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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx vandana for ur compliment.
i will post the next part tomorrow.

coming up: kripa nd angad meet
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its awesome please cont. soon!!!!!!!!!!
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PART 3

RECAP:
k: acha uska naam kya hai?
P: uska naam hai...ANGAD KHANNA
K: ANGAD KHANNA?

with this kripa turns her phone off and decides to go to the airport to pick up prithvi's best frnd. angad and prithvi hav been best frnds since they were little nd both lives in london. but 10 yrs ago, prithvi moved to india with his mom nd sis. but the frnds still kept contact. 3 yrs ago prithvi had moved to kripa's neighborhood. This is how they had met and became a couple 2 yrs ago.

Next day:
Kripa wakes up early just to pick upprithvi's frnd. she was angry at prithvi for making her get up so early. moreover she was annoyed with this ANGAD who was causing her so much trouble.

K: iss prithvi ke dost ke liye mujhe jaldi uthna pd raha hai. kaash won nahin aatha.
(mom:M)
M: kripa??? tum itni jaldi kaise utt gayi? ab tak to sirf six o'clock hua hai!
K: ha mom woh prithvi ka koi dost a raha hai, london se. to usne mujhe request kiya ke me usse pick karne jaoon. to issi liye itni jaldi uttna pad raha hai.
M: theek hai beta to tum kab nikal rahi ho?
K: bas das minute me. mom i relly don't want to go. its soo early.
But kripa's mom convinced her to go as it wud make prithvi happy. she reluctantly agreed.

At the airport:
kripa is standing with a board that says ANGAD KHANNA. she waits there for over 3 hrs. now she is really irritated as she was supposed to be at the college doing some concert preparations. Then u see someone approach kripa.nd he puts him hand on kripa's shoulder. kripa turns back in shock
(angad:A)

A: kripa?
K: haan par. tum angad ho?
A: haan me hi angad hu. angad khanna ( he holds out his hand to shake hers but kripa not paying attention is staring at his hazel brown eyes)
After a few secs, angad touches her again to shake her.
A: kripa!! kya hua?
K(realizing wat she was doing): oh nothing. chale...
A: okay

then kripa takes angad to her car nd he puts his luggage in her car. she drives off to prithvi's house to drop angad off. rite then prithvi calls.
K: ha prithvi bolo..mein drive kar rahi hu.
P: oh sorry kripa. im really sorry.. par
k: par kya?
p: woh me apni ghar ke keys mere neighbor ke saath chodna bhool gaya. to..
k: to kya?
p: kya tum angad ko ape ghar le ja sakti ho?
k: WHAT!!! (screaming and then realizing angad was next to her) uh prithvi tum jaante ho na ke aaj me bohut busy hu.
P: i know sweety par ab kya kare. just until i get back. plzz
K: ( annoyed) prithvi...to tum kab wapas a rahe ho?
p: ab tak to pata nahin. lekin shayad kuch waqt lag jaye. but dont worry mein apni puri koshish karunga jaldi aane ki.
k: theek hai prithvi. i'll talk to u later.
then kripa turns to angad nd gives him a smile felling a little awkward and embarrased abt the way she was talking to prithvi.
K: angad...woh.. prithvi ke ghar ke keys mere paas nahin he. to.. is it ok agar tume mere ghar par jana pade. only until prithvi gets back
A: oh ok. i dont mind. but i hope ur family doesnt mind.
k: ( thinking abt her parent's reaction) oh no its ok. my parents wudnt mind
A: ok then. lets go.
kripa turns around the car nd drives towards her home.wen they get there, she takes a deep breath thinking about wat her parents wud say.
k: Mom!!!! kaha he aap?
M: mein yaha hoon beta. y r u screaming?
( kripas mom is shocked to see a stranger in her living room but realizes that it must be prithvi's frnd)
M: tum? tum prithvi ke dost ho na?
A: yeah aunty. im Angad.
M: ya i thought it wud be you.
K: mom can i talk to u abt something?
M: ya sure beta. angad plzz make urself comfortable.
then kripa nd her mom go to the kitchen.

