FF-Immoral World-THREAD 1 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
i m sad for geet
as well as dev
omg i wont even imagine that dev had died
hey pls now dont make mann to take revenge on geet dear
she is a such preety girl
unnecssarily she had be the game of dev
i m angry on him too
but sad that he is dead
hope mann ll be onside of geet


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Posted: 14 years ago
Y y y??? U did this to poor geet, iits good dev died but disaster has alredy taken place, pooor geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
😡Kyun kyun kiya aise...why geet keym😭😭😭
Murder was fine..b###### brij n dev.
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh stupid Dev😡
good he was killed
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Geet I want to kill brijj
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nooo waaayyy...poor geet...why she HAVE to be at the receiving end of men's assault in ur ff's😭😭

Sorry 2 say this keya...but I HATED THIS PART

Now do some repair work...and PUHLEEEZZZ don't make her pregnant with that B******'s CHILD...Else I'll KILL YOU😡

I wonder what will maan's entry do🤔

Will he avenge his brother's death by killing Brij? Or will take the revenge on GEET...😕

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...
love it...
poor geet...
geet was badly repped by dev...
m happy that he killed by brij...
maan is coming back to india...
cont soon..
waiting 4 the next...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd...
feelin sad 4 geet...poor girl...
hate dev 4 his...uhh!...

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Posted: 14 years ago


~Immoral World~

part 3





Chamily "I had enough! You have to get up & eat now!" she force fully feed her, while geet broke down in her arm.

-Deli-

Maan have arrived, a normal, average man. Rich & powerful yet have the soft corner for his family. Anni came by and hugged maan. She broke down. "what happen? What happen?" he tried to calm her down.
Anni "I am really worried bhi! What if something happens to him! Oh bhi pls find bro!"
Maan "don't worry. Everything will be fine, now shall we go home."
Anni nodes.
Maan have already put some detective to work, it's odd, That dev is missing like this, this should not happen at all.

Within few days he found some information that dev went to hoshirpoor. He wondered why? He decided to ask anni, who feared to tell anything to him, specially about her & brij, but eventually she gives up & tells everything, crying her eyes out...
Maan "all this happened & you decided to tell me now?"
Anni "I am sorry bhi! But... But!"
Maan "enough! Who is brij?"
Anni "brij Handa!" she managed to whisper... Maan shook his head. He knew well who Handa is. He decided to leave for HP.

-Hoshierpoor-

Now days geet gets scared to even show her face, let alone go outside by her self.
Rano "we have to married her off!"
Brij "yes, to someone who we can control! Stays under our foot!"
Rano "why don't you look for some fool from here! Then we can move for deli after her wedding!"
Brij "you are correct. We will do that!"

Chamily "lets go out. You will feel nice!"
Geet "I don't have the mood," she cries.
Chamily "I won't listen! Let's go!" geet with half smile leaves with her. She refuged to think about anything. It's chummily who kept consoling her. Who helped her to overcome everything. She smiled sadly... No one knew about the incident, she feared if they know it will be more juti then sympathy.
Chamily "what a nice day!" she smiles. Geet smiles sadly, she barely had any control over her state of mind. She wore a White slawr. Her head covered, not knowing exactly where she is heading to... Chamily did not realise at all when geet started to walk in middle of the road. Or even bothered to see any car. A track was beeping from far corner while geet walking senselessly... Suddenly chamily realised, there us no geet... She screamed at her to come off but it was to late, the track was to near... Bur luckily maan was there.

Maan ran and held her, removing her quickly off the road... Geet crashed her self in his embrace. Hidding her face on his chest as they both lands on the floor... A crowed starts to form. "what's wrong with you?" maan shouts. "you nearly died!" geets Hazel brown eyes did not say much except look at him with tearful eyes. There was so much pain, he dare not read. He slowly comes off her, Helping her to get up, "are you alright?" geet nodes silently while chamily comes and hugs her tight.
Chamily "thank you! Thank you! Thank you so much." she was showering with thank you, and maan just observed geet.
Maan "it's alright! Just be care full next time!" he gives her one last glare then walks towards his jeep. Geet dare not to look up or where that strange man was heading towards.
Chamily "what's wrong with you?"
Geet "I am sorry!"
Chamily "alright! Alright! Now let's go."
Geet could not even walk in to the house when rano grabs her, "go and get change. Larke wala tujce dekne aiyhi!" geet looks up in shock.
Rano "don't worry! We are looking for a husband who will be staying with us! You are not going anywhere after marriage! & this is important as.." she did not like to mentioned, she walked off, leaving geet to get ready.

Maan started to ask question about his brother personally. He have some idea that brij is behind this, but how could he accuse. He have seen brij photo before in devs school group! But most likely he changed, and he probably have no clue who is he... Instea of looking for dev, he planned to track what's brij is up to.

Normal coffe shop, brij again sat down with his few friends. Laughing taking.
Brij "I am looking for someone for my sister! Like someone who we are able to control!" he spoke, while maan listened from the other table, he decided to find bit more information about this girl called geet Handa. & when he found everything out, he just smiled way. All the property is under her name. The day she turn 18, all the property will be under her name! No wonder this so called wife of mr handa is greedy. But where is his brother?...
If geet Handa dies before 18 everything gies to trust! & if she married everything goes to her husband & she have to be over 18!
Maan knew instantly something fishy going on here... But he is not here for anything like this, he is looking for his brother.

That day he went back to deli, decided to have a word with anni, send her abroad maybe... It's best to keep her way, only he knows what he will be doing now, and this could easily effect her.
Bua "what's wring beta? Why so sudden decision to send her to London?"
Maan "you 3 going also!"
Vicky "why?"
Dadima "no!"
Maan "I am doing something here, and it's best for you to leave!" maan had tint of hint that something may have happened to dev, bur he did not like to take any more risk with other member of family, and anyway he was not sure at all... If dev is alright or not. He wanted to think positive.

After he made sure everyone is safe in plane he left for hoshirpoor, to make sure this geet Handa is his wife. he knew well how to win brij trust.




next- building up trust.. & mannet😳

i know i know.. you lot hating me for that... but i had to.. stupid dev😡

but maan is here from now on😍

pls pls pls pls leave comment.. i think hopefully your all dark romance will

be intruduced from the next part... & remember our maan is not dark at all



thanks for all the love & support.. pls pls pls

comment :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG i jst hate dis Dev 4m d core of my heart. Dat son of b**ch. Hw could he do dis to geet. Nd dat brij another coward he didnt care of her. Hate dis Handa family. Feeling bad 4 geet poor grl gt punishment 4 d crime she havent committed. M really looking 4ward 4 maan's entry. Hope things get better den. Pls pls pls update soon.

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