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Posted: 19 years ago
cont as soon as u can plzzzzzzz
the parts are awesome make them together 😭 😭 😆
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Two days pass and angad and Kripa dont see each other. They wanted to but something stopped them....maybe it was hesitation or maybe it was fear, fear of loving each other so much that it would be hard for them to separate again.....after all, kripa was Prithvi's now. After her leg feels better, Kripa gets into her car and drives off to the cafe where she is supposed to meet prithvi for some coffee. While driving, she thought about Angad's visit to her house two days ago. Her mom was upset that Kripa still talked to Angad after he had left Kripa in a critical time. Her mom hated Angad now and it annoyed her that Kripa didnt see the harm in talking or working with Angad. She kept driving and then stopped at when the traffic light turned red. She looked around casually and suddenly something caught her eyes and she looked again at it. It was MANAV!! in his car. Kripa was shocked to see Manav back in bombay. When he broke off all relations with her, he told her that he was going to go back to New York and never come back again as he hated her a lot for not telling him that she was pregnant before their engagement.

When the lights turned green again, manav started driving. Kripa started her car and followed him. After a while, she saw him park his car in front of Prithvi's house. Kripa is in a shock about why Manav would go to Prithvi's house. Kripa gets suspicious and is hesitant about going inside. When she finally decides to go in, she sees Manav coming out so she hides in her car and he drives by. Kripa doesnt understand what is going on and she decides to find out in some way. She drives to the Cafe where Prithvi is supposed to meet her. She waits there for 30 minutes and Prithvi finally shows up and sits across the table from her.

P: i am so sorry kripa. i know im late...i m so sorry

K: kaha the tum? doing something important?

P: uh...ha woh main.....I was in a meeting with someone really important. my client from New York, Mr. Mittal.

Kripa knew he was lying. She knew he was talking to Manav but why didnt he say so to her.

K: ok. prithvi mein tumse kuch zaroori baat karna chahti hoon.

P: ha kaho....kya baat hai

K: prithvi...i was thinking....why are you marrying me?

P: what?

K: sach kaho prithvi

P: kripa...you know why

K: i just want to hear it from you Prithvi

P: because.....because I love you.....I love you a lot

K: how much?

P: kripa why are you doing this?

K: batao prithvi.....how much?

P: bohut....i cant even explain in words kripa. please

K: kya mere liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho?

P: yea i can

K: kuch bhi?

P: yes

K: aur agar iske liye tumhe kisi ka dil todna pade to?

P: kripa mein tumhe pane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu, kuch bhi!

This annoys Kripa. She knew that Prithvi really loved her but what made her angry was that Prithvi just wanted to "get" her.

K: to kya tum mere liye kuch karoge? jo mein mangu mujhe woh doge?

P: kuch bhi mang kar dekh lo kripa....kuch bhi

K: kya mein Angad ke saath London ja sakti hu?

P: what?

K: prithvi agle hafte aaliya ki engagement hai aur woh chahti hai ki main waha jau aur agar mein nahi gayi to Angad bhi nahi jayega. please prithvi i want to see aaliya happy

P: kripa aaliya meri bhi behen ki tara hai lekin tum angad ke saath.............

K: prithvi tumne mujhse kaha tha na ki tum mujhe woh sab kuch doge jo mein mangungi. to ab kya hua?

P: kripa mein........

K: to kya tum mujhse jhoot bol rahe the?

P: no! i mean. I dont mind lekin....I dont want Angad to hurt you again. thats all!

K: youre wrong prithvi....He has hhurt me so much taht he cant hurt me again. never again!

P: kripa.....do you really want to do this?

K: yes prithvi. i want to go there for Aaliya and Daadi....not for angad!

P(after a few seconds): okay. you can go. but you have to promise me something

K: what?

P: you will come back the next day, rite after the engagement!

K:ok. ill try my best. i promise

P: ok then. i guess you can go but........

K: dont you trust me?

P: oh no i do. its ok. i dont mind you going

K: thanks prithvi. i love you for this!