m: beta yeh yaha kya kar raha hai? isse to prithvi ke ghar hona chahiye na?
kripa explains everything to her mother.
m: oh ok. theek hai to he can stay here unti prithvi gets back.
with this they go back to the living room where angad is sitting, wondering where kripa nd her mom went. just then they come out.nd angad gets up
M: oh beta baitho naa. feel at home.
then her mom goes to get some food for angad and she makes everything he likes for lunch. kripa's annoyance increases cuz everything he likes to eat is everything she hates. then to avoid eating that, she decides to go to college.
K: mom me college ja rahi hoon. abhi bhi bohut kam baaki hai concert ke liye. ( To angad) i'll talk to you later. i hav to go now. okay bye angad. bye mom
Just wen she is abt to leave, her mom stops her.
M: kripa! ruko. tum aise kaise ja sakti ho. angad ghar pe baithe baithe bore ho jayega.
K: lekin mom...
m: acha ek kam karo, tum angad to bhi lekar jao. issi bahane woh tumhara aur prithvi ka college bhi dekhlega. kyon angad?
A: ha.. woh..i dont mind iif kripa doesnt.
kripa wanted to say no but she new she cudnt.
k: ya sure. i dont mind. sure come lon lets go. im late already.
Then kripa nd angad leave in her car. on theri way she feels as if angad is staring at her ( angad wasnt staring at her. he was just looking out of her window to see the scenary) and this annoys kripa even more and she tries to break the ice.
k: so..tumhe india kaisa laga?
A: oh. bohut acha hai. very beautiful. were u born here?
k: me? yeah i was born here. i hav lived her all my life.nd u u lived in london all ur life?
Kripa and angad start talking abt their lives and get to know each other more. angad starts talking to her with interest but kripa is only taking to angad cuz she has to.
Then the car arrives at the college and kripa and angad get out together.
Everyone in the college is staring at them and wondering y kripa is never with prithvi nemore. they start making assumptions that they probably broke up or something.

A-K are walking nd she slips so angad tries to get a hold of her and she falls in his arms. their eyes meet and kripa starts staring at his gorgeous eyes again and angad is looking at the hair on her pretty face. just then anita comes along.
anita: an
an: KRIPA!!!
kripa and angad come oout of their trance nd realize that they were staring at each other for more than 30 seconds. there is this awkward moment between them.
an: Kripa..yeh ( looking at angad and thinking abt how cute he is)
K: woh anita.. yeh prithvi ka dost hai, angad.
an: prithvi ka dost? lekin prithvi kaha hai? kya tumne phir se uske saath jhagda kiya? maine tumse kaha tha na kripa. prithvi ke saath jhagda math kar lekin tum ...
K:[interrupting anita] anita woh concert ki tayaari kaise chal raha hai? everything ok with the backstage problem we had?
an: yeah everything is fine. but there is something i need to tell you. come with me.
Both of them leave and angad follows them. he notices all the girls staring at him. afterall, he is the hottest guy they hav ever seen. kripa notices this too and is annoyed but does not react.
After she finishes all her work, it already 3 in the afternoon. she is very hungry and cant wait for the drive back home coz it will take her 30 more minutes.
but she also doesnt want to go to a restaurant with angad. so before she can avoid the topic of food and get into the car, angad breaks the ice .
A: kripa.. woh mein soch raha ki.. its 3 already. im a little hungry. woh plane ka khana itna acha nahin tha. so..
K: ya ok we will go home rite away.
A: home? its far away from here. how bout we eat at a restaurant or something. if its okay wid u.
Angad said it in such a sweet way that she had to say yes. they got in the car nd drove to a restaurant near by. On the way kripa was thinking..
k ( thinking): y did i say yes to him. if prithvi had asked me nd i dint want to go, i wud say no. then y did i say yes to him? I..
her thoughts were interrupted by angad
A: to yeh concert kya hai?
K: oh its the annual spring concert of out college. its a really big affair. everyone goes to it. nd i hav the responsibilty of setting it up coz im the class president.
A: oh really. i'm sure it will be fun since u r organizing it.
K: ( she gives him a smile) oh thnk u.
When angad see this smile, he is completely taken over. he thinks about how pretty she looks wen she smiles. but brushes off his thoguhts thinking that she is prithvi's gf.
A: uh.. kripa.. can i ask u something?
k: ya sure
A: can i come to the concert. i really want to see this. plzz
K: yeah. i dont see y not. sure u can come.
suddenly kripa just thought abt wat she said. no one from outside college was allowed in to the spring concert unless they were someone else's date. now she regretted abt saying yes to angad.
K:(thinking) oh god y did i say yes? now i hav to find him a date.
Then they reach the restaurant. it is kripa and prithvi's fav. restaurant nd everyone knows them there - the owner, the waiters and waitresses- everyone. so while they r sitting nd eating, everyone is looking at them. and wondering why kripa is with another man.
since it is the first time that kripa has showed up with a different man nd not prithvi, everyone starts talking abt a possible break-up between kripa nd prithvi but kripa nd angad r not aware of this attention they r getting.

