by nature :D and Khushi ko photography pasand hai...hayye so they can photo each other because their love is a work of nature :D wait..O.o im random...anyyywaays LOL

lol and kaise bolte hain...like poets ki tarah...O_o I'm too dumb to understand lol

Ab u have to update fast, ok?