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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Loved it, amazing update. continue soon.

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Loved it muskan:-) n my msg to ur geet 'dont let him go so easily, he troubled u a lot, u were hungry 4 him for 3 days... N he in his anger removed d ring, d commitment, urs love! This is d payback time, msk ko sabak sikhao:-D'

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

wow so cute update 😊 ruthana manana ...formal dinner date toh geet maan gayi ??😆

mana oth pura behsaraam hai even in fornt of elders ...lovely nd cute update 😊

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

MY PAIN AND MY LOVE

how did i lose myself to you?

This question haunts me each day!

Each other we barely knew,

Yet being with you makes my day!!

When did you become evrything for me?

The only reason for all my glee...

So different, yet so endearing,

So unknown, yet so deeply known!!

when did this heart stop beating for me,

Agreeing to beat only for you...

When did my senses become so numb.

Getting alarmed only when close to me they found you!

Why did I let you into my heart?

Why did I let you get embedded in my soul?

Why did I become addicted to you?

Why it was just you who could make me whole?

I don't even know what i mean to you...

Yet the thought of losing you kills me within!

Though deep down my heart claims to know,

The four letter word still eludes me though!

Someone coming close to you-burnt me in jealousy,

Yet your words were enough to make me see my fallacy...

My trust on you was never shaken,

Its just the possessiveness that had spoken!

Yet how could you put my faith aside?

GHow could your ego put up a fight?

How could you just stand silently?

How could you let this relationship break violently?

Days passed you never called,

was that it? Was that all?

I was told its all over,

Yet waiting for you my eyes would hover!

When finally I saw you in front of my eyes,

What you spoke just jabbed my insides...

You questioned my trust, when you had lost yours,

YET STILL THIS HEART SCREAMS-I AM ALL YOURS!

Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Lovely part. Geet ka gussa is worth. Usko itni jaldi nahi manna chahiye. Thoda aur mehnat karne do Maan ko. Official dinner date. Wow, exciting.

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Beautiful part.
loved it.
geet has full right to angry on maan.
she is his would be wife and she has full right .
if maan forgot his anger and ego for some time and will explain those things then surely this problem will solved but maan and his ego and then he thinks may be geet will try.
geet tried hard but her family is real angry.
now all misunderstanding clear so hope no problem will arise.

maan want to manaofy her and geet already melted but her anger.
well loved it.
geet's papa jee said right, he is daughter's father his tension, worry for his daughter.
and the storm went .it's really difficult.

maan done a mistake by removing ring in his anger and now geet is hurt.

now maan has to manaofy his geet.
maan has to clear all her insecurity
maan has to make her understand that he loves her more than anything.
precap is interesting
continue soon.

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

superb!

maan really has to do something special to manofy his jaan!

continue soon!

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
Beautiful part.
loved it.
geet has full right to angry on maan.
she is his would be wife and she has full right .
if maan forgot his anger and ego for some time and will explain those things then surely this problem will solved but maan and his ego and then he thinks may be geet will try.
geet tried hard but her family is real angry.
now all misunderstanding clear so hope no problem will arise.

maan want to manaofy her and geet already melted but her anger.
well loved it.
geet's papa jee said right, he is daughter's father his tension, worry for his daughter.
and the storm went .it's really difficult.

maan done a mistake by removing ring in his anger and now geet is hurt.

now maan has to manaofy his geet.
maan has to clear all her insecurity
maan has to make her understand that he loves her more than anything.
precap is interesting
continue soon.

Yes, he needs to take away all her insecurities, but the question is, will he even understand/know her insecurities? Thats the problematic part!

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

awesoem update di
loved it...maan u better do something special to convince geet u really hurt her feelings and most importantly wear ur ring back
update soon