Coming up: the spring concert

ok thats it for today. i hope u guys like it. plzz leave comments


Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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can u continue more cuz it's gr88888888 😃 😃
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im happy u liked it. im still thinking abt the nxt part. so ill post it later
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PART 4

recap: everyone in the city see kripa nd angad together and assume that she has broken up with prithvi. everyone starts talking abt them but kripa nd angad dont realize this attention.

Scene 1:
After eating at the restaurant, kripa nd angad leave for kripa's house. its 5:30 already and both of them r really tired. they reach her house:
K: Mom!! where r u?
no one answers
K: arre yeh mom aur dad kaha gaye?
She finds a note one the table from her parents saying that they had to go to a frnds house for a party and will be home really late.
Actually kripa's mom dint want to go to the party as kripa wud be alone with angad. but her dad had convinved her that kripa is old enough to take care of herself and that they trusted angad as he is prithvi's frnd.

k: angad..woh i think mom nd dad aaj raat bohut late ayenge.
A: oh ok. i'll go change now. where is my luggage?
K: oh. me tumhe tumhara dikha deti hu.
Kripa leads angad to the guest room that is rite next to hers.
K: acha tum change karlo. tab tak mein coffee banati hoon.
A: ok thnx.
kripa is abt to leave wen angad stops her and she turns around.
A: kripa...woh i just wanted to say..thnx
K: thnx? for wat?
A: woh prithvi ke wajah se tume mujhe jhelna pad raha hai. to...
K: its ok angad. i dont mind. tumhare liye.. i mean prithvi ke liye main itna to kar sakti hoon. i'll wait for u downstairs in the kitchen okay? bye
As she left, angad stared at her. he was beginning to like her presence.

In the Kitchen: kripa is making coffee wen she hears angad's foot steps. She turns around.
k: oh angad. yeh lo maine tumhare liye thodi coffee bnaya hai. i hope u like it.
A: (tastes the coffee) oh wow..kripa tum coffee bohut acha bana leti ho. surprizing.
k: surprizing? y is it so surprizing? kyon me coffee nahi bana sakti kya?
A: nahin woh mein...
k:(annoyed) u dont need to reply angad..i understand wat u mean.
She leaves the kitchen a little annoyed.
A: (thinking) I'm sorry kripa. anjane mein maine tumhe hurt kiya. I really dint mean to. mein to bus...
After a while he decides to go apologize to kripa but he is not sure whether he should go to her room.But then he finally makes up his mind to go to her room.
Angad knocks on the door but kripa doesnt answer.

