Maaneet OS: To Be Loved Updt Part 2 6/24 - Page 5

Originally posted by: -dia-

Beautiful OS ...GAWD I'm hell over in love with it ...FLAWLESS

yaar ...this is not at all done ...U r hell bend in making my Maan chef *pouting* ...

aawww shorry jaanu in WK he is not a chef ab happy?? 😉

U have Beautifully narrated the whole ambiance & settings which u have portrayed is Beautiful ...dreamy

😃

The way he proposed was Beautiful ...It was so simple yet it render his feelings for her

i am glad u liked the way he proposed i had no clue what i was writing but i couldnt use fancy words for i knew none 😆

aww ...their bonding is wonderful ...loved it ...but the fear in her made her to hurt him by saying his act as stupid.

U have Beautifully written down his pain & frustration when she walked out of him ...he had asked right question ...What's his mistake if he fall love with her??? & Whats her mistake when she can't break the shell she have build around her???

i dont know if u got it. the shell she was in n the talking shell had some significance. she was surrounded by her own shell n here was this girl telling abt a talking shell that solves problems 😉

Mirnalini Mama is so sweet ...she want Maan as her SIL ...Dw Mama ..appka khawaish pura hogaya ...aap kush hena ...but Madhu Y u made her dead???

i wanted geet to realize the importance of pain of separation 😭

Radhika-Geet encounter was lovely ...I guessed something like this ll come ...& I was right ...Poor little girl ...U made her die😭😭

shorry she was the turning point of the story. that how geet would really come out of her shell.

U know I loved that talking shell part ...U know I used to try it whenever I go to beach ...Do U like it???

of course i used to love doing it too 😉

The gift & the scrapbook ...nahi nahi ..Painting part was Beautiful ...finally Geet realized her feelings.

aww ...Maaneet married & the Kiss part was dreamy ...well I didn't blush ...but kuch kuch ...tum samaj rahe hena mein kya kehne ko koshi kar rahe ho😳

hmm i guess i was imagining it as though he was kissing me so i blushed 😳😆

I think last part can be considered as epilogue ...loved it ...lovely ...the same beach ..the same talking-shell ...wonderful!!!

aww ...second baby on the way ...lovely!!!

loved the whole package ...Brilliant ...Intense ...Beautiful OS!!!

thanks a lottt... this seriously means a lot to me

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09