MG ff Pact with the Devil updt@63 21/06 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one. but bit confusing
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mandymore

Luvely prt,fab twist
uff its so confusng whos dis vansh n y he cld himslf as geets bro.thnxs 4 pm.cont soon


ALL ARE CONFUSED...

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED😉😆
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Recap-She wore a flesh-coloured salwar kameez with her wavy hair open and a small yet heavenly smile lighting up her bow-shaped lips and making those pools of amber of her eyes twinkle.





''Angel'' he whispered unconsciously.





Chapter-4

I kissed an angel


''You want me to what?'' Mr Singhania almost yelled.





''Name the land under Geet's name after her marriage'' Vansh said with all his politeness.





It was a business deal between the Shekhawat's and the Singhania's which later turned out to be something else as both the families decided to get their children married.But the land deal was still in place.





Singhania wanted to use it for business purpose and as he offered the highest price,the Shekhawats automatically abide by it.





But this this was still kept under wraps as that's how Vansh wanted it,specially after the announcement of his brother Veer and Geet's marriage.





The plan was made...the pawns were set...now it only needed to be executed to perfection.





''But why Vansh...if it is under Geet's name,how are we supposed to use it?'' The patriarch of the house,Vanraj Singhania's dad,Mr Yashraj Singhania.





''Why not Dadaji?'' Vansh argued ''Geet is the daughter of this family and will remain so-even after her marriage...I don't see anything wrong in naming the land under her name...just think of it as a gift from the groom's family'' he said and smiled.





Dadaji shook his head in negative ''but then geet will be the legal owner of this land right?'' He questioned ''and I don't trust this girl anyway'' he thought.




Vansh smiled inwardly ''it doesn't matter Dadaji...does it?'' ''At the end of the day,it will be secure in the hands of someone of your own blood-right?''





Mr Singhania just nodded and said ''if the groom's family want's it...so be it.''


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She didn't realize that she was smiling and blushing unconsciously since she sat inside the car en route to her home from till the car stopped abruptly in the middle of nowhere.





''What happened kaka?'' she asked worriedly.





''I think there's some problem with the engine...but you don't worry Babyji,I shall fix it within sometime.'' The good-old man assured her with a smile.





Geet smiled and nodded her head.She sat there and saw the old man getting out of the car,opening the bonnet and doing something.





After sometime,he shouted ''Babyji...the engine needs water...is there any in your bottle?''





Geet quickly checked her bag and found the bottle empty.She made a sad face and told him it's empty.Hearing this,the driver replied he'll get it from somewhere and asked her to stay there till he comes and went.


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He was driving down an unknown road,smiling to himself as he remembered the girl in the picture.





''Geet'' he took the name repeatedly,consciously or unconsciously.Only he knew how he have waited for the night to finish and the morning to break so he could tell Vansh that he has agreed to the proposal.





But being the man that he is,he preferred to say yes to the proposal in all his famous MSK attitude.as he just said that if it's meant for business,he's ready to accept the proposal made by him,not letting Vansh think that he harbored any other interest in the pact save business.





But strangely,till yesterday all he could think about was the land deal,and now,it's only Geet who occupied his thoughts in ways he wouldn't have imagined.





But his chain of thoughts broke as his jeep came came to a sudden halt in a near-deserted road.


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The sky darkened with each passing second and in a few moments,it was covered with deep-gray clouds.Geet downed the glass-window of the car and felt the cool breeze touch her face.


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Maan looked up and frowned.First the jeep breaking down in the middle-of-nowhere and now this rains...he couldn't have asked for more.


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The breeze soon brought with itself,the beautiful smell of wet earth as large droplets of water started to fall from the heavens.





Geet first stretched out her hand to feel the droplets of water touch her skin...but she wasnn't satisfied with just her hand getting wet.So she got out of the car.





A few local kids were running towards her direction,rolling a tyre with a stick.and stopped as they felt the rain and started dancing as it was a rather rare sight in a place like Bikaner.





She saw them and joined them.


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Maan was walking ahead in hope to find someone for help when the rain started.





He muttered profanities under his breath as he grew irritated with the current weather and his own helpless situation as first-his jeep broke down,and now his mobile have run out of charge.





As he looked here and there,trying to find any sign of life on this deserted road,he stopped suddenly as he encountered the sight before him.





His stood frozen in surprise and disbelief as he saw the girl from a distance...the same girl who have occupied his thoughts since the day he have seen her face-it was Geet!


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Another part coming up😉




Edited by shelly_08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what a nice update.
i luvd u'r ...pawn was set and the plan had to b executed ...analogy alot. it was wll put.
oh so many deals how will the two hearts find their way 😍

the wet smell of earth ...made me smell my plant..it didn't smell anything like the light fragrance accomapnied by rain 🤔

waiting for more
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm looks like i have alot of catching up to do😍

yay kia hoa?
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kab hoa? ...mujhay koi pm kyon naheen aaya 😭
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Chapter-4 (B)

I kissed an angel

''Geet'' he whispered out her name as he saw his angel stretching out her hands,smiling,giggling and dancing in the rain like no one's watching.