A:(knocking) kripa? kripa? r u still angry. i'm sorry. mein tumhe hurt nahin karna chahta tha.
since she doesnt open the door, he decides to go in himslef. When he goes in, kripa is not there.
a: kripa?
Then suddenly kripa walks out of the shower in only a towel. kripa does not notice angad in the room as he is still near the door.
then she turns around to see angad there nd screams.
k: ANGAD !!! tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
A (a little awkward but not really reacting): kripa woh me maafi mangne aaya tha.
K: angad just get out. mein yaha...just get out angad.
A: gosh, kripa. mein to sirf sorry kehne aaya tha...aur tum.
then kripa gets really angry that he wont leave so she puches him out of her room.
A: kripa..kripa..kr
The closes the door on his face. By this time she is so angry nd embarrased that she doesnt come out of her room until 9 o'clock.
At 9, she slowly comes downstairs hoping angad wont be there.But he is still there.
she is really hungry and is gettin some food out of her refrigerator. angad sees her.
A: kripa?
k: (turns back in shock but is still angry at A): tum? abhi bhi jaag rahe ho? dont u ever get tired?
A: Nahin woh mujhe bohut bhook lag raha he. to maine socha kuch khane ke liye...
K: theek hai theek hai. i'll heat some food for u.
When kripa opens the fridge all she sees is the food her mom made for angad. the same food she hates. She gets even more annoyed but doesnt want to make a scene. She takes the food out nd heats it up for angad. she serves it on a plate for him and puts it on the dining table nd leaves to watch some TV.but angad stops her.
A: kripa..yeh kya tum nahin khaogi? tumhe bhook nahin hai?
Kripa doesnt want to tell him that she hates that food so she gets out a plate for herself and starts eating.
a: kripa..i'm really sorry abt earlier. i dint want to hurt u.
K: (thinking about how seet he was to apologize): its okay angad. woh mujhe acha nahi lagta agar koi mere room koi aye.
a: room? i was talking about the coffee.
k: wat? maine socha tum mere room...Angad!!!
A: (doesnt realize y she is still mad at him) wat now? tum har baat par ghussa kyon karti ho? shayad issi lie prithvi uss din..
k: uss din..uss din kya? prithvi ne tumse kya kaha?
A (realizing he shud not hav said that): nahin kuch nahi.
saying this he leaves to go to his room.
Kripa is now very angry at angad and prithvi. she knew prithvi wud hav told angad something bout her. she storms into her room and bangs her dooor angad hears this as his room is rite next to hers.
A(thinking and laughing): prithvi was rite. 😆

Kripa is in her room trying to cool down a bit wen she gets phone call from prithvi.
seeing his call, she gets even more furious.

K: prithvi!! tum mujhe baat hi mat karna.
P: kripa?? yeh tumhe kya hua.
K: mujhe? yeh tum pooch rahe ho.. woh angad ne
P: angad ne? angad ne kya kaha?
K: ussi se ppoch lo na. mujhe to usne kuch nahin bataya.
P: lekin kripa... tum usse phone do.

kripa opens her door nd knocks on angad's door really hard.angad opens the door.
K: yeh lo tumhare liye. ( she hands him the phone)
A: hello? hi prithvi.. hold on for a sec. acha kripa mein tumse kal subha baat karoonga. okay?
With this he closes the door on kripa's face nd this makes her even more angry.
k:(thinking) ANGAD KHANNA MEIN TUMHE KAL DEKHOONGI!!!

next morning:
kripa's cell phone alarm is ringing and the phone is still in angad's room.kripa hears her alarm but it wont stop so she goes nd knowck on angad's door really hard.
K: ANGAD!!!!!
she screams so loud that angad comes out.
A (in a sleepy voice):kripa? tum itni subhe yaha kya kar rahi ho?
K: tumhare paas mera phone hai.
A: oh. ek minue
he hands her the phone nd before she can say anything he closes the door on her. this aggravetes kripa even more.
K [thinking]: uuggghhhh!!! angad!!!!

While kripa is getting ready for breakfast, her cell phone rings again.she picks it up without looking at the number.
K: hello?
p: how is my jaan doing this morning?
K:(in a dry tone) prithvi? im fine bolo kya kaam hai?
p: ab tumhe kya hua?
k: mujhe kya hua?
P: kripa plzz. angad kal mazak kar raha tha. maine usse kuch nahi kaha tumhare bare me. woh bus..
k: whatever prithvi. i dont care. tum kab a rahe ho is angad ko yaha se le jane ke liye?
P:ab tak theek se pata nahin. shayad agle hafte.
K: next week? lekin prithvi next week to concert hain. tum usse pehle to ajaoge na?
P: ya kripa. i come before the concert. oh ya angad told me woh bhi a raha hai. did u find a date for him?
k: nahin ab tak to nahin. waise bhi uske sath kaun jana chahega.
P: come on kripa..he's not that bad. ok i'll call u later. i'm recieving another call. ok bye jaan.
K: prithvi suno...
before she can complete, he hangs up.
K: (thinking): tum hamesha aisa kyon karte ho prithvi? kabhi mere dil ki baat janne ki koshish hi nahin ki.

ok guys thats it for now. i know is kinda slow but i'll try to make it up in the next part.

coming up: THE SPRING CONCERT ( for real this time)
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wow u r story is amazing 👏 👏 👏
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thnx guys for the encouragement. this is the next part.

