Once upon a time in a fairytale - P7 Pg18 - Page 11

HAHHAHAHAH they actually ended up meeting each other at night.. awww lvoed this entry, thx 4 the pm...

Just read the part 1... Plz pm me when you update!! Gonna catch up with the rest when time permits...

Originally posted by: mohini4u

SUUVVIII 🤗 kaisi ho frootie darling! ❤️ Just yesterday I was going to reply to you and ask you ki agar tumse chitting chatting karni ho toh kahaan aana padega madam ji.. aur dekho.. aaj my ty ne bar phir se khol diya

Sorry for such a late update. Haha unka na milna zaroori tha 😆 viewers ki restlessness badhane ke liye 🤣

Aww thanks for relating to Khushi's emotions. Nahi nahi Arnu waapis aayega .. with a bang! He just needed some time that's all! 😳

Thanks for liking this part babes! 🤗 right back atcha!!

See ya at the bar!

🤗Theek hoon? Tum kaisi ho?

welll it is about tym u updated lolz bless ya i wonted to read one of ur update thanks 4 the pm, lovellly update as always

I just read the whole thing

Mohini 🤗 here I am! Lol gay surprise right?? but hey, I think a new reader might just make you happy, haina?! *gives a nervous laugh* Am going to read each part like one a day and comment on each one, howzzat?? lol even if you don't like it, main to tujhe pakane waali hoon ab! Why didn't you tell me you had a ff??! *puts up fake anger* and such a dreamy one at that!! 😍 Have I even told you how much I love fairytales? Lol 'tangled' is like my altime favourite movie coz of the dreamy love story and flynn rider the dreamier guy. Okay now i'm going to stop my ranting and get on to Part 1.

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Part 1: Hmm so Khushi is successful, independent, intelligent and heaps cool! Loving her! I love the cruise setting, and the background story you've weaved about Khushi's life and her association with Arnav Singh Raizada, aka the Flynn Rider of this story! Haww if only my friends treat me to such a cruise, my friends are all kanjoos guys and girls jinnko meri koi parwa nahi 😔 lol not really, just my drama. 😆 Hmm so ArShi are soon to be business partners, and supposed to meet for a discussion about how the company works so Khushi can get settled well. Quite liked that. Hmm her secretary tells her she had the meeting today, lol talk about scaring someone to death! Hmppph thank god that's fixed, but hey a shameless Mr. is sitting nearby and gawking away at her as she does her own thing, aisi jurrat to Arnav Singh Raizada hi kar sakta hai! LOL! Hmm but he ain't bad in this right??? Mehh mujhe to dono hi pasand hai, lest he be a Darcy or a Flynn Rider, I'm falling hard and fast for both! 😛❤️

I'm still angry at you for not telling me you wrote a FF on the forum, so much for being my friend! HMPPPH! *chucks fake anger* lol main tujhse naraaz ho sakti hoon kya?!Especially when you've treated me to this beautiful piece, love you diii 🤗🤗

and lol talk about my lateness, a week or two late, that's like a record of lateness. Sorry about that, blame it all on school! 😡 I get paranoid about getting school assessments done, aur phir main sab bhool jaati hoon. 😒


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Part 2: I LOVE LOVE LOVE Arnav's character sketch. He's a proud, self-made man who cares a lot about his company's image and is on the look-out for shades of a good leader in Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta who will not only bring along wealth and prosperity to his business, but will also maintain the image of the comapny he has so carefully constructed over the years. And here he is, on the same cruise as his future business partner to test (would that even be the right word to describe what he's here for??) her qualities and see if she would be beneficial on both a personal and professional front for him and his business. If you didn't describe his inner turmoil so well, I or anyone for that matter would percieve Arnav as just another selfish jerk using people for his own benefits. That is commendable! 👏👏 Lmaoo i'm so glad he understands that he's being too gawky and scaring the girl in front, and he's decided that he won't trouble the lady with his eyes no more and get up to make his way out, but destiny has its own plans. Liked their chance conversation with her asking for his wellness and then lending him a sweet piece of advice. Indeed he will be drifting into new terrains more than in his life journey, coz baby love is on the run to get ya!
Mohini, you're a brilliant story teller and I can't thank you enough for writing this brilliant piece for us. My hands are itching to click on that Part 3 link on page one of this thread, but school work calls. I'd be dropping in the comments for Part 3 and 4 tomorrow, will make sure I bore you for the whole weekend with all my nonsense. It's revenge time darling!! 😛😆

Originally posted by: Danina

Amaaazing;D;D

Awesum;D

Loved it<3<3

thanks for the pm;D

continue soon;D