Arre aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujhaao zara

A wave of desire hit him as he saw her aqua-blue salwar kameez against her alabaster skin,turn transparent thanks to the rain.

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Mai paani ke upar tarne lagoon

He was,at first not ready to believe that she is there for real,and thought of her as a fragment of his imagination.But as he heard her musical laughter and saw her kicking the dirty water with her feet-he knew she was indeed real.

Behne de mujhe behne de mujhe
Behne de mujhe behne de

Hooo...behne de mujhe behne de

mujhe behne de mujhe behne de

Behne de ghanghor ghata
Behne de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai

Behne de nadiya ki tarah

He felt immense heat searing him wholly amidst the rain as even the large-cold droplets weren't helping to dampen the heat as he saw her innocent,child-like moves in the rain as she tried bhangra,jumping,kicking and God-knows what...just enjoying herself in the rain.

Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki
Jeena hai toh pyaar mei
Dil kahin bhi ho mera
Jaan rakhi hai yaar mei
Behja behja hai saagar ka kehna
Behja behja hai nadiya ko behna

Involuntarily his legs started to move in her direction as he slowly started to advance towards her.Meanwhile the kids thought of some mischief and before Geet could be alerted,the gang of kids snatched her dupatta and ran away.

Maan saw this and then saw trying to run after them,shouting at them...but her stupid heels betrayed her and broke and as she was going to fall,she felt a pair of hands encircle her waist protectively.

Patte se tapakti boond ki awaaz sunai di thi

Nadiya mei tapak aur gum ho ja
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Behne de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behne de mujhe behene de

She opened one of her eye and then opened both.Instantly her heart skipped a beat as her vision collided with a pair of lotus petal-shaped,brunette eyes looking at her in a scarring intensity which made her heart beat irrationally.

Unknowingly she looked at the stranger with wide eyes and slightly parted lips,may be for the first time trying to decipher what his eyes spoke.

She didn't even realize that he slowly helped her stand up as her hands were on his shoulders.

He kept his gaze fixed on those innocent yet beguiling pools of amber of her eyes as he helped her up,his hands still on her waist.

Slowly his gaze diverted from her eyes to her lush and ripe looking lips.

Mera pal-pal ang-ang bhar diya
Tuney jaan pe junoon saa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar doon

As she followed his gaze,her facial expression changed and she got horrified as she suddenly realized that she was here in a deserted street with some stranger who wastouching her and on top of that her dupatta was not on her anymore.

She tried to push him hard,but to no avail as he was way more stronger than her,instead his hold on her waist got even tighter.

''Geet'' he said and looked at her with a beautiful smile creeping up his lips.

Geet was shocked to hear her name from a stranger...how come he knows her?Why is he looking at her like that? These questions start to buzz in her head.

''Who...who are you?'' She asked him fearfully.

He smirked and whispered close to her ears ''Maan''

But as soon as her mouth opened to say something,he closed the distance between their lips as he took them in a kiss which made fireworks explode within both of their bodies.

Behne de mujhe behne de mujhe
Behne de mujhe behne de

Behne de nadiya ki tarah

Behne de ghanghor ghata
Behne de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai

She was not able to register what was happening as her brain got defunct the moment he slammed his lips on her's.

He grabbed the back of her head to let his mouth conquer hers' whereas she stood motionless,her hands still on his shoulder.





Feeling no response from her side,he deepened the kiss and bit her lower lip which finally made her gasp and taking the advantage,he entered her mouth.





Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aate hain
Dil ki chulu mei bechare
Dubkiyan gotey khaate hain

Beh ja behja chal todh kinaare ko
Behja behja dhar le majhdhaare ko





The moment he bit her,all her senses came crashing to her as she realized she was being kissed...that too from a stranger...and that too in the middle of a deserted road!





That's when he felt her struggling against his hold.He smiled inside her mouth as he was thoroughly enjoying her struggle against him.He sucking and biting her lower lip as she continued to struggle and moan every time he bit her.Her attempts to move him away went in vain and she finally stopped struggling.





Chingari udha ke raakh se
Ek boond gira ke aankh se
Chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya

Behne de mujhe behene de mujhe behne de

mujhe behne de...





Just then he heard someone calling out her name...he slowly broke apart but not before teething her lips hard enough to make it bleed.He looked at her horrified expressions and smirked before giving her a light kiss on her forehead and turning around to leave while she stood there like a rock.





That's when she felt someone tap her shoulder and she turned at the person with a sudden jerk only to see her driver kaka standing there.


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Precap #1-''He kissed me''


Precap #2- ''What are you both doing here?'' He looked at his brother questioningly.


''Checking you out bro''.


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Edited by shelly_08 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: basicquestion1

yay kia hoa?

.kaise hoa?
kab hoa? ...mujhay koi pm kyon naheen aaya 😭


Luks like there's sum ghapla with ur PM inbox🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..Your this Maan is a rogue as well😉.. would love to see how he reacts when he gets to know shes engaged to someone else.. he will get to know that right? oTherwise how will we have a jealous enraged Maan you re so good at creating😍

poor darling.. shes in for so much more than this shocking kiss....

great update.. do post the next part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice ff plz add me to ur pm list n update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update,,,bt wer is d next part,,,update soon

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