PART 5:
It's breakfast time and kripa goes downstairs hoping that her parents are there so she will not be alone with angad again. she is delighted to see her parents. She goes nd hugs her mom.
k: Mom!!!!!!
M: arre kripa. aaj tumhe kya hua. tabyat to theek hai na? aaj apni mom par itna pyar kyun tapak pada?
k: come on mom! u know i luv u.
M: acha theek hai theek hai. ha woh angad kaha hai? maine uske liye special...
k: (interrupts): Angad? angad yeh angad woh. bas ho gaya angad ke bare me.
M: arre..lekin kripa woh prithvi ka dost hai...
(Dad:D)
D: ha kripa. prithvi ka dost tumhara dost hua na. uske khushi ke liye to tum yeh sab kar rahi ho.
k: (thinking): prithvi aur angad ke siva in ke paas aur koi topic nahin he kya? hamesha prithvi! prithvi! kya meri marzi ka koi importance nahin hain? mein to...
Kripa's thoughts are interrupted by her mom.
M: arre angad. ao beta. sit. i made something special for you.
A: oh thnx aunty.
everyone starts eating their breakfast and then angad starts speaking to kripa.
a: to kripa, tumhari aur prithvi ki shaadi kab ho rahi hai?
k:(giving him a fake smile): kyon? prithvi ne nahin bataya tumhe? maine to socha tha ke tum uske best frnd ho aur woh tumse koi baat nahin chupata.
A: nahi mein to sirf aise hi pooch raha tha..
rite then krip's phone rings and its prithvi.
K: hello? ha prithvi bolo..
P: hey kripa. woh mere paas zyada time nahin hai lekin me tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon.
K: ab kya hai?
P: woh kripa....shayad mein concert ke liye nahin aa paunga. I hav a lot of work. woh mom ke absence mein yahan..
K:(interrupting): wat? prithvi tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho. I will look so bad if the most popular girl in the college has no date. u r coming to the concert and thats it!
P: i'm really sorry jaan. but...
k: prithvi agar tum nahi aao ge to mein bhi nahi jaoongi. nd u know how much i want to go. its a tradition for every class president to start the concert with a welcome speech.
P: but kripa...oh i hav an idea !!
prithvi says this with soo much excitement that kripa gets scared of wat whacky idea he will come up with.
P: why not....you go with angad?
K: (screaming on top of her lungs): WHAT?????????
at this point everone is staring at kripa.realizing this, she changes her tone.
K: (giving a fake smile): uh..woh prithvi tum kaise bate kar rahe ho ha? tum bhi na kabhi kabhi mujhe itna hasate ho.(laughing fake)
P: nahi kripa. I'm serious. if i wont be there. i dont want u to miss this chance. so go with angad. plzz
K: plzz prithvi u know...
P: i know wat u are thinking. i dont mind kripa. he's my best frnd. i trust him.
k: lekin prithvi..
p: kripa plzz u hav to go . i wont let this pass u by.
K: i'll think abt it. but u try to come as soon as possible.okay?
P: but kripa...okay i'll try.hey i'll talk to u later. i really hav to go.
K: prithvi..
Ha hangs up. but she is really awkward as angad was sitting rite next to her. she was thinking.
K(thinking): wat if angad heard him. oh this is soo embarassing. i..
M:(interrupting) kripa kya hua. tum itni jor se chilla kyon rahi thi. kya hua?
k: nahi woh mom...prithvi cant make it to the concert
M: kya? to ab kya karogi? just go alone.
K: nahi mom. kaisa lagega agar mein hi akeli chali gayi to? plzz excuse me, i hav to make a call.
