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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi kemya...

new work started... loved it and wants to read more and more ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Immoral WORLD~
Part 2

'The murder'





Geet "let's take this!"
Chamily "uff! You have taken the whole shop! Can we go now!"
Geet "no! No! I have to buy few more thing." geet smiled.
She is a 17 years old girl. Life have been normal, tough, everything you can possibly imagine. But she always smiled, never let any one effecting her or letting her family down. Both reached home safely. "I wonder what taking her so long" geet wondered. Both walked in with big bag of shopping, looking at rano who is running from one side to another.
Rano "where is this girl?"
Geet "ma shall I go to the bus stop and wait!"
Rano "that would be perfect. Go! And make sure she is safe."

-Deli-

Naina have no intention to show her face to the hosirpoor ground. She rather stay here.
Tina "are you sure! Your family must be worried!"
Naina "who cares!" her phone rang suddenly. It's no other then her parents. She cuts the line. "seriously when they will realise that I have long forgotten them. I like to enjoy my life in my way." she smirks... Hiding her self in her bf embrace...

-Hoshirpoor-

Geet waited. Looking at the bus. She was so exited of her friend naina coming. She always looked up to her. The way she walked. The way she dressed. She was so beautiful. Perfect in everything. Oh how much she have been waiting for her. She have so much to say, she have topped again in her class. Oh she could not wait to share her stake of happiness, not the part how rude there mother could be. But it's just, she always in high temper! Geet strokes her chin. Wondering what really bothering her.

Dev looks at her from the corner. He smirks. It was late evening... The sun was about to disspear. Geet have been waiting for past hour. Waiting for naina, but seems like her bus was delayed. She made a baby face. She thought about calling back in a. Hour again. She slowly started to walk off, still looking at the bus... As she nearly reached the fild, the shop light started to disappear. It was between light & dark. Sonething bothered her. She never been out so late, she smiled sadly, & somewhere scared. She tries to hurry, run.


-Home-


Rano "now where this geet queen have disappeared to! It's getting dark, no naina & no geet!" she may be the step daughter! But she is still a girl! & she did have some humanity! If she dies! What about the property? "brij go and look for them!" brij nodes.

Geet tried to scream as a one hand swiftly held her across her waist and another hold her mouth. He was strong, very strong. He lifted her in one great jeark. She nonstop moved her flapped her leg. Crying, begging her life, she tried to escape, in fain the man, dev through her in to the pile of hay, geet's whole body was shaking. Her eyes shot a angry glare, her dupatta no where to be seen, she stood up, tried to run, but fails miserably. She screamed as his body crashed on her... "please let me go!" she begged. She cried, unable to in the shock she roared in pain as his full body roughly mishandling her.
Dev did not utter a word as his body abused her like a animal...

Brij came to town. Worried now. One of the worker ran towards him, "sir sir, I just have seen your sister heading towards the fild!" brij nodes and starts walking towards it, when he reached near by, he hard scream! He tried to listen, & somewhere his heart ake! This must be naina, he ran, ran towards the scream...

Geet laid there in blood. She tries to cover her self in pain, wimping. Dev smiles looking at her sight. So hopeless. He puls his trouser up. & simply walks off...
He couldn't go far when brij bumps in to him! He looks at the girl in distance by who was lying in the hay, and that must be naina. He took his gun out and shot him instantly... Devs body fallen thud on the ground. His boiling blood, he ran towards his sister but & it was no other then geet. Shaking. Shivering.
Brij "tu?" geet started to cry. "I thought naina! Where is she? Have something happen to her as well?" he asked worryingly. Geet nodes a no. "let's go! & don't you dare tell this to anyone, this is the reputation of the handas!" he barely bothered that geet just got rapped. She was scared, all he cared he is alive and that's all mattered.

After one week, brij managed to cover devs body. Police knew them well, so case was dismissed.

-Deli-

Anni worried. It's been a week that she have not hard from dev, not even sure where he went, she calls maan.
Anni "bhi, dev bro, he have not been home for past week! Me, bua, dadi , vicky are very worried."
Maan "I will be in India by 2moro!"
Anni "bhi I am really worried. What if something happen to bro?"
Maan "nothing will happen to him until I am alive." anni started to cry. While maan consoling.

-Hoshiarpoor-

Chummily sat by geet. Stroking her hair back. She have lost half of her body wait. Not eating, not talking, not attending her classes, she simply cried. Who will want her now? Who will love her? After all this who will even bother to look at her? The pain, it's something unbearable.
Chamily "please eat something geet, please, you will feel much better. Promise!"
Geet "I am not hungry!"
Chamily "geet, forget everything, no one knows about this, just let's go!"
Geet "no!"
Chamily "I had enough! You have to get up & eat now!" she force fully feed her, while geet broke down in her arm.


next -entry of maan

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
hate dev hate dev hate dev
hate him
i am so happy he is dead.
idiot stupid
how could you😭
geet is raped
oh i am so worried
and brij idiot, killed him happy
but not even caring what just happen to geet
first thing he ask was
concern about his own little sister
stupid selfish people
he only killed dev bcs he thought it was naina
if i am not wrong
thats so selfish
stupid
now next part i want
very soon
i hope you like my rainbow comments
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xx
Edited by Maansexi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
feeling for geet that b****** dev it's nice that brij killed him i m very much happy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poor Geet! FF's barely started and Dev's already dead? Maan coming to India? Can't wait! Thanks for the update[s]!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ugh hate dev! B**** what? Ugh ugh
I am so happy that he is dead. No him to worry our mannet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
res
awww
wht did u do to geet keya??😲
it was such a sad update!!!😭
dev..arrgghh😡
can't he get his facts right b4
doing sumthing>??😡
brij...he didn't even care abt her!!😡
hate him..hate him...

plz update soon!
😭
Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
no body know about what happen to geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet she didn't have
happy life & now got raped
i'm glad his dead
because what cruel brij did
pls dont let geet pregg
wonder what i'll maan do
when he find out
story turning interesting
amazing part
waiting waiting

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