Kripa quickly gave a peck on Pritvi's cheek and drank her coffee

K(thinking): ok. now all i have to do is convince Angad to go to London. how can i do that?

coming up: does kripa convince Angad?

ok thats it for today. i know its short but i thought id rather rite short parts than write long parts in one day. so leave all your comments and encourage me to rite better

luv rani

griffy.fz thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 plz its long time now make them together 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
Amazing part! I rly hate prithvi! lol. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
u r doing a fantastic job, short or long parts!!! all i ask is, keep it up!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
fantastic part 😛 !! plz make them together 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovelyyyyyyyyy! i think everything is going to be ok now. i am looking forward to ur next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Angad wakes up and takes a shower. He makes himself a cup of coffee and sits by his window and reads the newspaper as he drinks the coffee. Suddenly the bell rings and he puts his coffee on the side table and gets up to open the door. He opens it and is surprised to see Kripa at the door.

A: kripa? what are you doing here?

K(really hyper and this surprises angad): Hey angad!

K: what? wont you ask me to come in?

A: uh...yea sure, come in

K:(smiles): thanks!

Kripa comes in and sits on the couch. Angad looks at her in shock, like it wasnt kripa. She smiles and gets up and goes to him

K: why are you so shocked?

A: nothing....tum achanak.......

K: kyon mein yaha nahi aa sakti?

A: oh no. aisi baat nahi hai lekin tum pehle kabhi mere ghar pe....without any reason...i mean........

K: but there is a reason!

A:(disappointed that kripa had to wait for a reason to come to his house) oh...what is it?

K: well. I was really bored so i thought that we should go watch a movie or something. wat say?

A: a movie? but why?

K: i told you angad. im bored.

A: but........ok i'll go change and then we can leave and do something (he says this in an unsure tone)

K: kool

Angad turns around to go and change but Kripa stops him

K: angad!!

Angad turns around

A: yea?

K: tumhare manner ko kya hua? mein itni der se yaha hu....tumne mujhe chai ya coffee ke liye poocha hi nahi

A: oh, im sorry. what do you want? tea, coffee, juice?

K: no, thank you. I'm not in the mood for anything

A: then why did you ask me for it?

K: I changed my mind

A(unsure and clueless): OK?

Angad turns around to leave and Kripa smiles in a naughty manner. After a while, Angad comes back to the living room and kripa ist there. he is shocked but then thinks that she might have "changed her mind" about going out too. He goes to his window and stands there. Then he realizes that his coffee was still there and he quickly picks it up.

A: oh god, yeh to thanda ho gaya. oh ****! ab mujhe aur ek banana padega.

Then suddenly he hears Kripa's voice behind him

K: dont worry angad!

Angad turns arounf to look at her. She is standing there with two mugs of coffee in her hands. Angad smiles unknowingly and so does Kripa.

K: here! coffee!

A: tumne banaya?

K(looking into his eyes): yea.....just for you!

Angad smiles and takes the coffee from her hand and tastes it. He smiled again and this time, his smile takes Kripa's breath away. She loved his smile. But when he smiled in that way, like he had just smiled, she couldnt stop herself. She moved closer to him and looked into his eyes.

K: do you like it?

A: yea, its beautiful

K:(smiles agian): i mean the coffee angad!

A(realizing this he smiled, embarrased): yea....its just as sweet as you!

Kripa and Angad smile and then Kripa moves closer to Angad and then whispers in his ears

K: i was thinking about you when I made it

Angad smiled again and was about to hug Kripa when she moved back.

K(hyper again): Angad hurry up! we are gonna be late for the afternoon show

A: do you really wanna go to watch a movie?

K: yea, why not?

A: uh....lets go somewhere else!

K: where?

A: hmmmm......just come with me!

Angad drinks his coffee and both of them get into his car and he drives off.

coming up: Where do Angad and Kripa go?

thats it for now. next part will be up tomorrow or wednesday

luv rani

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 kripaaa
greatttttttt jobbbbbbb
veryyyyyyy niceeeee
cont soooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
its very very very very very very very very very gooooood
😃 😃

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