She was lying. she just needed some time alone. she went to her room and started thinking. did she really want to go eith angad? her head said NOOO!!!. but her heart didnt know. she was confused.
K: wat if i HAVE to go with him. how will i ask him? will he say no? oh god!!! yeh prithvi mere saath hamesha yeh kyon karta hei? kya meri khushi uske liye koi mayne nahi rakti...
Then there is a knock on the door.
K(thinking): ab kaun hai? ( she opens the door)
k:(politely) ANGAD? tum?
A: are u okay? u sounded pretty upset downstairs.
K: ya im okay...its just... yeh prithvi hamesha mere saath..anyway im fine..thnx for the concern.
A: okay. i was just checking. i'll talk to you later.
Angad leaves nd kripa closes the door again.
K: maybe i shud ask him.....No kripa u cant ask him. u hav never asked a guy out before. so y now? But...the concert..maybe..NO i shudnt ask him!
With this thought kripa gets ready to go to college for some other preparations for the concert.
k: ok dad, im leaving for college. i got some work to do. k bye mom bye dad.
A: kripa! (kripa turns around)..wont say bye to me?
K: angad woh...i mean...BYE 😊
A: kripa!...can i come along? i mean..if u dont mind?
K: woh angad...u know wat its okay u can come.
Angad graps his leather jacket and they leave in kripa's car.
On their way, they dont say anything to each other. kripa is still hurt by prithvi actions. how cud he just ask her to go with angad? did he even care about how she felt? was she even important to him?
Then they arive at the college. There isnt a big crowd as it is saturday. but there are still quite a few ppl.
Kripa stops the car in her usual parking spot and takes a deep breath still thinking abt herself, prithvi, and their relationship. she is almost abt to cry but she holds her tears in. Angad notices that something is wrong and asks her.
A: kripa..is everything really okay? or were u lying to me?
k: no angad.. woh everything is alrite. I mean prithvi n me...(she starts crying a little)
A: hey kripa!..wats rong. come on u can tell me
while saying this, he moves near her and kinda hugs her a little without both of them noticing it.
She started crying like a baby in his arms. she felt a little relief in those tears.
A: kripa, wat rong? plzz tell me.
k: angad.. woh prithvi. i dont know y he always does this to me? mere dil ki baat bina jane woh apna decision mujh par...i dont know wat to do. I...mein (starts crying more)
A: mein kya? plzz say wat u were trying to say. tell me kripa. i wont let you push me away this time.
K:I...i used to think i luved him. but not nemore.I...
dont know if i want to be with him. 😭 😭
A: lekin kripa...prithvi really loves u..usne khud mujhse kaha ki...kripa
k: plzz angad..mein..usse shayad tumse zyada jaanti hoon. i know he doesnt care about how i feel.
A: no kripa...ab jane do. Lets finish wat u hav to do. n then we will go eat somewhere. okay?
k: angad..par (she decides to give in).theek hai. we'll go for coffee later. (she wipes her tears)
A: thts like a gud girl!!! (he unconciously hugs her and she hugs him back)
At this point, everyone in the college is looking at them hugging each other. Now their doubts have turned into a belief that kripa did indeed break up with prithvi to go out with this new guy.

