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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#451

Is Dev the guy that Adi had chosen for Geet? OMG! Can't wait for the next update!

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@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#452

awesome part

me waiting how yu unfold

the story

geet plight was heartwenching

yu narrate so perfect

waiting next

thnx 4 pm

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#453

thanx for pm.

ill go & read it now

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#454

Hey anu...🤗
we know we r too much wen we want updates but we can't help it u c...we love ur updates sooo much dat we can't stop ourselves...😳 😆...u dnt need to thank us sweety...we love reading ur work so we shud thank u for giving us such wonderful updates...😳...love u...😳
Coming to the update...!!!!
it was beautifully written anu...
adi died n geet all shattered n dev's entry...oww he was sweet n caring to her as he din want her to involve in all this...geet's only family adi has left her...but i know geet will b strong n will fight for hr brother's death..!!! hope she will be able to hold herself strong...😭..i really feel sad for her but mayb destiny has something in store for her...!!!
Coming to maan the DON...he was also not in the mod after the events took place...he was thinking of something n i knw he'll try to reach geet...😊...but he shudn't have killed adi...😭...
but seems like the writer(anu) has a surprise for us in future...😉..
lovely update anu...
it was awesome...
thanks for the PM...🤗
udpate sooonn...will be waiting for the update...!!! 😛 😉 😳 😃

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#455

anu how do u cumup with such cool story lines.

i'm not evn sure if dev is really the guy talking to romeo. mayb it's maan and he arranged for her residence.👍🏼

dev was a bit stern whn he told geet not to look into adi's death in so much detail..i was wondering if he was doing it out of concern or coz mayb he was behind adi's murder.

sooo wanaa read more more more.

luv luv luv u'r stories.

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@DrashtiDhamiNo1

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#456

awesome update

loved it

awww geets lil room-mate is sooo cute

was it dev he was talking to on the phone???

i wonder what everyone is hiding from geet

really curious about it

looking forward to the next part

cont soon please

thanks for the pm!! :D

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#457

nice one...

but... uff... i dunno what to say... i cant even now say to blossom the love b/w geet and don... it wil surely b not right... even iff i m dying for there love track...