coming up: will kripa go with angad? or will prithvi be back before that?

thats it for today. plzz leave ne comments. it really helps and gives me a boost of confidence. 😊 😆
Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
RECAP: kripa is very upset that prithvi keeps ignoring her. Angad consoles her and they hug unconciously.

Part 6:
Scene 1:
Angad nd kripa go for coffee after kripa finishes doing work.they get their coffee.
A: feel better?
K: yeah.. thnx angad. tumne jo kuch bhi kiya. thnx.
A: maine? no kripa, i was talking abt the coffee. waise bhi, frnd mein no thnx. okay?
k: okay. sorry
A: hey. no sorry either.!!!
K: oh ok. sorry. i mean... 😊
They both laugh and have a good time.then angad looks at kripa nd how pretty she looks while she is laughing.
K: kya dekh rahe ho?
A: oh nahi kuch nahin aise hi..
A: to kripa..how is everything with the spring concert?
suddenly kripa remembers that prithvi wont be coming and that means she wont be able to go.
A: kripa?? kya hua?
k: everything is gud. but i dont think i will be able to go. i mean prithvi..woh nahin aane wala.
A:kripa... dont worry usne kaha he na ki woh aane ki koshish karega. and then u can go with someone else rite?
k: lekin..prithvi is my bf. agar mein uske saath nahin gayi to log kya sochenge? no i hav to go with prithvi.
A: lekin kripa...u know what forget this topic for today. just come with me. okay? promise me u will come with me.
k: lekin angad...
a: kripa plzz
K: okay angad i promise.
angad paid the bill and grabbed her hand and lead her to the car. he said that he will drive and he got in the drivers seat. He drove until he got to this beach.
k: wow angad...this beach is beautiful.lekin tumhe yaha ka rasta? how did u know the way?
A: woh kripa...last nite..jab tum mujhse naraz thi to mein yaha aaya tha. i'm sorry maine tumhara car tumse bina pooche liya.
k: wat? tum yaha akele aye the? agar tumhe kuch ho jata to? i mean..tum yaha pe new ho. aur...
A: relax kripa. just relax. mujhe kuch nahin hua. im fine
k:(suddenly realizes how weird she was acting): ya u r fine. ur rite.(she turns around)
A: kripa? r u okay? abhi bhi prithvi ke bare me soch rahi ho? u promised me..
k: no. mein prithvi ke bare mein nahi soch rahi thi. forget it.
A: acha to....
They start talking and fooling around. they hav a lot of fun. when agad is talking to kripa, she notices how much fun she was having. she never had so much fun with prithvi. She started noticing how good looking angad was and his eyes were so pretty. but suddenly she felt really weird and brushed off her feelings when she remembered prithvi. she never loves him but she dint want to hurt him.
A: aur phir..kripa? tum sun nahi rahi ho?
K: no angad i was listening. woh mein bas aise hi.
A:(puts his arm around her shoulder): dekho kripa..i know u really luv prithvi lekin tumhe yeh accept karna padega ki everything is not perfect.u just hav to live with it.
K(thinking): angad tumhe yeh nahi pata ki mein prithvi se nahin tumse....

Coming up: complete kripa's sentence.

luv u guys for all the comments. plzz keep leaving more. thnx


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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
k guys since i hav the time, i will continue with the next part.
recap:
K: angad tume yeh nahi pata ki me prithvi se nahi tumse...
PART 7:
kripa's thoughts are interrupted by angad.
A: kripa...I'll be back in a minute. just wait here. okay?
k: ok. (she was wondering where angad went when he came back)
A: ok kripa..close your eyes, i have to give you something.
K: angad yeh sab...
A: kripa plzzz
kripa closes her eyes and angad comes closer to her. she feels him and quickly opens her eyes and is surprised to see....
K: angad!! oh my god this is soo cute.
Angad hands a cute puppy in her hand.
A: i knew you would like it. tumhari mom ne nujhse kaha ki tumhe puppies bohut pasand hai. to isi liye maine yeh tumhare liye laya.
K: oh angad. thank you soooo much. (she gives angad a very big hug and he hugs her back)(at this moment, someone takes a pic of them)
A:Kripa.. tum is puppy ka naam kya rakogi?
K: hmmmmmm........
A: how about sunshine?
K: sunshine?
A: yeah look..(he points to the sunset at the horizon)
It is the most beautiful site that kripa has ever see.
k: oh angad....this is soooo...(she starts crying)
A: hey kripa...whats wrong?
K:its ...its just that ...no one has ever done sooo much for me...as much as you hav. Thnk you.
A: kripa maine kaha na no thnx nd no sorry
She gives him a big smile and a big hug.He hugs her back and gives her a kiss on her forehead.
K: (thinking) this is the most wonderful feeling in the world.
A: (thinking): why am i feeling so...vulnerable to her?
After a while, they part. Then they decide to eat some ice cream. accidentally, some of the ice cream gets on kripa's cheek. angad slowly wipes the ice cream with his thumb and she gives him a huge smile. this makes angad wonder why is he getting so close to kripa even though she is his best frnd's gf.

Next day:
At kripa's house, kripa and angad are still sleeping.
Kripa wakes up and realizes it is 10:30 already.she has to get to the college in an hour.
She hurries up and gets ready. She goes to her car forgetting that angad is still sleeping. she drives off and angad is left alone in the house as her parents are away for the weekend again.
About an hour later, angad wakes up to see no one in the house. suddenly a phone rings. he realizes that kripa forgot her cell phone. he picks it up
A: hello?
P: hello? angad? this is prithvi
A:(in a sleepy voice): pritvi? oh hi. how u doin buddy?
P: i'm fine. but r u ok? tum itne tired kyon sound kar rahe ho?
A: tired..oh no woh mein kal raat late aaya tha kripa ke saath.
P: late? kripa ke saath? tum dono kya kar rahe the?
A: nahin aise kuch nahi. bas woh kuch spring concert ke preparations the to hum....
P: oh ya the spring concert..i dont think i can make it yaar. lekin i want kripa to go. woh mere bina nahi jaayegi. maine usse kaha tha ki angad...
a: angad? angad kya?
P: ki who tumhare saath chali jaaye but i think she wont go with you. she wants to go with me.
A: oh? ya i dont think woh mere saath jayegi. i mean..she loves you too much.
P: loves me? i wish that was right!
A: hey wat do u mean?
P: nope...i dont think she loves me. she never cared about my needs. its always about her you see.
prithvi started complaining about kripa and angad was getting annoyed b/c he knew it wasnt kripa who dint love him, it was prithvi that was the jerk. how could someone talk bad about someone they love? After a while, angad told prithvi that he had to go and hung up. The real deal was that he cud not hear nething bad about kripa nemore.

Next scene:
Kripa comes back home a little earlier than usual. She opens the door to see angad nowhere. so she goes to his room. She opens his door to see angad sleeping. He seemed so peaceful. She went over to him and looked at him for a few seconds. she could not resist and she brushed his hair with her fingers. This woke him up.
A: kripa? tum itni jaldi? maine socha tumhe kuch der ho jayegi. so i fell asleep.
K: ya. im really sorry for leaving you alone. it must have been boring rite? when u have no one to talk to?
This made him remember his conversation with prithvi. He dint want to tell her and hurt her feelings so he decided not to tell her.
A: ha..i mean no. i was fine.
K: ok so lets have some lunch. i havent even eaten breakfast.
A: k lets go.
They go to the kitchen and find nothing in the fridge.
K: oh man!! nothing here. ab kya kare? i cant cook.
A: hmmmmm....i hav an idea. you go outside, i'll fix something.okay?
k: what? Mr. Angad Khanna will cook. stop joking. lets order pizza.
A: no. kripa just go to the living room. okay? u trust me rite?
K: yes angad i trust you. more than myself
This made angad feel his heart skip a beat. how did she trust him soo much. after just 3 days of friendship? She hadnt started trusting prithvi until a year after they had met.
A: okay so wait outside
Kripa went outside and angad started doing his work.
After 20 minutes, angad came from behind kripa and closed her eyes with his palm.
A: okay now dont open your eyes b4 i tell you okay?
K: angad.. lekin...fine.okay.
she closes her eyes and angad brings a tray with a dish that looks delicious.
a: okay open you eyes.
kripa opens her eyes and there is a sparkle in her eyes.
k: wooow!!! Mr. Angad Khanna. you cooked this?
A: I think so.
K: wow. when did u learn how to cook?
A:lets just call it special skills.
Kripa gives him a big smile and takes a bite.
K: hmmmmmmmmm. great food.
A: thnx.
K: angad..can i ask you something?
A: ya sure wat?
K: can u umm..teach me how to cook plzz?
Angad gives her a big smile.
A: ofcourse i can.
So after eating, they decide to make some dinner together.
They go to the kitchen and kripa is clueless about cooking. angad seems to be amused by this.
While making some rotis, kripa doesnt know how to make the dough, so she makes a big mess. Angad, laughing, tells her that he will teach her. he hold her hands and teaches her to make the dough. while teaching her, he starts looking into her eyes. They stare at each other for quite a while and then...
Kripa puts the half-done dough on angad's face. he is taken by surprise and then he puts some dough on her face too. They start having a food fight in the kitchen and end up chasing each other to the bathroom. Kripa takes the water pipe and starts spraying water on him. he pushes her into the tub and starts filling it up with water. nd then he starts tickling her and in the process, he falls in the tub on her. suddenly he looks at her wet face and hair. he looks into her eyes with so much passion that it draws kripa into it. He come closer to her and....

k guys. i hope this will make you guys wonder wat will happen next. so keep reading and posting comments.
😊 😃

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